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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Ahem... Ahem... Ahem... *M still searching for words!!!* some readings are being very-very intensly written... Hello-Hello!!! Ana baji... Whatta Update!

hey hey aazeen...hahaha
intensly written😉...well someone asked me to feel more romance while writing SR...🤣


Ok-ok... Isse pehle u pick up ur high heel sandal to marofy me, I'll come to give a straight review...!

Ok, there was so much fun irritating Ashu, not able to see his wife-to-be's face... Oh! I actually love to be on Aditi, Shy n Anji's side here... How all these girls manipulated Smriti out of it... Ashu must have looked super cute huh!

haha...ashu was puppy faced...but girls didn't back out...
I am whats th fun in giving in😉😆😆


Ok so, the wedding is done... Ashni are declared Husband n Wife... * SR likhne ki jaldi mein Wedding ko jaldi nipta diya huh!*

Yaar...wedding ko tau main skip he kar rahi thi...but ashu ka tarapna dikhana tha tau likha
warna ye full update just SR pe base thi🤣


Awww... This Rukhsat part is really heart rending... She missed her father, was like but obvious...

Father ko miss tau karna tha na...akhir it was the most special day of her life😭

N hehe... They booked a hotel room for the night stay... *kyu they would have been disturbing others at home? :D * ... Anyways... But one sweet thing to mention, before I write any further... U've mentioned Ananya saying a good bye to her parents before they left for their places, was commendable n very thotful... U don't miss their daughter's place in their lives... Very nice...

haha...nahin...ghar pe hotay tau maine unhain phr backyard main bhejna tha for SR...but smriti, bi n ananya k hotay howay, wo thora awkward lagta na😆😉...tau hotel bhej diya...
ye question agay uthna hai k ye ghar pe kyun nahi...haha..then u will get ur answer
n defo, ananya is not to be missed...many of my friends are ananya diwani rather then the leads🤣😳


Now finally the SR part... * Ahem-Ahem... Do I need to say how it was* ;) ... Really passionate, intimate n romantic the update was... Totally breath thing... Ehmmm... Ashuji ki fantasies... Hehe..! So Ashuji ne apni biwi ko waist chain pehnai hai, Shadi ke nazrane ke taur par... Ooh!

ashu ji ki bohut fantasies hain...akhir itni dair apnay app ko rokay rakha...for the perfect moment...😉
yup, waist chain was the gift...😳


Chalo ji, I super enjoyed it... Thanx a ton dearie... It takes lots of ur time... I understand that... Behen plz keep continuing this, n write as soon as possible...

next part i hope next mil mill jaye ga app logon ko...

Aiyaa! More Romance coming up? HM? When-when-when? Jaldi update kar deiyo! Pileej...

Achha ji hum chalte h... Update asap...

Love ya...

luv ya too dear
and romance n HM coming soon
😉

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Posted: 12 years ago


thanku so much rajni dear😳😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aarundhati

Awesome...luved the entire chapter...Ashu has found a treasure i the form of Nidhi, the true meaning of her name...she makes Ashu feel complete...their coming together has culminated in such a beautiful relationship...luv the way your Ashu expresses his feelings to Nids , very often...Nids is such a beautiful soul yaar...both r lucky to have each other...!Thanks for a wonderful SR update...👍🏼



thanku aarun dear...
yup nidhi is his true soul mate...
the perfect partner he deserved...
am glad you loved this part...a lil awkward it was for me as for the first time, i used some words...that i always avoided...but as it was 22 chap...i thought, i need to make it more passionate..
hope i didn't went over board
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjani9

You have made your mark in all the scenes...Marriage, SR, Bidai...👏

I thought you will bring Ashu' first wife to the scene but you did not ...kind of relief...
Ananya watching her parents wedding and happy she is getting mother...
The SR is hot and your description of hotel room is detailed...we feel like we are watching it...
Ashu giving puppy look...😳



thanku so much dear...
am glad u liked this part yaar
ashu wife is not back yet...but she is comin back...😉
ewww...i hope i didn't make u watch something over-rated😆😆😉
awww...ashu's puppy look is adorable to see...isn't it😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi, read the chap yesterday...super duper update...busy now...will give detailed review in a day or two
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Posted: 12 years ago
sorry dear , i don' know how i missed it...but any way it made my Sunday.
it was awesome hot sr...now HM ...oh i am waiting...pl don't make us wait long.
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Posted: 12 years ago


thanku so much dear...
am glad u liked this part yaar
ashu wife is not back yet...but she is comin back...😉
ewww...i hope i didn't make u watch something over-rated😆😆😉
awww...ashu's puppy look is adorable to see...isn't it😛
Ashu's first wife is coming? Nooo...for the child? Then it is double Nooo
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Posted: 12 years ago
Excellent Update Ana di...thnxx for dis LOVE-ly nd love filled Update...i jus luvd Shai-anjie-aditi' prank..hehe
they made dulhe raja angry..lolzz
but Ashu' patience wrth it ol.. :)
nd i thot it was d SR update but yor cmmnt shows dat..derez so mch in d way..nd thnk u so mch for a Longgg Update...
thnk u thnk u :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Ana,

Sorry for commenting so late , I was vacationing...!!

Great update , loved both chapters 👏, very well written ...I really love the way you describe each and every expression of ashu and Nidhi's , you see i can clearly visualize them 😊.

And SR ..Gosh!! That was one hot update , it was like clear adrenal;in rush to my brain 😆😆. so hot and sizzling .

Waiting eagerly for ASHNI HM ...when is it coming ??
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Posted: 12 years ago
woohoo...kya SR hain anaji...loved the update 👏

but please increase the font size na please...padne mein aasani hogi...pretty please Ana!! 😳

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