Originally posted by: karajekar
hi ana
very different story ,really like this part no 5
feeling was perfectly mentioned ,the way you describe depress ashu point related to pass was good the way he keep himself away from his daughter ,because of his thinking that if he getting close to his love one will harm them i liked his point .
sonali
thanku so much sonali dear
glad you liked this change concept😃 ya, he felt reserved, he felt scared and he don't wanna a heart break anymore😕 lets just see how he get out from his shell