AshNi SS: BTOOMH!! Epilogue/Page 89 - Page 15

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: karajekar


hi ana

very different story ,really like this part no 5

feeling was perfectly mentioned ,the way you describe depress ashu point related to pass was good the way he keep himself away from his daughter ,because of his thinking that if he getting close to his love one will harm them i liked his point .



sonali



thanku so much sonali dear
glad you liked this change concept😃 ya, he felt reserved, he felt scared and he don't wanna a heart break anymore😕 lets just see how he get out from his shell
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hi,

Hope you are doing fine. Take care of your health. Thanks for the update, it was a nice one, Btw your story is not giving any scope for guessing. Keep Rocking and take care

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Poojapange

Hiii Ana di...
How r u?Hope u r well...dont worry about ur SS...when u will be feel good post it...ur last part was nice n emotional one...Hope in future parts Nidhi full filled all empty places of Ashu's life with happiness...
Till then take care...stay healthy...i'm waiting...



hey pooja
i m feeling fine...thanku so much for your concern dear😊...yup, Nidhi will make him see the different aspect of the world soon...just wait for it
thanku for liking and supporting😃

luv ya😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nandinidavid


Hi,

Hope you are doing fine. Take care of your health. Thanks for the update, it was a nice one, Btw your story is not giving any scope for guessing. Keep Rocking and take care



hey nandini...
thanku so much dear...i m feeling fine now😃
so its a nice thing na that you can't guess whats coming up...the suspence is better na
😆😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wonderful update ana,
I liked the way you told Ashu's past. Full of emotions and very touching. Ashu's expressions shown were fantastic.
Very beautifully written ,good work
Ashu's has lost faith in life, and has completely busied himself in work. He is even afraid to attach to his daughter.
Fear of losing his loved ones , is difficult to overcome.
Would love to see how Nidhi makes her place in his life.
Eagerly waiting for the next update, take your time
and take care of your health first.
Will wait patiently.
And thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Ana..how are you...hope your health is much better now..take care...Last two updates were just superb...Ashu being happy in his friend's happiness...flashing those sexy dimples of his...and Nidhi looking gaw gaw at him...and then again...Nidhi is surprised by his sexy and hawt looks...what a sight it would have been..Ashu sitting in his sleeveless vest with trousers..and looking all the way sexy and drool worthy...any girl would have fallen for him...and then comes the entry of Ashu's ex-wife...Must say, seriously a lot has happened with him in his life...everything went the wrong way...he suffered a huge emotional setback..lost his dear Riya...his wife left him..his mother even left him all alone...Earlier I was confused why Ashu hadnt touched his daughter from the last 7 months...but this confusion got cleared in the last part...Good that Ashu's friends and Samya Bi are there to support him..otherwise God knows how he would have handled himself all alone...Now, waiting for some intimate scenes between Ashu-Nidhi..bit mushy mushy update...eagerly waiting for the next update..post soon...keep up the good job.awesome update..!!
Edited by DikshaBaluja - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Blushsarika

Wonderful update ana,
I liked the way you told Ashu's past. Full of emotions and very touching. Ashu's expressions shown were fantastic.
Very beautifully written ,good work
Ashu's has lost faith in life, and has completely busied himself in work. He is even afraid to attach to his daughter.
Fear of losing his loved ones , is difficult to overcome.
Would love to see how Nidhi makes her place in his life.
Eagerly waiting for the next update, take your time
and take care of your health first.
Will wait patiently.
And thanks for the pm



thanku so much sarika🤗
i m glad you feel that was a good part...though i think i could have done much better than i have wrote😕
Ashu is torn due to his past...and now, all in all he have ananya he could call his own other than Bi and his friends and he so not wanna loose them...
i will be bored if i just take rest...will try to write and update as soon as i can...
luv ya
ana😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: DikshaBaluja

Hey Ana..how are you...hope your health is much better now..take care...Last two updates were just superb...Ashu being happy in his friend's happiness...flashing those sexy dimples of his...and Nidhi looking gaw gaw at him...and then again...Nidhi is surprised by his sexy and hawt looks...what a sight it would have been..Ashu sitting in his sleeveless vest with trousers..and looking all the way sexy and drool worthy...any girl would have fallen for him...and then comes the entry of Ashu's ex-wife...Must say, seriously a lot has happened with him in his life...everything went the wrong way...he suffered a huge emotional setback..lost his dear Riya...his wife left him..his mother even left him all alone...Earlier I was confused why Ashu hadnt touched his daughter from the last 7 months...but this confusion got cleared in the last part...Good that Ashu's friends and Samya Bi are there to support him..otherwise God knows how he would have handled himself all alone...Now, waiting for some intimate scenes between Ashu-Nidhi..bit mushy mushy update...eagerly waiting for the next update..post soon...keep up the good job.awesome update..!!



hey diksha...
yes i m fine now yara...😃 thanku for the concern dear..
so glad you liked the last two updates...Nidhi was smitten by his looks and totally bowled by his strong persona...but its just attraction right now...many things she need to learn before she fell in love with that arrogant boss...😆😉
i m glad all your doubts have been cleared...and now the past is over...still a lil bit of past is left there to express in words but i will do that as the story progress...
Intimate scenes will be there sooon...thanku so much for the encouragement...😳
really needed that

luv ya dear
ana😛
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Posted: 13 years ago


Amazing updt ana 👏

loving da way story is progressing 😊

continue sooon... T.c of urself 😊


mahi~
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi Ana

Sorry to hear you were unwell. Hope you have recovered after your surgery. Do take care of yourself.

The update was very poignant and emotional. Ashu's fears, and pain were well explained together with his equation with Sneha. I couldn't read the Riya bit, was too heart-rending. So skipped it. Sorry.
I can understand Ashu keeping a distance from Ananya, feeling that he brings bad luck to all those he loves. Nidhi will have to heal so many deep emotional scars in him before she can penetrate his heart and make him love her back, no holds barred.
Very deep and very emotional update. Keep up the good work.
Edited by LizzieBennett - 13 years ago

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