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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh My God,achiever,this chapter lead me in another world dear.In the beautiful word of waterland and with ashu and nidhi"s love land,and anji is so naughty.and ashutosh is still surprise package for me,but still love his naughtiness,care and love and mostly anger.and swimsuit part and ashu's entrance,my heart beats moves so fast,and one crack in my heart,lovely and so romantic chap,dear.this is for you,and next update with romance again,please.this is my wish achiever.🤗🤗Muaah... this chapter led me near to ICU aapke lion se dar lagta hai
Edited by alkaparmart - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
What a chapter achiever 😳 I am speachless 👏
Thanx a lot for updating... You really made my day...🤗

Ok... Now cuming to the chapter... It was simply fantastic...
I loved each and every bit of it... Amazing... 🤪
The was you write is just.. Superb..(falling short of words)😉

Plzzz plzzz plzzz update soon...
😳 Plzzz😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
nandinibose, amit1944, ZedZee92, myera, sudhajo, Pooja_0910, vyoman, Cherishh, alkaparmart, niniborn2rule, thnk u so so much for ur likes and encouragement... really appreciate it.. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
aapke lion se dar lagta hai.
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Posted: 12 years ago
aapke lion se dar lagta haiQUOTE]
😆 He is Aslan, the majestic lion, from Chronicles of Narnia!
Lion is the most adorable predator😳.. and the apex predator, i.e., the one who is not a "prey" or "food" of other animals.. except for humans i guess...😭
thy r most magnificent and majestic creatures.. fierce intimidating intense.. and yet royal!
bt thy r the most laziest of animals... thy spend 20 hours of their day inactively..😆
dont b afraid.. Aslan is the most adorable lion!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Cherishh

My...my...my...its simply superb


Luved and cherished it to bits.
---awww thnk u soo much!😊😊
Its more of a Nidhi's update...ahaa...but luved Nidhi in this avatar a lot too...though not to mention I never miss Ashu (HER man as u said, me all frowning and pouting though accepting it...sigh...) in ur writing.
---yes.. for a chng it was Nidhi's update.. 😆 Ashu has a tendency to overshadow Nidhi..😆 ufff.."Her" man!!😆 its piercing.. aint it! 😆 bt Nidhi is a very kind girl.. i hope she wont b fiercely defending her man and wud at least let u drool..😉.. albeit from faraway!😆
Not to miss...Ashu was all d while chuckling, smiling and laughing...and of course shy and embarrassed...hayeee..me still in dreamland, thinking how s*y he would be and how charmful.
---yes!!!! he is very charming indeed.. both by personality and by looks.. tho i think its his personality tht captures more hearts! Awww.. Shy Ashu is so adorable.. becoz he is so rare!😆 An intersting aspect of his naughty/romantic personality wud b revealed in upcoming chapters..!
Nidhi's possessiveness was worth to read..it was so sweet...I thought she would be jealous but with pride, but never thought this much possessive...and she was so innocent shedding tears..arre Nidhi he is all urs, don't feel so bad..see just for simply saying he is "My Man" Manisha is giving warnings and scaring me...me so angry on her😡😆.
--Nidhi's possessiveness was cute.. i thot! its her first reaction..bt she will grow up and u will b surprised..😳 bt.. its "her" man.. essentially... so beware!😆
Luved the way the girls were teasing her and enraging her..poor dear...and the condition of Ashu who was not exactly getting what was going on was awesome..me was trying to imagine his confusing face, but alas he didn't let me even go there as he is too smart and finds out everything so soon...errgghh..can't even let me drool about him, I know this all ur plan Manisha.
--its his quick thinking brain tht spoils the fun...😆 bt wait.. too much of knowledge/wisdom is bad for the health of rships sometimes! ha ha ha ha.. no me not talking in riddles.. u've to wait and see wat happens nxt of Ashu..😆 and sorry.. this Ashu is not a confused man.. he is sorted wen it comes to handling practical situations of life.. he is complicated and clueless wen things r beyond his control..😳
Well apart from all my taunts and stupid jokes yet serious notes😉..I should talk about the update than my pondering session...
--taunts!! .. wer u taunting? really? ahahaaahhaaa...! I luv to tease like Ashu!😉

It was just beyond awesome dear. The way Ashu was taking care of everything to impress Nidhi's friends time and again was so attracting..I mean who will go to this extent for their luv. And the new ideas u put in all d time are just amazing. Yes me too Envy Nidhi for getting such a Man..sigh.
--his agenda is clear... and u will learn more abt his this side in future hopefully.. a man of such a character.. really anyone wud envy Nidhi!😆 bt wait can a rose come without a thorn.. No!😆
Luved all d teasing, lovely nok-jok of the leads and our Anji's plan to awaken the innocent and nave Nidhi to make her Man go all gagaaa..was simply superb. The way u said about this swimsuit surprise made me all dead thinking about Ashu's condition..but its really a pleasant surprise...oh Man I guess Ashu has really a great self-control😆😆😆 from his seductress.
--no..its other way... Ashu cud control bcoz Nidhi hasnt turned a seductress yet!😆😆😆.. and besides this Ashu was never one who wud jump at the first available chance.. its simply not him!😳 its Nidhi who is slowly making life difficult for him in ways tht he never knew!😆
Yes their relationship has reached new heights and beyond innocent luv, but their is always this respect they hold and knowing their limits is one of the qualities of your AshNi that I adore the most.
--yes.. respecting ur own moral values is wat helds thm together.. and yet thrs tht tentativeness to experience tht something.. thts very alluring abt thr r'ship..
I guess after all Nidhi's possessives its time for display of Ashu's possessiveness..but Ashu its not so easy to win Nidhi's wrath to...she is really testing him😆😆..me still wondering how he is handling all his emotions..poor boy..Its just not his day, everyone is making his go crazy about his luv, firstly all her frnds teasing, then Anji to send him to Nidhi, and then Nidhi's openess😉 and finally the bigger dhamaka the river and all girls and boys swimming..he really need to learn a lot to live with😆😉
--😆 rite..Ashu wud've never known tht such a world exist outside his hospital!😆.. thnx to nidhi! He needs to learn and Col. Verma was so rite abt the tests he has to take!😆 I luv Nidhi's friends.. if Ashu is Ashu, thn thy r her friends.. and thrs equal takkar.. i may say!😆
The Anji-Nidhi's convo was good with some revelations as to Nidhi's feelings, which cleared my doubts about her feelings at this stage of their relationship...well she is suffering not less than Ashu to understand her emotions...
--thts y i asked.. if anyone has ever attempted to kiss without brushing..😆.. Nidhi is still juggling with her emotions and these new feelings.. wer as Ashu is clear abt his feelings and emotions.. tho he knows his limitations bt yet the limit is very clear to him.. wer as Nidhi is still unsure.. hesitant.. and afraid!😳
There is so much to say, but don't know what to say yaar...so just let me be in my AshNi land😃 (but still I wrote a lot I know😛)

Well, would luv to know whats d surprise Ashu is holding and luking forward for Nidhi's surprise to Ashu, and trying to brace myself up for the past to resurface and its outcomes in AshNi loveland.
--Well while Ashu's surprise is pleasant...Nidhi's is a shock for viewers actually!😆
Bring it on dear...till then will b waiting for another wonderful ride of ur imagination.

thnk u so much for commenting lengthily! Its always welcomed..🤗 U add a distinct flavor of perception to my characters by ur review.. for e.g. ur possessiveness for Ashu actually gave me idea for Nidhi's possessiveness..😆 ... its entertaining to read.. bring it on!Tongue
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very nice. Loved how Ashu restrained himself after seeing her in swimwear, feeling the need to protect her from himself. You portray emotions beautifully.👏 I wish can get the next update sooner. Thanks for the lovely chap.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: alkaparmart

Oh My God,achiever,this chapter lead me in another world dear.In the beautiful word of waterland and with ashu and nidhi"s love land,and anji is so naughty.and ashutosh is still surprise package for me,but still love his naughtiness,care and love and mostly anger.and swimsuit part and ashu's entrance,my heart beats moves so fast,and one crack in my heart,lovely and so romantic chap,dear.this is for you,and next update with romance again,please.this is my wish achiever.🤗🤗Muaah... this chapter led me near to ICU aapke lion se dar lagta hai

wow! thnk u soo soo much.. and loads of beary hugs to u as welll!🤗🤗🤗
😆angie is one girl and up to mark for Ashu.. some intresting encounters of Angie-Ashu in upcoming chapters..u will enjoy it!😊
Ashu is a "surprise" package.. he has lot many layers..😳 and his anger was wow! i agree bt this type of anger irks me!😆
i thot may b some of u mite b disappointed with the swimsuit part.. tht thy didnt advance.. bt i think thrs still time for tht.. thr r'ship is growing no dbt.. and thr wud b a time for tht as well!😳
thnk u sooo much.. okay.. romance is an essential ingredient of my FF so i will try and bring in some unusual romance..😳 lets c how it works..😊
thnk u so much for coming here.. reading and commenting... 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ZedZee92

What a chapter achiever 😳 I am speachless 👏

Thanx a lot for updating... You really made my day...🤗

Ok... Now cuming to the chapter... It was simply fantastic...
I loved each and every bit of it... Amazing... 🤪
The was you write is just.. Superb..(falling short of words)😉

Plzzz plzzz plzzz update soon...
😳 Plzzz😃

oh! u dont know how much even a few words can convey...and wen v fall short of it.. emoticons work!😆 thnk soo soo very much for enjoying the chapter.. it makes me feel this FF is worth writing!Embarrassed
will b updating nxt week.. sorry.. my brain needs some good "clicks" so i give it atleast a week's time to come up with something intersting..😆
with varying demands of readers.. i m trying to put in all the ingredients in rite measure...
its tuff to b a writer.. 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ssktlk

Very nice. Loved how Ashu restrained himself after seeing her in swimwear, feeling the need to protect her from himself. You portray emotions beautifully.👏 I wish can get the next update sooner. Thanks for the lovely chap.

u know thts the most cutest thot of Ashu.. and thts y he is soo soo adorable..... and Nidhi complements him so well.. i luved the way she said.."so i m not ur sweetheart now!" awww.. the most cutest of couple really!
thnk u so much.. i try to get it rite.. and wen i read other FFs including urs.. i realize i go too deep into their head...😆 it tends to get fussy at times.. bt i cant help it.. its the way i write!😆
bt thr r so many talented and excellent writers on this Forum.. their distinct individual style add a distinct flavor and make reading more relishing..Clap really luv reading those FFs.. its a journey into another world.. tht only die-hard readers can understand.. and savor!😳
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