*Smthin_Clld_Luv*Nov3_Updt_p146*Jaane Kya Baat Hui - Page 24

Hey achiever
R u joking..??? Really no need to edit this chapter...the chapter was perfect n very well written...
Again WONDERFUL chapter...how could u manage to write this types of FF...
In starting Ashu n neighbour's conversation was funny...they planning nidhi's marriage wid their son..poor ashu..he dnt know how to react on this topic...i m agree wid hiraman kaka our ASHU(MB) IS NOT OLD..HE IS STILL YOUNG DASHING HANDSOME...
The whole phone conversation of Ashni was SO SWEET...again both blushed N number of times...Ashu is such darling..when he teased his BABY i loved it...
The title of this chapter is perfect..n after reading this i wish to hug Ashu(MB) (ohh plz dnt take it wrong way guys...dnt worry i m not a second mallika)
THANK YOU...
Waiting for more Ashni scene...u know na hum hai adat se majbur so post it soon

Absolutely superb.I am still imagining Nidhi in Nightsuit,Ashu consoling her midnight in the middle of the road and then inside the car.And Chocolate with greeting "KIDDO"-ah,that completed the scene.
Please update soon.You are god-gifted talent.I am now going crazzy about ur updates.,

Fabulous update,so touching and lovely.
Your way of presenting the phone convo was sooo... Romantic.
Superb,loved each and every bit of it.
You are just too good at thinking of such sweet convos.

Ashu has very interesting neighbours. Mrs Sinha gossip a lot
even brought proposal for nidhi.
Poor ashu ,he was just holding his anger.
Are they going to play any part in there further relation or create some problem.curious to know about it.

"O nidhi u know how u sound wen u whisper such things this way"
they have not yet expressed there feelings , but talking in such intimate way. Thats amazing ,so all the hesitation between them has vanished.
Her whisper talk added so much of passion.

"well thn u need some... Gud treatment with some other girl u will get sandals"
suddenly Nidhi became so bold in talks. And he is also responding to her.thats really sweet

Ashutosh is so eager to know what her Baba thinks about him.
Nidhi is also concerned about it
as this will decide there future relation.
Coming to her place in the midnight .and there concern for each other.this whole part was just too good ,written very beautifully.

Ashu , baba meeting would be quite interesting.
Baba is not actually worried about there relation ,nidhi has some past because of which she faints whenever she saw open wonds.
Curiousity level has increased .

Waiting for the next update.
Try to not keep us waiting for long.
You just don't know how much I wait for your updates.
So please.

Hey.. chapter 15 & 16 totaly blast.. and loved your back to back long update..
in chap 15 though it started with seriousness, it was full of romantic teases and moments..
but really they are too cute, using each other's name as passward..
in chap 16 Ashu should have thrown those neighbours from his house.. niece!! how dare they. they are luking for nidhi for their son.. >:-(
after that whole chap was awesome.. dont keep waiting us.. give us soon..

hi after seeing todays episode i feel like requesting a good long update bcoz that only can bring us form depressing episode😉 and coming episodes😆
i love your ashu and niddhi ❤️

hi nice chap specially masti between nidhi & ashu

phn conversation i really liked it ,thanks so much for wonderful ff sweetu 😳



sonali

waiting for next meeting and some rally romantic moments loooking forward😉

hi friends... thnx so much for ur comments..

Hey achiever...
This is not fair...option to aise diye hai jaise ek taraf kuwa aur dusari taraf khai...
Anyways take ur time...