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Posted: 12 years ago
aciever,main aapke chap ko criticise nahi kar rahi thi,lekin aapse thoda majak kar rahi thi,i love this chap,really i mean it.aur jahaa kp ji ka gyan aata hai,meri aankhe bund ho jati hai.so take it as a joke part.ashu and nidhi's romance in your chap is very cute
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: alkaparmart

aciever,main aapke chap ko criticise nahi kar rahi thi,lekin aapse thoda majak kar rahi thi,i love this chap,really i mean it.aur jahaa kp ji ka gyan aata hai,meri aankhe bund ho jati hai.so take it as a joke part.ashu and nidhi's romance in your chap is very cute

okay i got the joke.. kya hai jahaan KPji aate hai wahaan.. sach mein aankhen kaan aur dimag bhi band ho jaata hai.. so i have stopped trying to interpret his monologues.. 😆
I know u luved it sweets.. otherwise u wudn've commented here na..😳
its not u.. its me who looks for pnts tht i can improve.. kya kare proofreading ka bug hai!😆
bt thnks buddy😳..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: achiever

okay i got the joke.. kya hai jahaan KPji aate hai wahaan.. sach mein aankhen kaan aur dimag bhi band ho jaata hai.. so i have stopped trying to interpret his monologues.. 😆

I know u luved it sweets.. otherwise u wudn've commented here na..😳
its not u.. its me who looks for pnts tht i can improve.. kya kare proofreading ka bug hai!😆
bt thnks buddy😳..

you are welcome 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: achiever

thnk u soo much for ur words.. it helps me to improve my work and provide some good story..😳


Glad you're so open to feedback. I was apprehensive. Dialogue writing is fine. Will wait for the next chap.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ssktlk


Glad you're so open to feedback. I was apprehensive. Dialogue writing is fine. Will wait for the next chap.😊

thnx.. jst wrote a bit abt nxt chapter.. hope to complete it by Friday! hopefully i wud b able to do tht..😳
Edited by achiever - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
jst wrote a very intense and passionate chapter.. i know i tell this every time.. bt this time i feel u will feel it and appreciate it more.. and wats more.. its not over yet!
so new day tomorrow and i will write a new thing.. possibly a nice twist in the end!
Edited by achiever - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
and yes.. possibly put in a teaser/promo tomorrow.. will update on Friday.. as my chapter is almost over..😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Shahi12, dancydreamer, swati62, ZedZee92, DikshaBaluja, Cherishh, heydoc27, alkaparmart, Vidishaa, thnk u sooo much friends.. bt do put in ur comments if possible..
chalo done for the day...ciao.. tc..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey there...howzzz u...me toh doing good good as always..why wouldn't I after reading ur updates yaar.

Its a beautiful update as always.

I just loved their romance, which was so cute...well escaping like dat from the party was no wonder thrilling one for Ashu. The way he was calling her My Sweetheart, My love and Sweets was so lovely..Ashu is head over heels in luv with her and is behaving like a teenage lover boy with the Magic of his Nidhi...and am just loving it.

OHH...Boyyy...arre wasn't Nidhi enough to torture him and when he was getting it what he desired after so much of waiting...u were hell bent to spoil dat moment, but later I was glad that u did as we got to see a bit bold Nidhi and a dumb Ashu😆😆

The Mike stuff was really cool...just luved it, which made me witness them accepting their relation in a new way without feeling embarrassed in front of all and a bit strongly😃.

Just luved the surprise from the Gang...dat was so sweet of them...at last Ashu's mission was successfully completed...but its effect was not the way he would have expected at the end of the day.

Finally, his wish was fulfilled or say a bit more😉😳..but Ashu defo knows his limits..and why was Nidhi so tensed or reacting in such a way...well she will b bold, trust him and yet doesn't make d situations easy...Why u and Nidhi are hell bent to test Ashu I still wonder😛

Rohan's bit was unexpected..i was always skeptical about his character and was to some extent correct that he is in luv with Nidhi, but d way everyone came to know is a shocker...but would like to mention here that I would have luved to see Rohan-Nidhi confrontation about this new revelation...hmm hope u put it in next updates.

And I wonder at d end of the day how will Nidhi justify Ashu's J and insecurity around Rohan in the future becoz no wonder this Rohan bubble gonna burst sometime or the other...and yeah as he felt even I think that Ashu is not gonna help this tiff between them and its consequences.

Well coming to Rohan's dadi..the way she accepted Ashu made me more curious to the relation between Ashu's past and how its related to Nidhi and her family...no wonder its gonna make the revelation more interesting with Dadi bua's way of accepting him adding it too.

So finally Ashu has to pay for carrying Nidhi stubbornly😆😆...but bechara pyaar mein karta bhi kya...awww so sweet of him, but when would Nidhi understand it...k..k..understand dat he was bloating a bit, but wasn't dat quite obvious to being praised by some girls so openly..well he defo had secret admirers, but this might be his first experience apart from Nidhi😆😃

This J thing has really turned into a mess. Y Nidhi is so uncomfortable even knowing Y Ashu was doing all...well at one point I was like finally she started to think to share her inhibitions or feelings with Ashu, but alas its Nidhi y I forgot that😆.

Oh God..its high time that Nidhi should think over it really seriously and try to understand her feelings and stop overreacting...and should b able to control her emotional turmoil...The way she was saying all those stuff to Ashu was too much becoz she very well knows why he did so and moreover he had told her..still she isn't getting it..guess "Ashu-The Neurosurgeon" needs to b in action to set her brain properly😆😆...as I doubt she will not b able to fight her inner turmoil/emotions all alone...but well she is mature and at the same time not enough😛 and with this past dwelling upon them I wonder how she gonna handle it, as Ashu might overreact then, but he may act wise soon..but I am thoughtful about Nidhi's stand on it, though I just don't know anything about this past.

I somewhere feel that they really need to talk often and know what each other feel about their relation, where its progressing and has it taken a right path or not...though Naino aur Dil ki Basha is good, but its not helping them here with this J thing..

I was expecting some sweet AshNi moments at Ashu's place..but guess need to wait for that.

And I hope that this tiff will be solved with a sweeettt aftermath as always😉...were there would b more understanding and they open up more.

Hey last but not d least, Happy Navratri dear...enjoy ur time in hometown with ur loved ones.

And yes will b waiting for the next update eagerly.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: achiever

and yes.. possibly put in a teaser/promo tomorrow.. will update on Friday.. as my chapter is almost over..😳


looking forward to it...as to see whats in store for us..is it a shocker or a sweet surprise
Edited by Cherishh - 12 years ago

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