FF-Agar tumse MOHABBAT NAA HOTI-NOTE pg.8

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HELLO EVERYONE ! let me introduce myself. . .umm my name is malika . . .u cn call me mahi. i am a die heartd fan of kmh so i loveee kritika . i watchd KTLK 4 her bt now i m in love wid it. . .its story . . .its chemistry . .just wowww . .

i hv been writng some ffs on arjuhi in kmh2 forum . . .so also i want 2 try on our favourite couple Ashu -nidhi. . .
ok i m nt too gud about intro so i m leavng it on my loyal readers.


INTRO CHAPTER

she cuddled her softy & pulld covers up to stop da bright rays of sun peepng through big glass wndw , disturbng hr peaceful sleep.
dadi(her father bua) came & push her covers : ' nidhi 'itna time hogya hai . .tum abhi tk so rhi ho .
she pulld da cover again , mumrd : sone do dadi. . .itne time bad college se chutti mili hai.
dadi sit near her: to aap shayd bhul rhi hen princess. .chutti sune k lye nhi , tyarion k lye milli hai. bhul gaeen aaj tumhari didi ki mehndi hai.
she sinffd in her teddy : didi ki mehndi hai , meri nhi.
dadi irritatd: tumhari ho bhi nhi skti.
she snatchd hr teddy & throw it on floor .
she angrly jump out of bed & huggd hr teddy : ye kya dadi . .mere softy ko choot lg jati , to ?
dadi cm & slap her arm: pta nhi kb barri hogi.
nidhi: ouch . . .barri ho to gai. .last month to men 18 ki hui hun . jao men aap se bat nhi krti.
dadi sit nxt 2 her & hugd her. nidhi nodded in no . she kiss on hr cheek. nidhi huggd her : dadu ko bhi aese hi ptati thi naa aap.
dadi : chup , badmash.
dadi cntnue: men to sirf tumhe bhlai k lye danti hun . kuch bhi nhi aata tumhe , ek anda to boil krna aata nhi tumhe , wo choro tumhe to sari pehnna bhi nhi aata , dekho kya hal bna rkha hai apne baloon ka . sara din dunya jahan ki shrarten krvalo . . kya krogi jb tumhari shadi hogi ?

nidhi irritatd: mujhe nhi krni shadi . pehle roz subha uth kr khud school jao phir shadi k bad aur bhi subha uth kr bcho ko school bejho.
dadi sigh: tujhe shadi se aur koi prblm nhi hai ?
nidhi: hai . she restd hr head on dadi lap : men aap ke , papa ke bger nhi reh skti . men aap sb ko chor kr kbhi nhi jaungi . . pta nhi shreya dii hm sb k bger newyork men akele kese rhengi ?
dadi coldly: jese pehle reh rhi thi.

she raisd hr head up: plz dadi aap aese mt bola kro , dii ko buht bura lgta.
dadi: jo us ne kya wo acha tha ? us ne kya kiya ? wo tum se 7 saal bri hai pr phr bhi itni naa smjhi ? us ne ghar se bhaag kr apni marzi se shaadi ki . hm sb ka sar sharm se jhuka dya. aur ab 5 saal bad us se divorce le kr tumhare brthday k din maafi mangne aa gai ? tumhare papa ne use sirf tumhari wja se , tumhare aansu , tumhari takleef dekh kr is ghar men rehne ki ijazt di . . . wo to acha hua itna acha rishta mil gya . shukr kro tumhare papa us ka knyadan krne k lye tyar hogae . .wrna unhun ne use ab bhi maaf nhi kya.

nidhi wipd hr dadi tears: sb kuch theek ho jayga.
dadi hugd her : tumhare papa theek kehte hen , tum un ka sheer beta ho.
she wipd hr tears & laughd .
nidhi got up: itna sara kaam hai . . .
dadi: han buht sare kam hen , aaj newyork se larke wale bhi aa jaynge.
nidhi lukng into wardrobe, giggle : wo 30 k hen , to larka kese hue. ?
dadi: chup kr .
nidhi grbng hr bathrobe , headed twrd washroom : wese wo ab tk kya kr rhe the ? unhun ne ab tk shadi kyun nhi kii ?
dadi: bechara sara busnss khud smbhalta hai . .wo sb chor . bs tu koi shrart mt krna mene suna hai un ka gussa buht khrab hai.

she opnd da washroom , peepd while brushng: kya naam btaya tha aap ne jiju ka ?
dadi : asotosh
nidhi made face , dn gv a devil smile : ashu. . & closd da door.


HOPE U LIKE. DONT 4GT TO COMMENT. all da suggestions , critism welcm . if u want me to continue HIT THE LIKE BUTTON. . .

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Posted: 13 years ago
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INDEX

PROLOGUE
Chapter one

MAHI's other works :

LOVE I*M*POSSIBLE


KAISE AAEY KARAAR


LET's FALL IN LOVE


DIL TO AAKIR... DIL HI TO HAI NA


TRIBUTE TO KMH


KHUDA BHI HUME KAR NA PAYE JUDA


OS: ONLY 1 NIGHT??


OS: COTTAGE ROMANCE-HOT PROMO RETAKE


Originally posted by: -vrshn-

omgeee!! u r here!! and i'm first :D

osum!! trst me! even if you have written ashu here all i can think of is 'arjun'!! gosh!! its going to be fun!!

waise i thought you would update love i'm'possible!! very bad mahi!!

anyways...another ff is going to be extra fun!!

omg!! her di is going to run away again?? she'll marry a 30 yr old man?? but 12 yrs difference only na?? in the show i guess its 16 or sth!! anyways...gtg nw...so all the best and as usual add me to ur pm list!! :D

what abt the title?? we hve to know the story further to give a name na??


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Posted: 13 years ago
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oh god ! mahi here?????? mm wd love to read more
moonkmh thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wao! Mahi u r here. M so happy.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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vrsh & aparna@ y ? me also kritia fan naa ? :D

vrsh@ u again :D nw dis indx also :D :D :D . . .yup tum ne os pr cmnt nhi kya to i left da forum :p
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Varsh,ditto... Its too hard 2 digest othr name dn arjun in ff also;-(
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@mahi,dnt do dat. Tere ffs ka kya hoga. Hamara kya hoga. Varsh wl cmnt dnt worry.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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mahi,
you have started a new ff in this forum - why not in my arjuhi forum - oh i miss my arjun mahi - no replacement for him - fans of mohnish, sorry yaar - no hard feelings pls (its just that i cant digest anybody else with kritz other than karan)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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LIKE button hit kiya mahi - continue soon pls
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Mahi,
Luv impossible mein ROOP TERA MASTANA PROMO DEKE, IDHAR AAGAYI - Jaldi sey Luv.Imp. ko update kardo mahi
btw, CONGO on your new ff - iam sure u will rock mahi
priya
Edited by Arjuhisis - 13 years ago

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