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Shaavi

@Shaavi

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#51

Amazing OS. 👏 👏 . Beautifully written. ⭐️

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vinoguna

@vinoguna

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#52

how much we miss their cute fights... really can imagine them in this OS...

His grin slowly faded away as he felt something warm on his chest.He looked down to find out that our little guy there had decided to empty his bursting bladder on him making it clear that he will definitely grow up to become a Mamma's boy

hahaha... Shubh is definitely mamma's boy... he is Shaheer's... opps... Dev's look alike na... 😉 (cant stay away from Eri... opps... Sona)

"You don't worry BigCha,Golu kisi bhi boy ko apni Sister ke paas nahi aane dega,I will protect her like a Seal"Golu said throwing a punch in the air

"Seal nahi champ it's shield"Dev laughed and ruffled Golu's hairs

really love this one - love the fact you included BigCha & Golu bond here... their bond is a bliss...

and then comes the best part!! Our Dev Babu is the king of surprises!! and our cute Sona... what can we say... she is the one who drives him & his plans na...

"Don't underestimate your husband dear"he said with a wink

...but that can wait till we return home.Don't you think we have something more important to do right now"he said with a mischievous smile as he captured her lips again in another kiss.

Ufff...!! love the emotions that you have captured on this whole OS...

Totally bliss & totally Devakshi!!

Great writing... keep going... 👍🏼🤗

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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: cscs
Awesome.
Loved it.
Dev babu is super possessive papa n husband.
N golu is cute little munchkin.
I hope we got to see Devakshi spending some quality time like this in the show as well.

Yeah Dev is super possessive about his family and Golu to hai hi cutie pie and you are right I highly doubt that we would get some romantic scenes of Devakshi in season 2 because we will see Sonakshi in office and Dev busy with kids at home

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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: ihatestans
very well written dear👏i loved the story

Thank you so much for your comment and I am glad that you liked it

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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: ROYALRED
Wow beautiful os so nice love it do write like more often dear

Thank You so much dear for encouraging me,I will surely come up with new OS if time permits

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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: NiharKhan
It was extremely awesome ankita.I totally loved it.It was really amazing

Thank You so much Nihar,I am glad that you liked it.Keep showering your love

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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: _ShaheErica_
Its beautiful. Very very romantic.
Imagining DevAkshi & am blushing.☺️

I know we can't expect this on the show.😔

Aww yeah I wish we could get some Devakshi romance in season 2

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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: AnanyaGhosh
Wow this os is really good. I loved how they fought and cleared out everything easily. Yes a bit heartbroken she was but i guess it was worth it!!

Come here give me a hug my sweet Anu
You are a lovely friend and yeah They fought but they kissed and make up LOL Dev is such a mischievous boy.T thank you for your comment

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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: purplegrapes
As usual great write up girl.
Love sona's dress😉

Hahaha yeah I love it too.Show me to Sona Puri head to toe covered rehti hai Therefore I wanted Dev to gift something sexy to her as a surprise.Thank you for your review