Devakshi-Soha OS-A Wretched Hero - Page 9

Originally posted by: NiharKhan

Wow.That was so beautiful.What an amazing os.It was very beautifully written with Dev's emotions.Please continue writing such amazing works.And thank you for notifying me about your works.Its awesome.And I hope you would love my work on devakshi

Thank you so much.I am glad that you liked it

This is really an awesome piece...and an amazing one...! And very emotional too but loved it...!! To be honest I was too lazy yesterday so couldn't cmnt. !!sorrry...😛

Originally posted by: 20701

This is really an awesome piece...and an amazing one...! And very emotional too but loved it...!! To be honest I was too lazy yesterday so couldn't cmnt. !!sorrry...😛

And the OS... my goodness...I haven't missed it...really I felt like crying...reading the dialogues and description...really flawless ..perfect...!!😃👏👏

Love to see more of u...

Thank you so much dear for your valuable review and I am glad that you liked it

Oh wow..just superb..very nice very emotional but a lovely closure. You are gifted..very beautifully written.. Keep at it and thanks for sharing

Originally posted by: Maya_Dutt

Oh wow..just superb..very nice very emotional but a lovely closure. You are gifted..very beautifully written.. Keep at it and thanks for sharing

Thank you so much dear 😃I am glad that you liked it

Wow loved it waiting for your more os

Loved it. Beautiful writing and iam happy tht u gave a happy ending. Keep up the good work and will wait for more ff's from you.

Awe that was lovely
His daughter for his birthday gave him a drawing she made b4 he met her
Awe n he got another nice surprise he was gonna be a dad again this time a chance to be with sona throughout
Loved his reaction later seeing his daughter leaving with her new husband
The brother n sister moment was funny
Poor Rohan was getting threatened by both father n son lol
Thanks for pm nplz keep em comin

Originally posted by: Heatsha8176

Awe that was lovely
His daughter for his birthday gave him a drawing she made b4 he met her
Awe n he got another nice surprise he was gonna be a dad again this time a chance to be with sona throughout
Loved his reaction later seeing his daughter leaving with her new husband
The brother n sister moment was funny
Poor Rohan was getting threatened by both father n son lol
Thanks for pm nplz keep em comin

Yeah poor Rohan but what to do girls are very precious for their fathers and brothers.Thank you for your comment

Originally posted by: luckyvicky2801

Loved it. Beautiful writing and iam happy tht u gave a happy ending. Keep up the good work and will wait for more ff's from you.

Thank you so much,I am glad that you liked my work 😃