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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi guys! This is my first ever try at writing. Please provide feedback and let me know if I should continue.

Sonakshi came out of bose house and saw dev waiting in his car. Seeing sonakshi dev came out of his car. Surprised sonakshi to see him here asked 'tum yah an kya kr Rahay ho?'
Dev: woh mein office ja raha tha aur yahan se guzar raha tha aur mein ne socha K as hum dono ek he office mein kaam krtay hn aur 'Friends' hn tou ek saath chaltay hn.
Sonakshi: fine. Chalo.
Hesitant sonakshi sat in the front seat with dev and they began their journey to the office. Sitting in his car brought back a lot of memories for her. Their late night drives, him dropping her home and their romantic conversations during the drives. Dev noticed that sonakshi was in her thoughts and was happy that his plan was working. Breaking her thoughts he said,
Dev: kya hua? Kya soch rahi ho?
Sonakshi: kuch nai bs aaj ki meeting k bray mein.
They stopped at the signal and someone knocked on dev's window. There stood a small girls selling gajras.
Girl: bhaiyya ley Lou na gajra didi pe bohat acha lagay ga.
Dev: ek kaam Karo ek gajra dey dou. I'm sure ye pehan k she'll look beautiful. Bilqul fairytales Wali Princess.
Saying this dev took the gajra and the signal turned green. Sonakshi was looking at dev surprised. He has bought a gajra for her. 'fairy tale Wali princess'
Sonakshi: dev ye Sab kya a...
Dev: kya? Jis sey pyar krtay hn uskay liay gift tou ley he saktay hn na. And I'm sure this will look beautiful
Sonakshi: pp... Pyaaar?
Dev: Han Bai sohana se pyar he tou krta hn mein.
Sonakshi: ye gajra tum ne sohana k liay Lia hai?
Dev: Haan. Tumhe kya laga?
Sonakshi : nahi kuch nai.

Dev was enjoying this a lot. He had promised sonakshi that he won't force his love on her and now he promised himself that he will make sonakshi confess her love one way or the other.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#2
It is very nice dear...Dev will make her confess for sure😊
Do write more...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#3
Ok this was cute

Will u be updating more?????
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Yaa pls continue.. Would love to read.
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Awesome start .please continue soon
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Nice 👍🏼
Please continue soon.

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