Devakshi SS:- Love Till Eternity A/N on Pg 29

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Gayatri

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Posted: 8 years ago

#51

Hold on hold on
Agar main jo soch rahi hoon yeh story waise hi aage badhne waali hai to its gonna be a hell of a solid concept
Yeh maine kyun nahi socha
Chal main nahi tu sahi
Jaldi update karna
Waiting to see my prediction come true

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.FlyingClouds.

@.FlyingClouds.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy
Hold on hold on
Agar main jo soch rahi hoon yeh story waise hi aage badhne waali hai to its gonna be a hell of a solid concept
Yeh maine kyun nahi socha
Chal main nahi tu sahi
Jaldi update karna
Waiting to see my prediction come true

Pata nahiin dii...aapne kya socha...but ek storyline zaroor sochi hai...I will update soon...dont worry and LCB will be updated tom...aur aapka prediction mujhe bhi janna hai...PM karke bata do...

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PY18

@PY18

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Posted: 8 years ago

#53

It's a very interesting no nonsense style of writing. Will wait for next update

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Adiba Bano

@.kashishbano.

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#54

So First Chapter Curtained is Opened...And After long Time I have read the chapter on the same day it was Published...😳😆

First Of All I will tell You about your writing Style ...As usual It is Mind Boggling.👏👏

You are very well aware⭐️ with the style of describing the different concepts in different ways and I really loved ❤️ your way of writing. Bolne ki zarorat hai kya😉😃...

Coming to the Chapter, It was so interesting And Amazing.👏The story progress is so natural.

Actually I find the chapter very relatable because reading this chapter make me remember my 12th standard days where just like Dev i was also in shock on seeing my name on second position but I was lucky because i got my position back as I made rechecked the papers.😃😃

Dev ko bhi papers recheck karwana chahiye😉😆

Sona is so calm and compose...I liked it that she didn't react on Bunty taunts.

Dev ego is already hurt and On that His Dad rubbing salt on his wounds😆

The best dialogue of this chapter is.And i loved it very much.So great sense of humour u holds.

Ravindra: "Oh...toh mera putra ek kanya se haar ke aaye hain😆 🤣

Dev: "Aur mann kar raha hai ki uss kanya ka toh main college se kanyadaan karwa dun"😆 🤣.

You always potray the relations very well ..I liked the convo between the Mother daughter and Father son.

Excited to know which storm Dev will bring and what effect that storm will leave on Devakshi.

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.FlyingClouds.

@.FlyingClouds.

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: PY18
It's a very interesting no nonsense style of writing. Will wait for next update

Thank you so much...I am glad you liked it...

I will update soon😊

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.FlyingClouds.

@.FlyingClouds.

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: .kashishbano.
So First Chapter Curtained is Opened...And After long Time I have read the chapter on the same day it was Published...😳😆 Hehehe...I know ek time tha jab humesha yeh hota tha...but ab nahiin 😆😆

First Of All I will tell You about your writing Style ...As usual It is Mind Boggling.👏👏 Aww...thank you dii...thank you so much...

You are very well aware⭐️ with the style of describing the different concepts in different ways and I really loved ❤️ your way of writing. Bolne ki zarorat hai kya😉😃...Nahiin dii...there is still so much to learn...and am still learning...

Coming to the Chapter, It was so interesting And Amazing.👏The story progress is so natural. Thank you so much dii...am glad ki aapko pasand aaya...

Actually I find the chapter very relatable because reading this chapter make me remember my 12th standard days where just like Dev i was also in shock on seeing my name on second position but I was lucky because i got my position back as I made rechecked the papers.😃😃 Omg!! Aisa hua tha kya?? Yeh toh sach mein kisi ki story ban gayi...!!

Dev ko bhi papers recheck karwana chahiye😉😆 Hehehehe😆😆

Sona is so calm and compose...I liked it that she didn't react on Bunty taunts.Haan woh na bilkul mere opposite hai...Dev ka character mujhse inspired hai...heheh gussa wala and egoistic

Dev ego is already hurt and On that His Dad rubbing salt on his wounds😆 Hahaha...he is a fun loving and a cool dad...

The best dialogue of this chapter is.And i loved it very much.So great sense of humour u holds.

Ravindra: "Oh...toh mera putra ek kanya se haar ke aaye hain😆 🤣

Dev: "Aur mann kar raha hai ki uss kanya ka toh main college se kanyadaan karwa dun"😆 🤣. Hehehe...accha tha na...mere creative mind ka piece hai😉😆😆

You always potray the relations very well ..I liked the convo between the Mother daughter and Father son. Thank you dii...thanks a lot

Excited to know which storm Dev will bring and what effect that storm will leave on Devakshi.kuch toh woh karega hi...😉