Devakshi FF #Krpkab (Dev Sona n Ishwari - scene 1- 5)

A journey of 10 Titlis my friends coming together through a fictitious love story. And starting their journey of pushing the sky a little higher, rearranging the Himalayan Ranges, stealing stars from the night sky to hang on their bedroom windows... in all rewriting everything with their own ink of revolutionary thoughts and enterprising ways... Changing the spectrum of our own rainbow.

I found few amazing friends online, they who always pushed me to do something beyond my limits... here is one more such endeavor .. I was lauded for analyzing the characters of this show... But when Vicky joined the office my friends started to get blues and were disappointed in Dev for not supporting Sona on this... so they made me write these scenes where i tried to hack the story with twists and turns more suited to our liking... and now they want me to bring it to you all...

Love you all My Titlis...

Yours Gargi (as you all named me the BornRebel)

Come lets spread it further...

Number 1

Just after Dev Dixit was told by his mother Ishwari to give the position of Project Manager to his never do well cousin Vicky...

P.S. - It was typed on a mobile phone so please excuse the Capital letters usage...

#krpkab version 2.0 (Ish calling Dev)

Act 1... scene 3

While Devakshi is busy doing what newly married couples r supposed to do...

I : (From the other side of the door) Dev tu aaraha haina beta mere kamre mein. .

D n S jumping apart.. S looking down all smile and red faced and D all red faced but no smiles... a long sigh n then

D: Seriously. .. hah aaya maa.. (tum mere aane tak better think of ways to appease me... varna punishment double nahi tripple ho jayegi.

S: Aur agar mujhe punishment hi chahiye hoto( looking up at him with.. cm on)

D all of his breath caught in chest had to make an effort to let go. . N then left for Ishwari's room...

#krpkab version 2.0 (Dev and Ishwari)

Act 1. .. scene 4

I's room... D enters and sit near his mothers feet not looking at her... I is all smiles but there is a scared look in the depth of her eyes.. she is so uncomfortable thinking of what was coming up...Devakshi together for 10 days all alone... god knows what that girl is gonna do n say to My Dev.. She needs to do something n immediately. ..

I: Dev tujhe pata hai na ke teri maa ke liye tujhse badke kuchh nahi hai...
Tu 10 dino ke liye yahan nahi hoga toh mujhe soch ke hi achha nahi lag raha.

D: humm.. janta hun maa lekin kaam toh karna hi hai na maa. Tune hi toh bachpan se mujhe apni zimmedari nibhana sikhaya hai.. toh ab kaise unse muh mod lun...
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I: Maine tujhse khush rahne ko bhi toh kaha hai toh phir mere raja bete ka chehra kyun utra hua hai..

D: Pata nahi maa... mujhe shaadi se pehle lagta tha ki tu mere faislon mein hamesha mere saath hai aur rahegi lekin ab..

I:(scared coz the whole time D is not looking at her .. he is not happy with her. She can sense it)
Dev nahi mujhe apne bete pe pura bharosa hai. Pata hain na tujhe... humne humesha sath sath is ghar ke faisle liye aur apno ko sambhala hai. Tu aise kyon soch raha hai Dev.

D: Maa tu mere liye sabse upar hai par... pehli baar teri maang mere usoolon se takrayi hai. Main mamaji ke ahsaano ko bhool jaunga aisa tune socha bhi kaise... tu nahi janti hai kya mujhe.. kal jab bina kuchh sikhne ki wajah se Vicky koi galati karega toh kya mamaji ka sar sharam se jhuk nahi jayega?

Par agar tune kuchh socha hai toh main uspe sawal nahi karna chahta.. tujhe apne bete pe bharosa ho na ho mujhe ab bhi apni maa pe pura bharosa hai...

Ab tu soja aur han Neha ke bare mein kya karna hai tu aur mamiji sochke mujhe bata dena..

Sona enters the room n I gets irritated... looks at her questioningly..

S: Ma woh almari ki chabi humare kamre ki... ( hesitatingly)

D: Almari ki chabi?..Humari almari ki chabi maa ke pas?

S: Ha woh maa ne kaha ki usme zaroori kagzat hai aur unhe in sabki zaroorat pad sakti hai toh...

D: Agar kagzat itne zaroori hai toh tu apne hi pas rakhle maa... Sonakshi ki almari mein rakhne ki zaroorat kya hai... Uske almari ki chabi toh uske paas hi honi chahiye na.

I getting up n giving S the keys grudgingly. .but she is not going to irritate D further.

D n S leaving her room. .. I heard D asking S

D: Tumne mera gift nikal liya na usse pack kar lena trip ke liye.

S: humm. ( all red face..lukin down n smilling silly)

#krpkab version 2.0 (Sona n Dev talk about Vicky)

Act 1 ...scene 5

S enters the room n D is on the phone talking to Nileshji n Srivastav the lawyer.

D: The papers needs to look most authentic Mr. Srivastav n Nileshji plz make sure nothing goes wrong.. Guyz this is very important for me and I am depending on you. We cannot afford any mistakes. ... keep me in loop n posted...

Yeh mere jane ke baad 3rd day apko yeh execute karna hai. And signing ke waqt I need you Srivastav to be there.. The graveness of the situation needs to come across to him very clearly...


S looks at him while packing but says nothing. D ofcourse notices her hesitation and wraps up the call...
Comes near her and tucks a loose strand behind her ear while looking at her eyes. He knows his Sona too well... she is not going to ask anything..


D: Kya pareshan kar raha hai mere khargosh ko hmmm?

S looks down at her bags n shakes her head. D picks her up in his arms takes her to the bed n sits with her in his lap. Hugging her tight closes his eyes.

D: Pata hai mujhe mera khargosh aisa chup sa.. katrata hua kaisa feel karata hai...(whispering)

Jaise mere andar kuchh toot raha ho.. bikhar raha ho aur main kuchh nahi kar pata hun. Kyunki meri zindagi ke maine khatam ho jaate hai jab aap mujhse apne dil ki baat karne jhijhakti hai. Mere andar ek zarra bhi sabut nahi bachta..

Kissing her forehead..
S comes out of her burrow and looks at him for few moments n thn holds D by face n kisses both his eyes..

S: Aapka bikharna aur tootna allowed nahi hai. Bataya tha na maine jab us din main raat ko office aayi thi. Main jee nahi paungi aise.. bohot pyar karti hun aapse. Shayad kabhi aapko theek se batane ka moka nahi mila..

Dev main business aur finance nahi samajhti aap ki tarah. Par main mamaji ki bohot izzat karti hun. Aur main bas itna chahti thi ke woh Vicky se jo umeeden rakhten hain unhe pura karne mein aap uski madad kare. Aap agar apne bhai behno ko kabhi kuchh bhi dena chahenge toh mujhe usse koi problem nahi hogi. .bas jo bhi dijiye uski khushi unhe lambe waqt ke liye mile.. unhe aapki di hui cheezo se puri khushi mile aur hamesha ke liye mile... Par aap apni family ke liye itna kuchh karten aaye hai itne saalon se..toh aap iss situation ko bhi zyada achhe tareeke se handle karenge.

D knew his Sona is too honest and straight forward person to approve of what he is doing...

D: (slowly massaging her back and lying down with her still in his arms) Mujhe mere khargosh se ek favour chahiye... mujhe aap thoda sa waqt dedijiye... main sab theek kar doonga. Bharosa karti ho mujhpe?

S could see how important her answer is to him..

S: Jo main aapse karti hun Mr. Obhodro woh bharose se kai uppar hai.. usse pagalpan kehten hai.

Duniya mein sabse zyada... mere bhagwan se bhi aur apne aap se bhi zyada. .

D: (closing his eyes) Apko apni packing beech mein hi rokni padegi... (whispering ) coz I need you for myself Khargosh...
Right now. ..

here you go dear😛😛