Devakshi OS : Another Chance....

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hiiee .. I am new here or u can say I am a silent reader of this forum..
After watching today's episode I have got an idea n thought to pen it down.. so here I'm with my short story or OS on Devakshi...

After the heated argument Dev leave with teary eyd n Sonakshi feels sorry for her rude behavior..

After leaving home Dev is roaming around n stop near a cafe as he saw Sonakshi with Jatin seating in his car.. he feels hurt coz this is their favorite place to set n talk.. he took out his phone n make video of her with Jatin n leave the place in anger..

Dev stopped his bike near a club n headed straight to bar n order a bottle of Scotch.. his phone was on table n her video was playing. After drinking half bottle he started his self talk..

Still watching the video

Dev : Kyu Sonakshi Kyu kar rahi ho mere saath aisa, tumhe pata hai na ki mai tumhe tab bhi kisi aur ke saath nahi dekh sakta tha aur aaj bhi nahi dekh sakta, phir kyu tum har baar us Jatin ke saath... Ab aur bardast nahi hota mujhse plz stop doing this plz n he finished 2nd bottle,.

Waiter come n told him to stop drinking as he is too drunk n it's closing time of club, Dev take one more bottle n came out of the club.. after drinking half bottle he is now not able to stand properly so sat near a tree..

At Dixit house :

Sonakshi return home n fin that Dev is still outside, so she went to meet Elina in her room..

Sonakshi : Eli free hai kya..

Elina : Haan Sona bol na kuch kaam tha.. as baith ke baat karte hai..

Sonakshi : Dev kya hamesha hi aise der se ghar aata hai..

Elina : der se.. wo to ghar hi nahi aate the, jabse tu aur Soha yeha aaye ho Dev Bhai ghar aate hai.. par tu ye kyu puch rahi hai..

Sonakshi : kuch nahi kal Aunty Ji aane wali hai aur Dev ko unhe lene jana tha to mujhe laga tha ke wo aa gaya hoga..

Elina : arey haan, aur Dev Bhai kabhi bhi bhulte nahi to aaj kaise..

Sonakshi : chor na aa jayega wo time pe MA ko nahi bhul sakta kabhi...

Just before leaving Sonakshi 's phone ring's n Jatin's name flashes on screen, she receive her phone,

Sonakshi : haan Jatin bolo kya hua abhi to mile the..

Jatin : Sona meri baat dhyan se suno n plz don't panic.. mai club ki taraf se gujar raha tha to maine Dev ko dekha, he is in very bad condition n fully drunk, plz tum aa jao..

Sonakshi : WHAT... Mai aa rahi hu tum plz uske saath rehna.. don't leave him for a second got it .. mai abhi aa rahi hu..

As Elina opened her mouth to ask Sonakshi ran to her n hug her tight..

Elina : Sona kya hua, baat mujhe jaldi mujhe tension ho raha hai..

Sonakshi : Eli wo Dev.. club ke pass mila fully drunk.. mujhe jana hoga.. tu aaj Soha k pass rukja aur haan ye niche wala kamra khulwa ke saaf kara Dena.. dhyan rahe Eli ki kuch bhi ho jaye Soha apne Papa ko aisi halat me na dekhe.. mai aati hu Dev ko leke..

She ran outside n drive like a crazy.. as she reached there her eyes r searching for him n their he was in sub conscious state. She ran to him n hold him carefully, Jatin helped her as Dev is too heavy for Sona n she drove away quick..

At Dixit house Elina makes all arrangements n make sure that nobody was near that room where Sona was suppose to bring Dev.. as they reach home Sona n Elina bring Dev in room, put him on bed.. Sona was about to leave but Elina stopped her ..

Elina : Sona kaha ja rahi hai ab..??

Sonakshi : Soha ke pass kyu kya hua..

Elina : tu yeha Dev Bhai ke pass ruk.. dekh mai janti hu tu kya bolegi par is what inhe Teri jarurat hai Sona aur ye tu bhi janti hai.. jabtak inhe hosh nahi aata tu ruk, Soha ke pass mai ruk jaungi..

Sonakshi : par Eli.. but stopped Midway after sensing Elina's angry eye.. think hai, tu ja mai rukti hu..

Elina went out closing the door behind n Sona locked it from inside.. suddenly she heard Dev's voice n ran near him..

Sonakshi : Dev tum think ho na, chalo so jao..

Dev : Sona, tum ho sach me ya ye bhi koi sapna hai hamesha ki tareh jise chune ki koshish karunga to tut jayega..

He extend hand to touch Sona but she hold his hand in her hand n told him that she is right there with him..

Dev : Sona ye kyu kar rahi ho, tum aise kaise mujhe apne dil se nikal sakti ho, mai to tumhare Obhodro tha na phir kaise tum kar sakti ho aise mere saath. Tumhe kisi aur ke saath dekh ke aaj bhi waise hi dard hota hai dil me, nahi dekh sakta tumhe kisi aur ke saath..Tumhe sirf mera haq hai sirf mera..

Sona hug him n sushhh him to stop talking by placing a small kiss on his forehead to calm him, but Dev was not in mood to stop n started crying holding Sona's hand just like he cried on Sona's engagement with Ritwik..

Dev : mat jao Sona mujhe chor ke, tumhare bina nahi reh sakta mai.. tumhare kisi aur ke ho jane ke khayal se bhi dar lagta hai mujhe, isliye jab tum us Jatin ke saath hoti ho to bahut taklif hoti hai, bahut dard hota hai yeha n placed Sona's hand on his heart..

Sonakshi : mai kahin nahi ja rahi Dev aur Jatin sirf mera dost hai.. Bachpan se bare hone tak Baba aur Dada mere support system the sirf unka huq tha mujhpe, phir tum aaye aur mujhpe hi nahi meri aatma par bhi tumhara huq ho gaya aur jab meri aatma meri nahi to mai kaise kisi aur ki ho sakti hu.. mujhpe sirf tumhara huq tha hai aur hamesha rahega, samjhe tum Mr. Obhodro..

Dev hold Sonakshi's arm n looked straight into her eye's, she can see in his eyes mixture of love n fear...

Dev : MAR JAUNGA MAI tumhare bina Khargosh..

And tears rolled from his eyes n It hurts to see him like this for Sonakshi n she did something Jo khud Sona bhi nahi samajh payi ki usne aisa kyu kiya..

As her heart breaks into pieces after seeing him crying like a baby, Sona cupped his face in her hand n placed her lips on his lips n kissed him deeply.. the kiss become more passionate when Dev hugged her n held her close to him n deepened the kiss..

But deep inside they know their limitations so they broke the kiss n look into each other's eyes .. as Dev tightened his grip around her waist, Sona still holding his face

Sonakshi : chahe jo ho jaye Dev meri zindagi me aapki jagah koi nahi le sakta.. yaad hai aapko apni love story batai thi maine aur meri love story ke BOYFRIEND aap the, HUSBAND aap the aur Mere BACHCHE ke PAPA aap hai aur ise koi nahi badal sakta, mai bhi nahi..

Saying this she slide her hands behind his neck n hugged him tightly as Dev too hold her tight both cried n drift to sleep..

Next morning Sona wake up to find herself sleeping in Dev's arm n smiled as she saw her lipstick mark on his face, she is about to touch his face but closed her eyes as Dev try to open his eyes..

Having his Khargosh in his arm's, he always want this every morning.. he looked at her n think that she is still the most beautiful woman, he saw her lipstick smudged around her lips.. he placed a light kiss on her forehead n tightened his hug to keep his lady love as close as possible..

Both close their eyes n thank God for giving them another chance to correct their mistakes.

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Binzzz thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful os...
Loved it...finally they gave a chance for each other...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi
Welcome to the forum 😃

Very beautifully written story...
I would love to read more stories from u

You should write more...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely OS...very nice
Do write more often
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful❤️
Loved it..Do write more...👍🏼

Welcome to the forum dear...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Please do become more active you are an awesome writer!
This was so emotional yet so real! Everything was perfect! Great work! 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome.👏
Beautifully penned.
Do write more.

Welcome to the forum dear. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I luv such stories ...Luked realistic yaar!..
Please write more ...Beautiful n hearttouching..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awww. That was such a sweet os. Hope something like this happens.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I really wish Something happen in serial like this also...

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