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Anni

@Userdoesntexist

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: mehraan
Beautiful dear. .loved it..!
Can we have more of urs on the current plot..im sure u will bring out the better perspective with ur writing!

Thank you. I am not a fan of the current plot, but I may try.

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Sharica

@Sharica

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Awesome...

That is what we all expected but story took a different route...

But thanks for writing this..

Do write more...

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gmgi

@gmgi

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Thank you for writing this. This made everything so much better. This was what their love felt like initially. The one that could weather any storms. The kind of love that made you strong to face anything rather than making you go weak.But then the serial would have ended within a few months. But quality instead of quantity would have been the manthra. Loved this so much.

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Tacker_Holic

@Tacker_Holic

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

This was absolutely outstanding! 👏 You described their emotions perfectly and bought forward their true love. Gosh I wish they showed scenes like this...looking back at their past and working together to rebuild their love story. You are a superb writer! ❤️

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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

It was awesome and this was something we all had expected from the show. I could feel the scene playing in front of my eyes

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dakshasharma

@dakshasharma

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Wonderful. Your os reminds me the initial promos . I really feel bad that CVs did not maintain the original story.

But can you write some more os like this????

Continue dear...

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sia.krpkab

@sia.krpkab

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Beautiful ananya. Your story is exactly how we all felt for our beloved show. And then CVs cheated us big time.

I hope and wish the original writers would come back and save the show before it becomes further joke.

Lovely writing. Bravo :)

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Anni

@Userdoesntexist

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Tacker_Holic
This was absolutely outstanding! 👏 You described their emotions perfectly and bought forward their true love. Gosh I wish they showed scenes like this...looking back at their past and working together to rebuild their love story. You are a superb writer! ❤️

Hi again. Glad that you liked it. And Thank you so much!

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jasw

@jasw

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

This is absolutely awesome, Ananya! I wish I wish I wish ... it happened like this. The promos also would have fitted in nicely with your story. This is what I wanted. I loved the sentence "He was hers. She was his. Nothing else mattered. " Wish Dev was vocal about his problems to Sona on that day like you have written. That would have let Sona know that Dev was hers.

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AngelsFlyAlone

@AngelsFlyAlone

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#20

LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT! This is a terrific work of writing! Thank you so much for a mutually mature conversation between the too. Would've loved this in the show, please be the show's new writer. You're incredibly talented, THANK YOU SO MUCH for this!

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