MDT (Pt 14 pg 21..) - Page 5

Even I don't know buddy,

hey awesome update... this so different story. beyond imagination.. continue soon

Even after 6 parts you have maintained the intrigue quotient very well. Finally they met and he is still stimulated on hearing that Soha missed him. So all is not lost. Loving it. Please continue soon.😳

Emotional yet an awesome chapter..How she wanted to hug him tightly 😭

Originally posted by: cscs

Superb !

Dev has created a parallel which is very similar to what he wanted from his and Sonakshi's marriage.

Excited for the upcoming updates.

Btw why that Madan is happy about something. o.O

Originally posted by: SAKIVIAM

Dev helped madan and sarika when they desperately needed help. If Dev hadn't helped they would have been left in forest till some one pass by. Also night time their is wildlife movement.

They noticed the state of Dev first and they wanted to return the favour for him by helping. So the couple actively involved in this matter and sarika being a employee of sona made it fast.

It is like satisfaction, one of the greatest kind of happiness.

Madan now know Dev is in safe hands and he will be alright.

Sorry couldn't explain better

Just wanted to know how the story is looking from other angle.

What magic you are weaving with your words dear. Wonderful update. Loving this story so much and your narration is so beautiful.👏

Originally posted by: SAKIVIAM

Just wanted to know how the story is looking from other angle.

Whom am I magnifying Dev or sonakshi.

How much did I butcher the characters.

Improvement needed