MDT (Pt 14 pg 21..) - Page 11

How will the regular readers know that you have updated unless you at least change the part number and page number in the header. I was regularly reading it and missed even the character addition you asked in the previous page. Just saw your reply and checked to see a new update. Not fair yaar. Sorry. Will wait for your next update. This one was again good. The new characters have added to the intrigue. Please continue soon.

Actually yesterday I planned to write full day and finish story so thought I can index in end.

Hi

Loved it. 👏 Sona is getting life lessons from another crazy couple just like them.

Wow! I read all your updates in one go, it was excellent! I don't know if it will help, but you read the weekly analysis thread a lot of us just analyze character emotions and examples there, no bashing allowed there, it could help if you need a new perspective on things. Please update soon!

wow your story is full of surprises. i am more intrigued about tanmayi and ranveer now rather than devakshi.😉

regular readers know i am unaware of complete story but this are things i can point as a reason for their failure.

Wow great update! Ramayi were right on that part, but honestly for me another fault is the fact she never communicated with Dev on her thoughts and like Ranmayi said did not take the rights either.

Wonderful update. Yes the problem with sona is she does not know the difference between individuality and isolation. She never exercised het rights as dev dixit's wife. Rights are not given they are exercised.

It's getting interesting day by day.. continue soon