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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: AnanyaGhosh




Ha baba mujhe sab yaad hai.. And i stalked all ur replies... Haha...




Haan haan pata hai
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi😃
Commenting for the very first time though too late but I found the plot very interesting that two childhood friends who have a such amazing friendship and no romantic feelings for each fall in love👏

And the way you writing it its commendable👏

Please update soon😊

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Posted: 8 years ago
Gayu Di!😡
Tune mere comment ka re reply karna bhool gayi na!
Jaa, katti batti, main tujhe chocolate nahi deti!
😔
I'm very sad & angry with you!
😒
I wont talk to you!
You never comment!
that's why aaj se humara BREAKUP!

Love, (Hate You)
Anushka
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: LoveAnushka

No words Gayu Di
The hit chapter of this FF it is!
Last part, Dev's dialogue! Brought all dreams to life & true!
The kiss, I think was not full of lust! It was too secure the love says & future...😳
Literally waiting for next day when Dev & Sona would get close & get to know more about each other...😉😊
Really, last line of this update says all...
A new beginning indeed!😃
Loved this update...
I think iske baad sab ki doubts clear ho jaayegi even Tina's when he will declare Sonakshi is his wife only...
Loved the reply Dev gave to Nats, but Sona ko alcoholic nahi hona chaiye tha, or else who bhi uske muh par maarti par koi bach nikali, saali!😡
I hope ab sab accha ho inn dono ke saath...
Sona already in Love, Dev now in love! Both In love, That akes DevAkshi Lovestory!😳
Yayyy!!!😆

Jaate jaate ek hi cheez mangugi, doge?
Update soon!😆

Love,
Anushka




Thanks a lot Anush!!!!!!!

U r right when u say their kiss was not at all out of lust
It was our of pure love for ur soulmate

Well I'm also eagerly waiting for the next day
Wish u all like what I pen down

Well iske baad kaafi saare doubts clear ho jaane chahiye
Tina ke honge ya nahi yeh nahi pata
Par hopefully sona aur dev ke saare doubts clear ho jayenge

Yaar nuts ki dhulai karne ka haq sirf dev ko hai
Kyunki uski jindagi mein jo bhi galat hua hai woh nuts ki wajah se hai
N she deserves his hatred

Don't worry ab aage sab accha hi hoga
Fingers crossed

Maanga bhi to kya
Quick update
All i would say is i wil try
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: LoveAnushka

Gayu Di!😡

Tune mere comment ka re reply karna bhool gayi na!
Jaa, katti batti, main tujhe chocolate nahi deti!
😔
I'm very sad & angry with you!
😒
I wont talk to you!
Younever comment!
that's why aaj se humara BREAKUP!

Love, (Hate You)
Anushka





Oye bola to tha bade comments ka reply baad mein dungi
Duffer padh na theek se
Tu aisa nahi kar sakti apne gayu di ke saath
Dekh bade comments mein sabse pehle tere comment pe reply kiya
Chal batti karle ab
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: life93

<font color="#3300cc" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="1">Hi😃</font>

<font color="#3300cc" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="1">Commenting for the very first time though too late but I found the plot very interesting that two childhood friends who have a such amazing friendship and no romantic feelings for each fall in love👏</font>

<font color="#3300cc" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="1">And the way you writing it its commendable</font>👏

<font color="#330099" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Please update soon</font>😊





To be very frank i have always noticed u like my work
Infact u r the 1st person to like on many occasions
5Thanku so much for coming to fore n putting up a comment
Will update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Kuku_92

Hey gayatri di...😊

Wonderful chapter...Mazaa agya isse pdhkr .
1. Dev's self introspection was very nicely written.
2. Yeaaahhh...😃thanku for fulfilling my wish of giving sona a sexy n hot saree... Dev just can't stop himself from drooling her..😉😳
3. Nat's Ka chapter bhi apne bahut achhe se close kiya hai. I really liked how Dev didn't send her to jail becoz after all due to her only he found his true soulmate...
4. Our talli sona😆Jo cheez wo hosh mein kbhi ni bol skti wo cheeze usne Nashe mein bol di apne handsome hubby ko..
5. Finally , our devakshi's first kissn Dev's cuddling her in his arms.
Next morning will be truelly a new beginning of their life n i hope it would be a positive one only...😊

Waiting for your next update





Hey Tanu

Thanku so much dear

1. Dev ka introspection bohot difficult tha likhna

2. Sona ko hot saree deni hi thi
Dev ko uspe lattu jo hona tha

3. Nuts ki dhulayi was long pending
Dev ko mauka deke apne dil ki bhadaas nikali maine

4. Sona hosh mein thodi na kehti
Isiliye talli kar diya

5. Devakshi kiss 😳
Dev cuddling 😳

Ab dekhte hai agli subah kya hota hai
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Rhy2015

Awww...
Blushing 😳
You've done a wonderful job Gaiyaa...
Wat an explanation of their firts kiss... 😳
Finally, they both are falling for each other n facade of just friends is coming off... 😛

Natasha the witch, kabhi Nahi sudhregi but m happy that Dev has shown her real place 😡

Btw pink saree was baby pink our dark 😆 , just curious to know...


Thanks for dedicating this part to me 😛
Btw vodka n wine mey actual difference mujhe Bhi Nahi pata 😆 except for the alcohol level... 😆
Waiting for the next update...jaldi karna





Oho look who's blushing
Snehu jiii aisa bhi kya padh liya aapne 😆

Kiss ka lekha jokha kuch jyaada ho gaya kya 😆
Lagta hai kaafi details ho gaya

Nuts di witch gayi jhadu pe baith ke
Ab waapas na ayegi

Pink kaunsi pink thi yeh agle update mein pata chalega
Gaur se padhna

Vodka ki . kasam
Yeh apke naam to hona hi tha
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy





Oye bola to tha bade comments ka reply baad mein dungi
Duffer padh na theek se
Tu aisa nahi kar sakti apne gayu di ke saath
Dekh bade comments mein sabse pehle tere comment pe reply kiya
Chal batti karle ab

Ohhh! Sorry padhna bhool gayi hongi!
Haan, haan theeke hai!
Hmmm... Goody goody girl😆
Yes Batti!
😉
BATTTI GAYU DI!!!!!!😃

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: LoveAnushka


Ohhh! Sorry padhna bhool gayi hongi!
Haan, haan theeke hai!
Hmmm... Goody goody girl😆
Yes Batti!
😉
BATTTI GAYU DI!!!!!!😃





Paagol ladki
Aise karte hai apni dii ke saath
Apna apna update de aur khush kar mujhe
Warna meri katti

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