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Gayatri

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1321

Originally posted by: Razzy03
Very interesting 👏

Thanku

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Gayatri

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1322

Ab bass anu aur anji ko reply karna baaki hai
Aaj raatvtak ho jayega

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Suchi_Ejf_fan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1323

Awesome chap di
Charge nhi h isiliye chota sa comment
Sorry and bye

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Gayatri

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1324

Originally posted by: flowers321
Awesome chap di
Charge nhi h isiliye chota sa comment
Sorry and bye

Hey suchi dear
Thanku
Koi baat nahi

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Sonali Mahajan

@Cutiepie.sona

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1325

Hey Gaddi!

How are u?

Update ekdum first class hai!👏

I liked the part where Ishu is trying to change herself for Sona...

And Dev..Loved how he's trying his best to get back Sona in his life

I know Sona can't stay angry with her bunny for so long...She'll forgive him after some time!😉

Waiting to see how's Dev gonna impress Sona!😳.

Update soon Di😛

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Gayatri

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1326

Originally posted by: Cutiepie.sona
Hey Gaddi!
How are u?
Update ekdum first class hai!👏
I liked the part where Ishu is trying to change herself for Sona...
And Dev..Loved how he's trying his best to get back Sona in his life
I know Sona can't stay angry with her bunny for so long...She'll forgive him after some time!😉
Waiting to see how's Dev gonna impress Sona!😳.
Update soon Di😛

Hey cutti
Long time love
Kya baat kar rahi hai u loved isshu
Chalo kuch to punya kamaya kalmuhi ne
Dev to sona ko mana kar rahega
Ab sona kitne din dur rahegi apne bunny se
Will update soon
Tata

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Sharica

@Sharica

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1327

Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy

Haan haan gini dii
Sab pata hai
Rbs rocks
Waiting for ur comment

Aa gayi main...

It was am emotional one...

All women in Dev's life had made him sleep on the bench😆 that part was so true ...

And vo cocroach and lizard wala to kitna funny tha...Dev is trying to bring Sona back to her chirpy self...she is somewhat fine now but still angry with bunny...and usko chid ke chali gayi..

Koi nahi wife ko hurt karne ki punishment to milni chahiye...isliye don't take panga with your wife and vi bhi itna hurt karne wala...Ab ragdo naak Mr Dev Dixit..abhi se apni cheeku ke bina nahi reh paa rahe..jab you will realise that you have fallen in love to kya hoga...

Waiting to see what Dev will do to get back his cheeku...I am so excited😊

Ish aunty apne paap sudharne ke liye Sona ki baat maan li..bete ke dil pr kya beet rahi hain, pata hain apko???

But I enjoyed reading this chapte..

Update soon..

Offc se reply kar rahi hu Gayu..dekh mera pyar..sabse pehle comment tumhare FF pe...

Chal bye...tak to you soon...btw..lets connect on whatsapp..

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Heshine

@20701

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1328

Hey Gayu di...! This was indeed perfect epi ...I would say...!

Awesome to the core...! Wow...wow...wow...wowo...wow...wiow...

Oh my goodness...I'm really falling off words to describe ur writing skills..!

U really such an amazing writer...!

Bestest...!👏👏...

A flawless writer...!

Pls update the next epi soon di..!

Waiting fa ur next..

And sorry di...I couldn't post the cmnt earlier...as I was not keeping well...!

Thanks fa the pm di..!

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Gayatri

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1329

Originally posted by: AnanyaGhosh
Omggg... Itna sad update kyu... Kyu kyu kyu... I hate sadness in my dev sona ka life.. Par i guess some unpardonable mistakes happened which made these things in thr lives...

Update bht achha hai di... Loved it... That cute romantic moment and funny cockroach scene was really good... Even i m scared of cockroaches... Lol... And lizards nt really...

Now is really ish sudharing??? Agar its yes toh i m very happy...

And sona aa gyi saman leke???? Nooo... Dev k saath mera bhi dil toota... I knew it ki woh kabhi wapas nbi Ayegi yehi sochke gyi hogi.. And see i m right... Bijoy ne muh peh liya and asha is so sweet...

Dev ne call kiya sona ko... Pucha sab... Itni maafi maangi... Itni... Sona aab maaf kardo.. Jitna chillana hai chaiilao maaro sab karo par wapas aa jao.. Pls.. Dev k life mein le aao sona ko wapas... Gayu di pls.. I m feeling like I sank in an ocean reading ur chap.. Itna sad laga.. Itna dard hua... Kyu hua yeh sab... O god...

Aaj main likhne ki mood mein nhi.. Itna achha likha hai apne Isiliye... I guess Some updates should remain as it is.. Too many words destroy the essence... And this was one... Loved it... A lot... Bt sad...

Pls di.. Agle mein sab thik kardo.. Mujhe roona aa rha hai.. Okay bye.. Zyada na tadpao dev ko.. Pls.. Bye bye..

Ise sad nahi emotional kehte hai anu my sun 😭
Kyunki sad nahi hoga to happy kaise hoga
Aur happy nahi hoga to hum sab smile kaise karenge

Chalo u liked my fav part
Room waala pranky romcom
Waise scared to main bhi hoon
Of cockroaches
Lizards m not scared bassi dnt like them
Waise I'm only scared of doggy

Waise issh is really trying
Lets all help her out too

Ab dekho sona to chali gayi
Aur boli ki waapas nahi ayegi
Par dev ko yeh manjoor nahi
Ab dev to use waapas laake rahega
Kab kaise yeh dekhne ki baat hai
Aur sona use kaise maaf karegi yeh bhi dekhna padega

Don't wry anu meri jaan
sab theek hoga tu bass padhti jaa