SS:Papa and his Pari(Dev-Soha Bonding)*COMPL* EPILOGUE pg124 26/3/2017 - Page 76

Created

Last reply

Replies

886

Views

103.9k

Users

56

Likes

942

Frequent Posters

Aazeen02 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: WeRockTheWorld

I am late to read this one...but thoroughly enjoyed...very emotional...I liked the way Dev explained his pain to Sonakshi...not many a times we get to hear fathers version of pain...about missing their kids childhood...this is so beautifully written...I wish in our serial also we get Dev to speak openly to Sonakshi ...not hiding his pain...he needs to voice out his pain to her ...only then she can understand him better...and in this story he has just done that !! 👏 ⭐️

Will eagerly wait for your next update...

Come on Aswathy di... You are not as late as u are proclaiming urself to be...😆
Fathers, I have always wondered are those silent pillars of support, whose emotional contribution is often not counted...His anger is talked, his financial support is talked... But very less a father can sit and tell how much his heart melted at the thought of his little child at home, playing alone, or with the child's mother and stuff... By the time he comes home, the kid is off to bed... A father loses 6 days a week of his child's childhood to catch up on every 7th day... He doesn't have Monday Blues for he needs to go to the office, he has Monday blues because he will have to wait for another weekend to shut off his work and open his arms for his child to share a bit of his childhood and rub that off on a wearing-off father's tiredness...

It takes for an understanding mother who knows even when the father doesn't speak, what he is going through... She digs into those spaces of the heart he never opens up, and he bares his heart about how he feels he is missing his child's childhood- "Kya aisa nahi ho sakta ki main usko apne saamne dekhoon? Har roz? har pal?"
That's not just Dev's irony, but every father's...😳

PS: Nearing Women's Day, I getting as emotional as it is "Father's Day"😆 Sorry for my overflowing emotions...😆
Soumya21ag thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjali333

Arey ab to bta diya😉
Hume target se dar nahi lagta sahab😆

chalo koi nahi
jab tak aap mere saath ho
target se kya darna😆😆
Anjali333 thumbnail
8th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Soumya21ag

chalo koi nahi
jab tak aap mere saath ho
target se kya darna😆😆

Jab tak hum sab sath hain...
To target se hum nahi darte😆
Soumya21ag thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjali333

Jab tak hum sab sath hain...
To target se hum nahi darte😆

sahi kaha dii
Aazeen02 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjali333

*Unres*

WOW!
What an emotional update...
Excellent⭐️
--Thank you ji...😃

Show mein aisa kyu nahi...
Dev kyu apni maa ke paas chala gaya tha bhaag kar
Bola tha na ye CVs ko bhej do...par aapne meri baat nahi maani na
Ab bhi time hai...
Dev sonakshi ka emotional confrontation mil sakta hai...
Ye wala or tadap tadap ke OS ka 2nd part...dono bhej do...CVs impress ho jaaenge...or aapko rakh lenge
-- Anjali, aur kitna mazaak karogi yaar...😆
Mujhe apni beizzati karaane ka shaukh nahi hai...😆
The makers will ultimately do what they have already planned...😆

Iska to ek aur bhi faayda hoga...
Agar apko unhone rakh liya...to aap hume future story bhi bata doge...
Jaldi karna...
-- Main apne SS ki future story nahi batati, tum show ki story jaanogi mujhse?😆
Tumhe lagta hai ki main itni achhi hoon ki tum log jo demand karoge wo main hanste-hanste de dungi?😉😆

Dev soha ka kitna cute and sweet moment tha...
I loved it...
Mujhe show mein bhi ye chahiye
-- Haan yaar, chahiye toh mujhe bhi... I would love Dev making her hair or feeding from his hand... I would mar-mitofy on that very scene...

Kya bola hai dev ne sona ko...ekdum emotional hi kar diya...😭😭
Sona kuch boli kyu nahi...
Mujhe uski baat bhi sunni thi...
Kahaan aake khatam kar diya
Gandi baat...
-- Sona di iski zimmedar hain... Unhone ye outline bana ke di thi... Go behind her...🤣

De do
Next part bhi ab...
Padhne ke liye bhut eager hun main...
-- Bohot jald hi milega... Sona di ne promise kiya hai that she will try and write the outline for chapter-5 tonight... Agar ho gaya toh kal tak mil jaayega update shayad...

Sona di se kar lenge contact...bas aap kar do...
Jaldi jaldi...
-- Main kya kar doon jaldi-jaldi? Mere paas outline hi nahi hai... Wo toh Sona di likhke deti hain na... Main toh bas uss outline ke basis pe phir se pura update likh deti hoon...
Just ask her when she can give me the outline...😃

And 1 important thing...
Maine 1 post banai hai... Chandani di ke liye Congratulations post
Aapko link bhi send kar diya

Ab apko wahaan par reply karna hai...
Please
-- Ye achha tumhara joote do paise lo wala transaction thing hai haan...😆
Kar dungi maate...😆

Aazeen02 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sona_naksh

someone is in strict mood i see 😆

Very strict...😳
I don't go around begging people to read my works, and I don't phokat mein pm when people aren't even reading...
Let few people be, who genuinely want to read... I will have more time to tend to them, rather than informing those who don't even have time to tell that they are not reading anymore...👍🏼
sona_naksh thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Wow!!![DIV]People have a walking during sleep disorder...[/DIV][DIV]I have writing during sleep disorder...[LOL][/DIV][DIV]Now I can proudly say that I walk writing, I speak writing, I sleep writing...[LOL][LOL][/DIV]

i love this disorder of urs [=))]
Aazeen02 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sona_naksh

if u can write dis while dozibg on and off ..den i dunno wat to expect if u r fully awake 😉 😳 🤣

I will become a hot shot writer then...🤪🤣
Aazeen02 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Agrata23

amazing update dear👏..it was too emotional felt sad for dev..loved it thanks for the PM😊

Thank you very much!😃
Aazeen02 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sona_naksh

Aazeen 🤗
Subah se padh rhi hu thodi thodi kishton me ...really running out of time ...but finally got time to comment ...😆
i always run out of words to tell ..how amazing u write and dis is no different 😳
I m loving this more and more ...❤️
Plz update soon
thanks for pm

Diii...🤗
Aap jab bhi padh paao, jitni deir mein bhi padh paayein, it is always okay...
It is your baby anyway, and you already know how this one will shape up...
Toh koi chinta ki baat nahi hai...

Main kya likhti hoon di, sab aapka likha hua hai...
Jo bhi appreciations aap meri taraf bhej rahi hain, wo actually aapke liye hi hain...🤗

UPDATE SOON??? SERIOUSLY??? Baadal keh raha hai baarish se ki jaldi dharti pe barasna?😆

And thanks for the pm? Like seriously???😆
Aapko main pm karti hi kyu hoon, mujhe nahi pata...😆
Edited by Aazeen02 - 8 years ago

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".