SS - Can we talk? Part 6 pg 84 Feb 14 - Page 63

Originally posted by: deepsel

I am back 😎 First of all extra jhappi for pulling a midnight stunt for this update🤗

🤗 Thanks for such a beautiful review and apologies for not responding earlier.. I had someone sitting on my head... to ensure the next part is out as per commitment on Valentine's Day!! So poor me had to get to that first!! 😉

Sona- Boses:

How beautifully you both have written Sona handling Bijoy on the phone👏 This made so much sense for the reasons she had to stay back in Delhi and the flow is very convincing! You guys also kept Bijoy true to his character of mistrust in Dev but still his trust intact on Sona without any unnecessary screaming!! Loved how she made them stay in Kolkata instead of hurrying like we saw in original..who doesn't like some lone Devakshi moments huh😉 How cute that picture Suha drawn was !I would literally visualize it through your capable writing!!

There are just so many open tracks, it made sense to take it slow... Lets deal with one thing at a time.

Ishwari:

Very typical of her to seek kitchen to share her happiness😆 and even more typical of her to judge Sona what she might or might not doGuess what Ishwari, our writers here have already made Dev know about his daughter unlike your CVs who want to prove you right at any cost😈

It has been rightly pointed out na... Ishwari uses her cooking to showcase her love. Each time Dev rejects her cooking, he is in turn rejecting her love... or so she interprets.

Dev - Suha:

Oh what a beauty of writing here ❤️ I can't wait to see this happen on screen!! I visualized Dev's bright face with soft tears in the corner of his eyes when he witnessed his princess drawing, Sona's flowing emotions seeing father-daughter bonding, Soha's pride in showing her talent and her bliss seeing a happy papa..absolutely fantastic ladies 👏 I loved how Sona had maintained every memory of Suha so Dev doesn't miss those 6 years even though if not in person..I could feel Dev's flurry of emotions here , can't help but feel for this poor guy !!

That's one of the reasons I feel more sympathetic towards Dev. He has no one. Sona has her parents, her mother, Soha... Why she needs another emotional anchor is beyond me.. But Dev is kind of lost by himself.

Dev - Golu:

I loved that Dev is still the same old Bigcha for Golu even after knowing about his daughter..such a cute bond they share and I literally LMAO imagining Golu and Soha together putting Dev in the spot😆

Let's just Get Devaskshi to adopt Golu. .. hain na??

Devakshi - Kids:

Awww the mere words in single sentence is such a bliss to read, I wonder what will be my condition if i happen to see this on screen😆 Loved how Sona bared her heart about her fear (Yo Jatin take a hike buddy..you are not needed here😆) and Dev's comforting words are even more bang on..definitely lot has changed Sonakshi, which you have no idea about!! Loved how Dev managed both kids taking turns and making them special👏 It was really bliss..which was missed for six long years , only if they had the brains to sit and introspect years back

All I can say here is I am glad you loved this scene. That's one thing we all missed. These were friends for heavens sake before they fell in love.. Where was the teamwork to deal with adversaries... What happened to their friendship. This scene was not actually planned... but it seemed so logical that the growing bond of Dev and Soha is bound to make Sonakshi a little insecure. How she deals with it... so unlike Ishwari like... had to be the highlight!!

Devakshi - ishwari:

Oh the mere words in single sentence is sending scare waves 😆 As expected she barges to his office to question about her rights and I love Dev's words here " My daughter didn't have father for 6 years because of you, now I won't separate her from her mother again because of you" 👏 whoever wrote this take a bow ladies !! And the surprise of all Sona hears this

Glad this made sense... I see the makers are working on this angle.. We have Ishwari barging into Dev's office in today's episode I see.

Should I say more how much am looking forward to next part 😳 Thank you for this reading delight ladies !!

Originally posted by: deepsel

Res !!!!!!!!!!!

I am first i am first...Geena am first

UNRes

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What an absolute Valentine delight you both have served us Divya and Suvi 👏 Thank you so much, can't ask for a better ending !!!❤️

Who is this matured Dev you have written in your story? Why don't I see him in the originals? A man who can introspect, balance and care at the same time!!.. Damn am married long back and don't have daughters too to bring this guy as dhamad

Neither do we... All boys here... Hopefully we raise such Devs

Ishwari though still insecure , has come a long way in this story to heed her Son's request and who was willing to give that space to Sona till she loosened a bit !! I can forgive this Ishwari easily because she is indeed redeemable now😳

Complete Ishwari redemption is long long away. So getting her to a point where she seems redeemable at the same time not really redeemed was a challenge to write. ...

A sorry would not cut it out. So I am glad you caught that.

Loved the scene where Sona stands outside the house and Dev takes Suhana inside without compelling her..talk about respecting the self respect 👏

They need to form their friendship. Without respect there is no friendship... Isn't it why these two seem like such lost causes in the serial. There is just no respect for each other. Neither are they doing anything to gain it.

And no need to say about the little wonders and their banters, they are warming up the episodes and they sure warmed up this story too in your capable writing!!

A new journey of PaCha & MaaChi starting with a fresh friendship and I can live with that as a perfect closure to my Devakshi's restart ❤️

Wishing you both and the readers of this OS a very happy Valentines day 🤗 Love like no Tomorrow and Live like no Yesterday !!

Beautifully summarized!! You do have a way with words you know that right!! Amazing!!

Originally posted by: sona_naksh

Ur update is nth less than a Valentine's Day gift ...amazing it is ...loved it ...
loved everything about it ...so finally dev has taken a stand and told ishwari her share of mistakes properly ...although she has still not acceoted ..but dev dint give her any other option ...
liked d way dev balanced soha and gol7 ...he loved both kids dearly ...
n d best part is d emergence of frndship among two long lost frnds again ...
if possible plz update
thank u Suvika and Divya for writing it

Originally posted by: AngelsFlyAlone

KATTI KATTI KATTI KATTI KATTI!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: deepsel

Res !!!!!!!!!!!

I am first i am first...Geena am first

😆 Guess Geena was busy celebrating Valentines day 😉

UNRes

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What an absolute Valentine delight you both have served us Divya and Suvi 👏 Thank you so much, can't ask for a better ending !!!❤️

you are very welcome and thank YOU for staying up so late to post this review.

Who is this matured Dev you have written in your story? Why don't I see him in the originals? A man who can introspect, balance and care at the same time!!.. Damn am married long back and don't have daughters too to bring this guy as dhamad

Neither do we, actually. But even if we did, no matter how redeemed Ishwari is, I don't think I would want my daughter to have that kind of saas.

Ishwari though still insecure , has come a long way in this story to heed her Son's request and who was willing to give that space to Sona till she loosened a bit !! I can forgive this Ishwari easily because she is indeed redeemable now😳

I left Ishwari in Divya's capable hands for this final part. 😆

Loved the scene where Sona stands outside the house and Dev takes Suhana inside without compelling her..talk about respecting the self respect 👏

First time around they jumped both into friendship and love without having a strong foundation - understanding and respect. Show mein na sahi... we are glad we could do it right the second time around at least in this SS.

And no need to say about the little wonders and their banters, they are warming up the episodes and they sure warmed up this story too in your capable writing!!

Oh I thoroughly enjoyed writing Dev - Soha - Golu scenes. 😃 Shaheer makes it so easy to visualise them actually.

A new journey of PaCha & MaaChi starting with a fresh friendship and I can live with that as a perfect closure to my Devakshi's restart ❤️

This OS started with Dev asking Sona - Can we talk. We brought it to a complete circle and closed it with Sona asking Dev - Can we talk. Glad it worked out that way. 😊

Wishing you both and the readers of this OS a very happy Valentines day 🤗 Love like no Tomorrow and Live like no Yesterday !!

Love the life you live. Live the life you love!! ❤️

Thank you so much Deepa. 🤗

Originally posted by: tia.o

Awww... You gave us a Valentine's Day gift? Thank you. My Valentine's Day is getting better and better... First bouquet, then cupcakes and now Suvika and Divya's update.

Bouquet and cupcakes, huh!! Wish my hubby takes some visesh tippani from your hubby Tia. 😆

Needless to say, loved it. This amazingly understanding, strong, restrained and respectful Dev was amazing to read. I wish I could watch it on screen except the OTT drama.

Yeah me too. One scene.. at least one scene where he thinks and acts instead of flying off his handle and thrashing things!!

Ishwari's insecurity is still cropping up. But she is showing amazing restraint too because Dev is firm in his place. And since it's his daughter, he gets to call the shot. Love that too.

Yeah. That's what we thought too. He might not have fought for his love but he has more at stake than just himself when the little girl entered the picture.

Soha and Golu are as usual adorable. But what I loved the most is that slowly developing friendship between two people who started out as friends but lost their way.

There is no relationship stronger than one whose foundation is friendship.

True that.

CVs should hire you guys to write the script. 👏

Thank you Tia

Originally posted by: IFfreak

Aww

Such a lovely one this was...

And yes,coming to think of it, Dev in his unadulterated version was sketched to sweep any woman off her feet.

Your Dev's got me all gooey.. .. Eiasa wala kahan milega. I am ready to dump my current BF..hee hee..

you stay away from this guy. He belongs to the authors. All rights reserved. 😆