SS - Can we talk? Part 6 pg 84 Feb 14 - Page 42

Originally posted by: Jade0001

Thank you ladies this update was awesome

Communication the only tool that really solves a million problems

I like that finally Soha ask Dev if she can call him papa but the hug oh he must have felt heaven at that moment

Soha is so well trained and exactly knows that she should be quiet when there is a call but Dev nothing at this stage is more important to him than spending time with his daughter

Yes. I think Soha needs to relax more...play more...With Dev, I think she will become that slightly naughty, pampered child again who doesn't have to be understanding all the time.

he likes the fact that Soha tries to draws out similarities between him and her a touching scene was Sonakshi clicking a photo of father and daughter and perhaps she knows that Dev is the happiest been with his daughter

oh how I hope that Sona and Dev can also communicate when it come to Soha

If it is in the show...God knows how that will be handled. In the OS...sabr.

I'm dreading a custody battle Makers should read this story and get some ideas

🤗 Thank you so much for this review.

Originally posted by: AngelsFlyAlone

I'm beyond obsessed with such a serene write up and so awfully heartwarming I mean for real take a bow you two talented as f people!!!!! Such a wonderful fictitiously inviting and totally unbiased work of creativity. Love you guys!

Originally posted by: fanktlk

The first meeting is definitely interesting. Soha cannot really run into Dev's arms. I hope we do justice to the part.

Originally posted by: Drcs

Why this suja? My eyes moistened by the time I reached the last para...

YOU have a knack lady...I somehow managed to get out of my addiction of KRPKAB...

I am out of the addiction of the show. I watch it for time pass these days. But I guess now I have the new addiction. This OS 😆 Thanks Chithra.

now you hooked me up again...this is not fair...I loved it will be an understatement...now you know what will happen with the same enthusiasm we will wait for the father-daughter milan...you have set the bars sooo high that if the CVs messup it will be great disappointment...

Look at it this way - this will be a break from that Tom and Jerry circus. 😉😆

Dev carried Golu in caveman style you know whatflashed in my mind😉😆😆...was imagining the father-daughter dialogues...it will be a treat to watch...see again back to square one

😆 Let's see where this OS goes. As of now we haven't even firmly decided where to stop it.

Originally posted by: fanktlk

Glad you enjoyed it my dear. Suvika wrote out that part brilliantly. The hesitation and the awkwardness of the meeting comes out so beautifully.

In the meanwhile, in the serial... If only...

Originally posted by: Mohi99

I just love to read...u just go on writing and I will read...superbly written. ...I super like the plot of mutual consent of office sharing rather than what's being currently shown...also Dev and Doha scenes r to die for...loved them...love u both...pls pls pm me ur next

Luv,M

Originally posted by: Suvika.

What a beautiful way to express your pleasure Young lady!! Or should I say - Young Talented Writer??

Thank you so much and happy to your heart-warmers. 😉😆

Originally posted by: Drcs

@fanktlk did you write or Suja? I got a PM from Suja, I thought she has written it...I am confused now...

Originally posted by: romanticgurl070

Awesome update dear 👏

Its sad Dev is trying to bond with his own daughter but it doesn't matter because it seems Soha is already in love with her dad by now..

I love the last line

Originally posted by: dakshasharma

Superb update...

Waiting for next update