Devakshi FF: Small Moments (Completed)

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coolmeet

@coolmeet

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Posted: 8 years ago

#691

Double dhamaka. ( Yahan ek ch likhne mein jaan nikalti hai).

Thanks for two bonus.

Read both the chapter.

Sonakshi left for Kolkata.

Emotional updates.

Very well written.

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simplesweety1

@simplesweety1

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Posted: 8 years ago

#692

Again, All I Have To Say Is That U R AN AWSM WRITER AND TYSSM FOR 2 UPDATES AT ONE TIME! TY FOR TAKING TIME OUT FROM UR BUSY SCHEDULE! AWSM CHAPTER! YAYAYAYAYAAYAYAYA! FINALLY SONA AND DEV WILL BE DEVAKSHI! BALE BALE SHAVA SHAVA! IF U WILL NOT Update soon then be ready for punches and tamatars! 😆

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Shaun

@Jade0001

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+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#693

Thank for double updates it was a fabulous treat

Gosh ! Natasha's father forcing Dev into marrying Natasha but Dev had told him he does not want any deal with his company as it deals with lots of fraudulent actives but the man was adamant he'll hurt Sonakshi and her family thankfully Natasha too found out

Dev knew he was hurting Sonakshi and he hated it but he needed her to be safe but now he can go to her as Natasha has freed him from the commitment making Dev very happy and off he rushes off to Kolkatta to get his girl

Sonakshi was broken but her family supported her and agreed for her to leave the city and stay with her massi and work there too

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moni160282

@moni160282

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Posted: 8 years ago

#694

Hey mishti , thanks for the update. Lekin ab Tera gala dabane ka main kar raha hain. Main time pe chapter close kar diya.😡 . CVs ki tarah tu bhi unpredictable ho gayi hain😆. Waiting desperately for next part. Yr story has good flow. Keep the good work going.

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Mohi99

@Mohi99

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#695

Thank u so much for the bonus and also for the PM. ...and now...mishti dear...u r such an amazing writer...pls pls pls update soon. ...m waitinggg

Luv, m

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Sneha

@Rhy2015

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#696

Mishti 🤗
This is for double update n it's very nice...
Love for this...
But ab mujhe Aise surprises aur dete raho...
One more question ...
When is the next update???????i knw I might seem greedy but I really like reading ur story..

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Gayatri

@Gayu_K

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#697

Part 15
Brilliant one mishti
Poor sona kaise dekh sakti thi dev ki shaadi kisi air se hpte hue
To socha khud hi kahin door chali jaaye
Aur ritwick aur riya kitne acche hai
They r genuinely trying to help out sonakshi

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Gayatri

@Gayu_K

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#698

Part 16
yeh update bhi bohot accha tha
To dev ne yeh sab kuch sona keliye kiya
How sweet of him
N natasha is a sweetheart too
Finally dev has reached Sona's place n they both r alone in the house
Does it hint a passionate confession???????
Well update soon

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Erina

@Erinasingh69

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#699

Oooyeee hoooyeee sweety dodo update ek saath haaayeee mai maari jaava 😳

Dil khush kar dita putar tune 😆 😉

But ye kya 😡

Koi nhi post soon 😆 Pta nhi mera good luck hai ya tm v sad ho present epi ko dekh kar jo tmne v decide kar hi liya dev sonakshi ko devakshi banane ka 😳 😛

Chalo ab post soon putar ji wait nhi ho rha 😆

N as always thanks for d pm 😳

Waitinggg for next part

No short update next time 😡 😲

Long update hi chahiye mjhe nhi to... 😡 😉 😆

Till then take care nd

loads of love 😳 N hugs for beautiful n two update in one go 🤗