Devakshi os UPDATED (Romantic patch up)

Hii guys 😉 ...I'm fardee...im not very active on this forum due to my xams...but I make a point to read almost all the posts daily...before I used to think im the only gutter mind but reading all the posts nd comments I realized im not the only one but there r many who think at a notch higher than me 😆



Kkk I hav too many devakshi scenes playing in my mind but as I said due to time constraint I couldn't make many os but I would love writing them once I'm done with the xams (which r in December ) and I
couldn't resist myself from posting this small and quick os... Soo ill stop my rant nd begin the os..

It all starts with the yesterdays scene where bijoy insults dev

Dev looks guilty ...bijoy makes faces nd to dilute situation Asha speaks up

Asha: Sona ...dev ko apne kamre me le chal ...vahi kuch bhej deti Hu khane ke liye..
Both of them go into sona's room😉

Sona tries to talk but dev ignores her completely nd sits on her bed

Sona: Dev aapko baba ka baat ka bura laga

Dev:itna bhi nahi jitna subah tumari wajah se Hua nd he makes puppy face

Sona tries to reason out again nd goes to stand infront of dev


Sona: Devv...baat ko samjhiye na...acha main Maanti hun Ku main apko batiye bina haan kardi par aap meri situation ko tho samjho...main aur kya karti dev...acha agar aap mere place Mein hote tho kya karte ...bataiye

Dev:Jo tumne kiyyaa woh definitely nai Karta... woh nai Banta Jo main nahi hoon

Sona:lekin dev main toh bass apki family main fit hona chahti hoon

Dev:Maine tumhe ek baar nahi sau baar kaha Ki tume inn sab Ki zarurat nahi lekin tum wahi karogi jo tum chahti Ho...


Sona:acha ab gussa mat hoo...sorry ...is baar aapse poochungi...mera ya apka koi bhi baat Ho hum saath main decide karange...theek hai...

He doesn't respond ...so she holds her ears nd makes a cute face...seeing this he actually melts but tries to not show on his face

Sona:waise Kisi ne kaha Ki koi bhi jhagde ko raat ke pehle khatam karna chahiye warna raat poori waste Ho jati hai😉 ..she says this and smiles


Finally dev looks at her nd smiles😃


Sona:finally apne smile toh kiya

Dev: Waise us nau din ke baare main bolke desperate nahi banna chahta lekin mujhe lagta hai Ki sirf main akele excited Hu hamare sr ko lekar


Sona:aree dev...ye kya baat hui...waise kisne aapko kaha Ki main excited nahi hoon...she cups his face and says jitna apko us din ka intezar hai utna hi mujhe bhi hai...ladkiyan waise ladko jaise open nai Ho sakti na (says this nd blushes😳) nd tries to move away...dev grabs her hand nd pulls her into his lap

Sona:devv...kya kar rahe hoo...darwaaza khula Hua hai



Dev:darwaza band kiya toh bhi tum kuch karne kaha deti hoo😆... She hits him lightly on his chest
Waise tum aisi cute cute si batein karogi toh main khud ko control kaise karu

They hav an intense eyelock...sona still in dev's lap placing her arms around his neck nd both r lovingly looking at each other...she caressess his hair nd places a forehead kiss


Dev:acha tumari excitement bas itni si hai...nd smiles naughtily😉
Sona then turns his face to one side and kisses his cheek😳...dev is highly surprised at this😲 ...


Sona:abhi Jane do...nd dev is highly turned on by sona nau..lol...so he nods his head negatively nd pulls her evn more closer by waist sending chills down her spine...dev kisses her shoulder nd sona tries to get up but she gives in..



Dada and Elena scene:

Dada cmes home dejectedly...


Asha: Saurav tu theek haina ..kuch baat hai

Dada:nai maaa...

Asha:Maine aj Teri pasand ka khana banaya

Dada:aj special kya hai maa


Elena:dev nd sona aaye hai
Saurabh smiles happily


Dada:kaha hai dono...

Elena:sona ke room Mein

Asha: Jaa kar mil le phir kuch hi der Mein nikal jayenge dono

Dada: Mai milkar aata Hu

Elena and dada leave to sona room...


Elena:dada ...apko nai lagta hame Jane se pehle ek signal Dena chahiye...pata nai dono love birds busy honge...
Both of them giggle at this 😆

Dev and sona still in embrace ...sona on devs lap with her hands around his neck and devs hand on her waist...now dev proceeds to kiss her neck...he buries his face deep into her neck and sona grabs his hair tightly...

Elena: Sona ...sona kaha hai tu

Dev and sona get alerted by her voice nd suddenly move apart nd in process sona mistakenly hits devs eye with her hand


Dev:ouch

Sona:oo..sorry dev...dev sitting on bed and sona standing beside him ...behaving as if nothing happened...

Dada and Elena enter...sona looks at dada and she runs to hug him nd both of them ask abt each others well being...

Elena:hum ne apko disturb toh Mai kiya naa sonaaa..saying this she winks at sona😉

Sona: Nai hum sirf baat kar rahe the ...nd looks at dev😳

Elena:woh acha hai...humne socha kuch aur kar rahe the
..sona blushes ...dev goes to meet saurabh ...they both hav a chat
...its night already sooo devakshi take blessings nd leave to dixit house...


That's it guys...it is just a small try by me to write something very simple considering our devakshi are too sanskari...im not very good like others in this forum to write hardcore passoionate os...and sorry for any typos...

Nice OS dear... I do hope you continue this OS with what happens in dicit house that night. I do hope sona breaks the fast

hai dear..i liked dis shot alot..u keptd it near to reality..i realy hope v wil get to wch scenes like dese..its very cute esp devaksh cnvo..

Loved ur os...

Lovely OS👏soo cute & romantic as well...

thank u guys...im glad that u ppl liked it

Originally posted by: Monu1602

Nice os. Wish to see a similar patch up in serial.

Originally posted by: Missadorable

hai dear..i liked dis shot alot..u keptd it near to reality..i realy hope v wil get to wch scenes like dese..its very cute esp devaksh cnvo..

Originally posted by: Chandniyati

Loved ur os...

Close to our sanskari devakshi...

Do continue...

Thnks for giving tym apart from ur studies.

Yes issue is seriously making it a big thing... in a fast there is nothing wrong in hugging n kissing except a lip lock... cheek kiss does not matter...

Liplock is not supposed coz it breaks the fast..

Above information as per my brahmin tradition...

Wish u best luck for Ur best luck n exams as well... hope u will join as an active member after that...