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Hi guys, i am Raji this is my first os I hope u guys will like this.


PROMISE OF LOVE


The admissions were going on in the college but amongst the crowd and hull boo of the students there was a young handsome looking man decked up in black shirt and denim jeans he looked delectable for the girls who drooled over his handsome persona who was Dev himself.

Dev was restless to finish up the admission procedures. On the other side there was another beautiful looking girl who had looks to die for and she was none other than sona clad in pink dress she looked like a diva to all.

Both were oblivious to each other's presence that's when sona's dupatta flows in the air and lands up on dev's hair.

Dev's eyes searched for the owner of this dupatta that is when sona comes all nervous and hesitantly and stands in front of him. For both time stood still as both were lost in each other nothing seemed to affect them their eyes met speaking volumes conveying their unspoken words.

Sona's voice brings him out of his dream world snapping her fingers she asks for the dupatta and without saying anything she gently pulls it coyness visible on her face.

Her smile her touch sent shivers through his veins. He kept staring at her blankly till she had vanished from the sight. A smile adorned his lips. Days passed and dev and sona had become friends.

Their friendship was adored by majority and yearned to see them as a couple a few were envious of them who cursed for their close friendship. Both were possessive of each other.

It was a day when both coincidently had worn the same colored attire. Dev's friend rahul was in a mood of having fun and asked Dev, what dev anything is going between u guys, how come u both wore the same colored dress. Don't lie dev speak the truth.

At 1st Dev got irritated but then Rahul being his bestie he could never get angry on him, and so calmly replied, Rahul, I dont know how it happened said dev.

Sona who happened to reach there to meet dev overhears their convo and gets angry, but decides to act as if she never heard anything and meets the duo.

Everybody was eagerly waiting for cultural program and they prepared for cultural events. Both Dev and Sona were excited for these events. Specially Sona who decides to participate in a dance event.

While watching the dance program dev is lost in Sona's performance her graceful dance her expressions added to her beauty.

This makes him think she looks so gorgeous how I ignored her that moment Dev had totally fallen head over heels in love with Sona.

After that program dev approaches Sona

Sona: hi dev Dev: hi sona, your performance was so good. Sona: thank u dev Dev: ok bye tc.

Dev didn't confess anything to her even if they were very good friends rather close friends.

As he had no guts to confess his feelings for her.

Dev: I am in love sona. In front of the mirror he is speaking On the other side

Sona: what is this? Why I am expecting dev's message or call? Before that it didn't happened anytime. .what happened to menow. She said to herself.

The days months and even years passed finally they had settled in their respective lives only their personal lives were not so good.

One fine morning sona checked her mail. She scrolled the inbox one name blinked she opened that mail. Ya it is from dev Wish you many more happy returns of the day my dear sona.

Find the attachment She click tat too It is a video clip Full of sona's photo, even Sona dint have those pics. He collected those pics from their college days. She felt very happy for that video.

Now she is had full confidence that he loved me... She replied thank u for ur wishes dev. Dev called sona, will u marry me sona

Sona: I like u dev but I can't marry u

Dev: why u can't marry me.

Sona: I m scared dev, u won't leave me forever.

Dev: no sona , how can I leave u, No,I won't leave u for any reason

Sona: ok dev. But I am having that pcod problem. It will create an issue on your family. that's y I am scared Dev

Dev: ok sona. That doesn't matter. Beyond this so many things are there in world. I will show the happiness. I will make u happy forever because I love u. I can face any problem for u. Don't worry for this hereafter

Sona: I know u love me. But what about ur family how can they accept. Dev: don't worry sona. I will talk to my mum and I can handle this.

Sona : ok dev , first talk to them Dev cuts the call, dev planned to go to sona's home.

Dev talked to their mom and dad. Dev convinced sona's parents. Dev spoke to his mom also.

Finally dev was able to convince both their parents successfully and convinced sona too.

The whole family was so happy and their marriage arrangements were done. Finally they got married Sona entered dev's house with full of hope and happiness. Dev hold her hand with full of love and care.

Thanks for reading.

I would like to thank Harshal my frnd who guide me to write this os. and corrected my OS.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice 😃
Pcod - influenced with spoilers of our show 😉
Would wish to know how he convinced his side 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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good concept raji it was something diff ...lovely os...keep coming more...😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It is very cute!

Amazing attempt!


Keep writing! 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: sajinifaby

Nice 😃
Pcod - influenced with spoilers of our show 😉
Would wish to know how he convinced his side 😃



dev explain, it's a curable one there are so many facilities are there. sona is the only happiness for him. dev family members know tat.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: harshu27

good concept raji it was something diff ...lovely os...keep coming more...😊



thank u so much dear...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: sa1234B

Lovely OS👏good one



thank u dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Deepsikha_94

It is very cute!

Amazing attempt!


Keep writing! 👏



thank u dear...
thanks for your support
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Posted: 8 years ago
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nice os ..
do write more :)
thanks for the pm jyothi...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: binuuu

nice os ..
do write more :)
thanks for the pm jyothi...



thank u for ur support yaar

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