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Posted: 8 years ago
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Different character sketch and concept. Great!!!
Continue soon.
Pls PM me ur updates.
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Part 1
Monday Morning 7:00 AM:

Kasturi's House:

The alarm was buzzing loudly...
Priya..Priya...

Someone was calling her name...
Priya sat up from her bed with a jolt...It was her mother who was banging on her door...
Her mom was shouting 'Priya Stop the damn alarm..'Priya smiled to herself and switched off the alarm...
She never gets up with the alarm sound,her mother is her real alarm..with that thought Priya went to get ready..
Priyanka Kasturi,her friends and family call her Priya.She had a natural aura of beauty in her,her confidence and the way she carries herself accentuates her beauty...She always knew the affect she had on men but never cared for it..She didn't have time for all that in her life...

Priya got ready quickly...She didn't want to be late to her new job.Her dad always wanted her to be a doctor but her interest lied in literature.So,here she is 'Chief Editor'of Awasty Group of Publications'.It's a dream come true for her.Looking at herself in the mirror she smiled and spoke 'Good going Priya...You are where you want to be..no one can stop you now.Your hard work has paid off..Keep up the spirit.'

With one last look at herself to make sure that she was looking neat and professional she rushed out of her room.
By the time she came to the dining table everybody has already started their breakfast..Her dad was seriously reading a newspaper,her mom was busy serving going to and fro to the kitchen...Her younger sister Pooja as usual was busy checking her phone and her big brother who was generally the center of attraction was very quiet today for some reason
Her mother looked at her and with a frown on her face, she beckoned Priya..'Always the last one to come..See your anna(elder brother) has already done with his breakfast...
Priya's family is warm and adorable.Her mom and dad always encouraged theie children to do the right thing.
Her father Srinivas was a very principled man.Presently,he retired as a news editor in abc newspaper and leading a peaceful life.Her dad has always been an ideal for Priya...and its proved when she has chosen a field close to his...One thing her dad always made a point to his children was that they are Telugu family and they follow their customs and rituals and if someone says all south-indians are Tamil,that person is gone for the day.They would have to bear the lecture on Telugu people and their customs from her father.Her mom Padma is a calm,composed lady.She has been a strength to her father in their tough times...Her brother Bharat always wanted to do something different and now running a business of his own and also is partnd for of NGO...Contrary to the whole family is her little sister Pooja,lazy,crazy and what not...but without her silly things,their family would have been too serious one.Thanks to her...Where does She,Priya fit?When it comes to right and wrong,she's like her father...when she has to stand for her friends and family,she's like her mom,when it comes to her work,she'slike brother..always trying to be innovative and while at home..she'slike her younger sister..fun loving,jolly and crazy...

A crazy idea crossed her mind,she tip-tied to where her brother and sister are sitting and she snatched away Pooja's phone parallely pulling her brothers hair...There was an instant reaction from Pooja but her brother just pulled himself out of her grip without a word...

Her Anna was an adorable guy.She loves teasing him...But today it seemed that her brother was in a different world all together.He dint even respond to her...
Anna..is everything alright asked Priya with concern fading her ever beautiful face.
Bharat who cannot see his sister that way tried smiling and said..'All O.K. Priyu..dont worry..'Saying that he got up to leave.He waved a quick bye to everyone and then left...

Pooja finally found time to look at her sister... from her phone 'hey what happened to you why such stern look...hmm?asked Pooja...
Pooja always liked looking cool...If one looks professional she feels that they are lacking their charm..
My dear sweet little sister..I am an editor...So,I get dressed this way only...Just to confirm that she's fine she looked at her mom...who smiled back her confirmation...
She turned her attention back to Pooja...'Whats wrong with my attire?'
'Yeah..Yeah..nothing wrong...just a little too boring and why do you have to pullback your hair so tighly...lose hair suits you..'added Pooja
'and it keeps falling on my face and makes me feel irritated'saying so Priya made a face...
'By the way are you even going to college...what is this dress?torn jeans...backless top..Maa how r u even allowing her...she complained to her mom...
'You will not understand it my priya daadi,it is called as 'Fashion'...added Pooja with a sarcastic smile.
'Badmaash kaiki' saying so Priya ran to hit her little sister...
Don't you want to go to your office Priya...for the first time her dad spoke...
'Yes dad..I have to leave...' She went to get her file which had all her certiifcates and took blessings from her parents and left for her new job...
She was about to drive away when her little sister came running and asked her to drop her at the bus stop.
'Get in'she said...
Priya headed for her new office as soon as she dropped her sister...
At the Office:
It was 9:00 sharp by the time she parked her car.With one final look at her in the mirror,a rushed in to the office...


Awasty Group of Publications is one of the leading publishing houses in India.It was initially started by Mr.Aryan Awasthy twenty years back but grew aggresively only in the past five years and the One Man behind all its success it's Publisher/CEO Mr.Arun Awasty...Smart,Intelligent and shrewd..
Priyanka has heard a lot about the company's CEO but has not met him yet.Her interviews were all conducted without his intervention.

Awasty Group of Publications is put up in a six-flooried building.It houses weekly and monthly magazines,newspapers,novels of every genre.She was excited to be part of this company now.She was asked to wait at the reception when the HR department was taking a copy of all her certificates...She started observing her surrondings..She could see that the office has a white theme added to it.The furniture,wallpaint and the flooring everything was in stark white.

Miss Kasturi,please come with me...A tall,beautiful lady with a pleasant smile spoke to her.

Miss Kasturi,my name is Nisha and I am Personal Secretary to Mr.Awasty.He had some other meeting early in the morning today.So,he would be in the office in another 10mins.You can wait in his office lobby.As a matter of fact,she added,'Make yourself comfortable..the coffee dispenser is at the pantry.Saying that Nisha went back to her work...Nothing else to do other than waiting,Priya thought of having some coffee...

She took the coffee from the machine and sat on a loan chair available there..She was sipping her coffee when her attention was caught by a poster...


A quote by John Creasy "Never buy an editor or publisher a lunch or a drink until he has bought an article, story or book from you. This rule is absolute and may be broken only at your peril."

She was engrossed in reading the quote and smiling that she was unaware that she was not alone anymore...and someone came slowly to her.
'Whats so funny in it' Priya came back to her senses hearing the husky voice and she turned to look at the intruder...
The guy had a questioning look on his face,one word that came to her mind at that very moment looking at him was 'Dashing' and she has never seen such translucent eyes,she could see her own reflection in his eyes very clearly...Oblivious to her thoughts,he asked again,'whats so funny in the Quote?'

Priya came to her senses and said,'Isn't it against the editors here,I mean this is a publishing house and we here keep a quote against those editors..Shows confidence of the house or should i add over-confidence?'she said looking at the man standing next to her...

I would rather say it is building up trust my dear...he answered...

In that case,it should be at the publisher's cabin and not here,this might send wrong messages...replied Priya...

'I see you have a point' added the guy non-chalantly.

Priya was never a girl who pick up conversation with strangers but today seemed different,The guy seemed impressed with the way she spoke..She thought to herself,he must be one of the editors...

Priya saw Nisha coming to the pantry, She thought 'He must have come,she will take me to him now...Thank God the wait is over'..But Nisha turned to the guy standing next to her and spoke 'Mr.Awasty,I am sorry to disturb at your break but the new book launch for Mr.Sharma's book had to be done in another 15 minutes,we need your presence...'

'Alright let's go' he said and went leaving the shocked priyanka rooted to the spot...

That's it for now guys.Please do post your comments...





Edited by Soumya23 - 8 years ago
Posted: 8 years ago
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Loved it... But agar show ke name hote to maja ajata...wo kya hai na dificult horahai koun...kya hai//??? "
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Monaleojan

Loved it... But agar show ke name hote to maja ajata...wo kya hai na dificult horahai koun...kya hai//??? "


Thanks dear...
This is not related to any show...just our Devakshi with a different touch...
See character depiction in page 1
Edited by Soumya23 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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The First part was great!!😊
So, Mr, Awasty is impressed by our Priya...😳
Waiting for you to continue...😊
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Originally posted by: .FlyingClouds.

The First part was great!!😊

So, Mr, Awasty is impressed by our Priya...😳
Waiting for you to continue...😊


Thanks...yeah he is impressed ..humare madam hai hi aisi...
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Originally posted by: Soumya23


Thanks...yeah he is impressed ..humare madam hai hi aisi...

Haan...woh toh hai😉😆😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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⭐️Brilliant !! loved it !! loved it !! loved it!!⭐️
Please update the next part soon and if you can please write long one...thing got over too soon..😳

Eagerly waiting
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely start

Priya's family seems so lovable
So Mr Awasty is impressed by Priya too that's great

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Chapter 2:

Arun Awasti is a rich,handsome and a most wanted bachelor in the town.But,for him all this didn't matter.All that he ever wanted was to renew his family business to the soaring heights.The ever flirting and mischievous guy of the family has suddenly become serious and responsible when his dad,mom,uncle,brother and sister-in-law all died in tragic accident leaving behind only his aunt and two little kids with him during his graduation.He would never be able to forget the pain they went through nor would he able to forget the financial crisis they faced-his chachi and two kids.He has decided he would work more and more and make sure that his family gets whatever they ask for.Nothing more did he wish for.

Remembering his naughty and cute nephew and niece brought a smile to his stern face unknowingly.

'Mr.Awasty, Miss Priyanka KAsturi is here..'Nisha's voice brought Arun out of his reverie.

'Please come in Ms.Kasturi' he said politely.

He started going through the profile of Ms.Kasturi which was brought to him by Nisha and was placed before him.

'So,Ms.Kasturi I see you are quite experienced in this field.My work is half done,so I would directly jump to the work in hand'saying so Arun directly jumped to his responsibilities.

If Priyanka was surprised that no formal introductions were done she didnt show it.

She nodded in affirmation with his suggestions and added,'thanks for the brief up Mr.Awasty,now if you dont mind i would like to go through all these in detail'.

'Sure Ms.Kasturi,do one thing,I have already asked Neha to create an email for you',for a brief second he shifted his attention to the extn and called Nisha to his cabin.,'I will send you a copy of these as well as I will ask Nisha to provide you the manuscripts.'

'Are all preparations done for Ms.Kasturi to start her work right away Nisha?'he asked Nisha,it was not just a question,Priyanka understood but rather a statement for which he seems to expect only a positive reply.The guy seems to be not used to hearing a No thought Priyanka...


Nisha seems to be good at her work,she was ready with everything.

'So Ms.Kasturi I think you would be able to provide your feedback on all the discussed things by EOD tomorrow'said Arun matter of factly.

Priyanka took a minute to calculate the pile of documents which she would have to go through and silently rebuked Mr.Awasty for his audacity and pleasantly answered,'I will try my best Mr.Awasty' saying so she got up to leave his cabin when his voice stopped her in between.

'Where do you think you are going Ms.Kasturi?' asked Arun knowing full well that she was a bit irritated.Somehow he felt like rubbing her on the wrong side...

'If I'm not wrong Mr.Awasty,you have just asked me to provide you a feedback by tomorrow EOD and as far as I understand there were at least 20 manuscripts and also three novels apart from the weekly edition which you want me to check,so I am going to start it right away.Its already 11:00 and I don't want to waste anymore time' replied Priyanka a bit caustically.Her irritation only increased more when Arun without replying sat at his desk with a half smile like he was enjoying putting her in this position.

After a minute or two he got up and said,'not that side,come with me..'signalling her to follow him.

Arun's cabin is on the top floor of the building and apart from his cabin and Nisha's desk at the entrance,she didnt think there was any more space on this floor.So,it came as rather a surprise when Arun instead of going out of the cabin moved to one end of the room and pressed on a button...and with a slight screeching sound,the wooden wall at the end opened to another room.

'This is your cabin Ms.Kasturi'he said..

The room he showed was different in comparison to rest of the building which has white theme...This has sky blue theme all over.

Suddenly Priyanka became a bit flustered with the close proximity of their cabins...

Arun said as if trying to clear her doubts,'This was earlier my office Ms.Kasturi,trust me this is best place for an editor where you can work without being disturbed. and also all the required stuff are provided in the room.Priyanka could see that apart form the desk with a laptop there was also a sofa and a center table along with water and coffee dispenser to the other end.This room seemed to be half the size of Awasty's cabin but seemed to have all the stuff.She loved the rack of books placed at the shelf,without a second thought,Priyanka went to check what all are available only to realize that Mr.Awasty ws still standing and looking at her with some uncomprehended look on his face.

She added in a rush 'Thanks Mr.Awasty,this is beautiful I would love to work here' and added clumsily 'if it is fine for you,I will start with my work',she reached her cabin and started to setup things ignoring the man standing at her cabin entrance...For some reason his gaze was making
her gaze.

Stop it Priya,he's your boss,obviously you would be under his scrutiny for a day or two and this man definitely seems to be a hard taskmaster,nothing more than stop over reacting she admonished herself.


Arun went back to his desk seeing her immerse herself in her work...It's not that he has not seen beautiful girls before and also worked with them,but somehow this lady who seemed to be hot tempered but trying to act cool seems to make him unveil that mask of her...He smiled to himself for the way his thoughts were moving and soon he forgot everything the moment he started his work...




That's all for now,please post in your comments and feedback...















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