DevaKshi Os - The Double Proposal .. A/N page-3

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Hola guys ! Many don't know me I am new here .Currently disappointed with dev and sona breakup , we have been missing them like hell 😭😭
So I thought of writing a light hearted OS .😆😆It is divided in three parts, I hope you enjoy it .


Love Always ❤️

Pooja
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Please continue! Eager to read your OS :)
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PART (a) - The secret planning


Dev was deep in his thoughts.He was thinking whether to confess sonakshi about his feelings for her , if he does so , will there be any problem, will his mother agree ?
"Bhai..", Neha brought him back
" ye..yes, tell me Neha " , dev stumbled ,
"what is the matter Bhai, is there any tension?", She asked him concernly
" Nah.. nah ..,nothing you dont worry.. " Dev assured but she was unconvinced, but she knew that her brother would surely ask her something indirectly now or later.
"fine then.. " , she turned away to proceed to her room
"Neha... Tell me one thing , suppose if I want something or if I want to do something and we feel our move would affect our life or maybe not also , in such situation want must we do ?
Neha smiled and sat beside him, she held his hand on hers and said,
" Bhai, in this case I cannot say anything as far as you have not disclosed me the problem, and I don't know how intense is the reason behind this question but, as you have asked my take in it , I will say Aap apne dil ki suniye, if you have pure belief on that something what you said then surely , you will get it and there will not be any problem ",She concluded ..
Dev smiled to his sister , who is more like a best friend to him .. She is like a peace maker for his mind which has so many dozens of questions piled up .
" So what have you decided? " she asked smiling
"Let's do it ", he said to her smiling back but now with more intensity in his smile .
"But bhai .. You haven't said the reason behind this question " She asked him with a frown
Dev smiled victoriously having got the answer without even telling the question ,
"Neha.. Sorry ! It's a secret ", he smiled naughtily. And proceeded towards the door .
" where are you going know ?" , she asked him rather a bit angry
"That's also a secret " , Dev winked at her, she smiled to herself.
Dev thought an amazing idea for the proposal. He thought it to be a simple one, and he hi!self thought of doing all the decorations.


PART (b) - Sona's secret planning

Sonakshi meanwhile was also had the plan of opening up her feelings for Dev . She was in kitchen preparing breakfast for her family , she was so immersed in thoughts of Dev that she was cutting the roti instead of the vegetable .
"Sonakshi .." ,her father snapped
"Ye..yes baba .." , she replied,
"Is breakfast ready ?" ,he ased obvious of her doings ,
"Only sabji is left in making", she said not obvious of what she is doing .
" Really ..?", her father smiled at her and showed her the torn chappati , she was cutting since ten minutes .
She smiled sheepishly,
"What are you thinking this crazily that you are not ale to differentiate roti and vegetable ?", she asked her smiling .
" I ..was .., OK leave that baba , I wanted to ask a question to you .." , She decided to take her father's opinion . Her father nodded at her .
"Act..Actually.. suppose if I want something or if I want to do something and we feel our move would affect our life or maybe not also , in such situation want must we do ? " , she finished.
Her father was have other two questions popping out in his mind , one being why such thoughts arising in his daughter's mind has he has given her full freedom to do what she wishes and second what must be the reason behind this problem that she is cutting roti instead of vegetable.
But since , this question has be posed on him , he answered it in a simple manner .
"Listen to your heart " he finished .
She was beyond happy with his answer,she hugged him tight and he reciprocated .
"By the way what is the reason behind this question ? " he asked releasing from the hug .
"Nah ..Nah .. Sorry baba , but it is a secret " , she fled with that .
"What about the breakfast ?" , he asked with the torn chappati in hand .
"Eat that !", she said laughing and then all he could hear was the door closing with a thud !

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I know it is a cliff hanger. Wait , wait , I will post it soon , maybe within today till then tell me your take on these two parts.




Love always ❤️

Pooja..




Edited by Soundharya_01 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: dishadishki

Please continue! Eager to read your OS :)

Thank you dear , Glad that you are interinterested on reading it .
Just now posted pls take a read and tell me your take .


Love always

Pooja
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Pls go ahead and wirte more i like your os and pls update regularly
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Very nice.
Pls do continue and update soon...
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Loved it ...very well written👏
eagerly waiting for next part
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Originally posted by: Bizdil

Pls go ahead and wirte more i like your os and pls update regularly

Thanks a ton for this wonderful comment . I will try to update soon .

Love always
Pooja
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Originally posted by: sowiee

Very nice.

Pls do continue and update soon...

Thank you . Glad you liked it , I will try to update it soon .

Love always
Pooja
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Originally posted by: sa1234B

Loved it ...very well written👏

eagerly waiting for next part

Thanks a lot dear . I will try to update soon , glad you liked it
Love always
Pooja

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