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Posted: 9 years ago
@BOLD

You are rt ...here matha is going to suicide , there the lead is going to suicide...in both the serials the laddies did go thru a life threatening accident...I have watched couple of EDKV episodes as my husband prefers that more than this one. He always felt that Dev might give into mom's wishes so had stopped watching this one and I continued with this saying he would never dump her will ask for time ( unfortunately our dev babu gave us shocker ...he got to say ..see I told you😡 ).

Anyways back to our show I hope third angle is bought to make him jealous . I really dont want Sonakshi to accept the new guy as her future...ok as friend. I want Dev to be really jealous and also angry at his mom for finding a guy for her.

God when are they going to reach that part...looong wait😡


I do not think it is suicide. The whole situation has affected her so deeply that she resorted to taking many pills to calm her mind and sleep. This will make Dev realize how deeply this issue has affected her and break up. I guess they wanted to show a health scare of this magnitude to make Dev take such a step.

On the third angle - we need to see Dev suffer. 😡. BUT it will be really disappointing if after all this time only the presence of another man in her life makes him conclude that he cannot part ways with her.
True..isnt it ? I mean if there was no trigger would he have not felt for her or yearned for her this much?? Is he that oblivious of his feelings for her. I always think why is it that way...he never understood that she was in love with him or he had feelings for her...it took his sisters to make him think...and now this one?

This doubt will always be there ...lack of passion betwn them. When they are shown this close why it never happened. Was Sonakshi always having a doubt abt him and his promise. Is that why she kept avoiding that passionate approach towards him?
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: WeRockTheWorld

@BOLD

You are rt ...here matha is going to suicide , there the lead is going to suicide...in both the serials the laddies did go thru a life threatening accident...I have watched couple of EDKV episodes as my husband prefers that more than this one. He always felt that Dev might give into mom's wishes so had stopped watching this one and I continued with this saying he would never dump her will ask for time ( unfortunately our dev babu gave us shocker ...he got to say ..see I told you😡 ).

Anyways back to our show I hope third angle is bought to make him jealous . I really dont want Sonakshi to accept the new guy as her future...ok as friend. I want Dev to be really jealous and also angry at his mom for finding a guy for her.

God when are they going to reach that part...looong wait😡


I do not think it is suicide. The whole situation has affected her so deeply that she resorted to taking many pills to calm her mind and sleep. This will make Dev realize how deeply this issue has affected her and break up. I guess they wanted to show a health scare of this magnitude to make Dev take such a step.

On the third angle - we need to see Dev suffer. 😡. BUT it will be really disappointing if after all this time only the presence of another man in her life makes him conclude that he cannot part ways with her.
True..isnt it ? I mean if there was no trigger would he have not felt for her or yearned for her this much?? Is he that oblivious of his feelings for her. I always think why is it that way...he never understood that she was in love with him or he had feelings for her...it took his sisters to make him think...and now this one?

This doubt will always be there ...lack of passion betwn them. When they are shown this close why it never happened. Was Sonakshi always having a doubt abt him and his promise. Is that why she kept avoiding that passionate approach towards him?

😃 @Bold: Guess Men know Men better... We can only analyze & hope...

As for Jealous Dev - I love to see all shades of love on Dev & jealousy would be beautiful. Plus Shaheer plays it so real... BUT...

Do we need another guy to make Dev realize Sona's worth in his life?
Then what...????
Mommy brings out another flashback chulla from her warehouse and Dev runs back to her???
Should Sona then move to another country for him to feel she is important...?
and then Mommy will bring out another of her emotional weaponry...

hmmm... Do we see an oscillating Dev then? 😃
Ah! the pyar ke rang...!

Honestly, if it is really a third angle, I want Sona to accept - maybe for her parents (hey, Dev can't just have a copyright on parental pressure) or maybe because she really wants to move on... and I don't want that third angle to be the guy Ishwari picks (for that I want the Boses to strongly put her in her place!) ...
In all this, Dev needs to feel helpless, troubled, jealous of course and find it in him to fight for his love, talk real with mommy dearest, and for once act without needing to be pushed...

If he can't then...

Paro did marry & Devdas did drink himself to death
Disclaimer: Devdas is one of my most hated love stories 😃)



Edited by ARCH21 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: surbharati

Nice story...beautifully written...please update next part soon



Thank you for reading and likng.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Writer ji... any update today??
I know I know.. I am hounding!! 😆 Can't help it. You stopped at such an interesting point!!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Suvika.

Writer ji... any update today??

I know I know.. I am hounding!! 😆 Can't help it. You stopped at such an interesting point!!



Your interest is very flattering. To be honest I had lost all interest in the couple and had almost made up my mind to not continue any more.

I know that many on the forum feel that the current lousy state of affairs should actually inspire writers to script an alternate version but in my case the couple has to capture my imagination and interest me!

The break up scene has acted like "hamdard ka tonic sinkara" for me. Now i do plan to continue but may be difficult to do so till the weekend.

Sorry!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ARCH21


I do not think it is suicide. The whole situation has affected her so deeply that she resorted to taking many pills to calm her mind and sleep. This will make Dev realize how deeply this issue has affected her and break up. I guess they wanted to show a health scare of this magnitude to make Dev take such a step.

On the third angle - we need to see Dev suffer. 😡. BUT it will be really disappointing if after all this time only the presence of another man in her life makes him conclude that he cannot part ways with her.

True..isnt it ? I mean if there was no trigger would he have not felt for her or yearned for her this much?? Is he that oblivious of his feelings for her. I always think why is it that way...he never understood that she was in love with him or he had feelings for her...it took his sisters to make him think...and now this one?

This doubt will always be there ...lack of passion betwn them. When they are shown this close why it never happened. Was Sonakshi always having a doubt abt him and his promise. Is that why she kept avoiding that passionate approach towards him?

😃 @Bold: Guess Men know Men better... We can only analyze & hope...

As for Jealous Dev - I love to see all shades of love on Dev & jealousy would be beautiful. Plus Shaheer plays it so real... BUT...

Do we need another guy to make Dev realize Sona's worth in his life?
Then what...????
Mommy brings out another flashback chulla from her warehouse and Dev runs back to her???
Should Sona then move to another country for him to feel she is important...?
and then Mommy will bring out another of her emotional weaponry...

hmmm... Do we see an oscillating Dev then? 😃
Ah! the pyar ke rang...!

Honestly, if it is really a third angle, I want Sona to accept - maybe for her parents (hey, Dev can't just have a copyright on parental pressure) or maybe because she really wants to move on... and I don't want that third angle to be the guy Ishwari picks (for that I want the Boses to strongly put her in her place!) ...
In all this, Dev needs to feel helpless, troubled, jealous of course and find it in him to fight for his love, talk real with mommy dearest, and for once act without needing to be pushed...

If he can't then...

Paro did marry & Devdas did drink himself to death
Disclaimer: Devdas is one of my most hated love stories 😃)





@BOLD ...looks like it 😆 this one he got it right.. Even I dont like the story "Devdas". Infact I have not watched the famous SRK movie too...have seen the teasers and songs but not the movie.. ( Nothing against SRK )

This third angle is also bringing in tension , I just dont want them to make it look like the typical Ektha Kapoor Serial , where in 2 ppl love each other , they break up marry some one else and then realise oh I still love the same person , cant live with out them etc etc...

It kind of takes away the respect factor from marriage as an institution. You marry a person when you are very sure ...you cant just marry because some one pressurizes you emotionally . This is not 1950s story. So when I see those spoilers as Sonakshi accepted as marraige proposal...its disturbing my mind...because the strong person that she has been shown as cannot accept some one so soon . We know the depth of their love...as a friends is fine...but as her future man...I dont know if that is rt...I could be wrong here...

I am not saying she shouldnt move on ...she should but not accept some one for the heck of it or to prove a point that she has moved on ...keeping Dev in her heart.

I dont think it is right to have love for some one in your heart and marry someone else ...because in that case you wont be giving 100% to marriage .
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice story!!! Loved their meeting!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Oh Gosh! He is returning without even talking to her...poor souls...beautifully worded and the story rocks.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice story dear
Loved it
Read all parts in a go
Liked Sonakshi as she tried to move on
Waiting for next update soon
Do pm me when u update
Thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice story dear
Loved it
Read all parts in a go
Liked Sonakshi as she tried to move on
Waiting for next update soon
Do pm me when u update
Thanks



I am glad you enjoyed reading the parts I have posted so far.

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