'Rishta Janmo Ka' - An Heart Touching OS...

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Barkaat12

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Lovely os... the best story i hv ever read on india forums 👏👏

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Jade0001
I'm speechless right now again another Excellent story by you

On their first meeting the guy was adamant in his love but was truthful that he had someone in his life while the girl could have said no but then society would put blame to her and her parents so knowing this and the fact the her future husband is honest she agreed for marriage .
and I always say Arrange Marriages seem to have the most strongest bonds , in most cases the partner first learns the ugly side before they get to learn the good and lovable side this strengthens their bond somehow .
once both confessed their love they were happy in their love their had build the foundations of friendship , trust , respect , hope , understanding and love .
they traveled through life having their kids and grand kids only to reach the final destination where they have to part ways and leave this world now that was the sad part
the entire story was soulful and held hope and longing
just loved it
thank you for this piece of art .

You've left me speechless with your analysis.

You are so right about arrange marriages. I too had an arranged marriage. Just like this story, even We were given chance to meet and know each other before giving our consent. We have been married for a long time now and Till day we keep discovering so many new things about each other.

And that is what makes it all the more interesting and beautiful...

Thanks so much for this beautiful comment. It means a lot to me ❤️

Edited by lovely_nikki - 9 years ago

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: bharti2887
OMG!! It was beautiful. You brought me to tears in the end. Absolutely love it 👏 👏 👏 ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

Thanks so much for reading and liking this OS 🤗

And for all the praises 😊

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: neelima_menon
Amazing!!

Originally posted by: Monaleojan
Amezingg!

Thanks so much 😊

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: SAPU
I am speechless! what a heart touching story. Specially last part!!!

Thanks so much 😊

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: indiaf1
This is the most beautiful story, i have ever read. Since you have not given any names for the characters, while reading I was able to image some backdrop with fading faces rather some blurred faces of the characters especially the man and his wife, ppl say if you are able to do that while reading something then That writer is definately someone special who has the rare talent of making the reader to imagine the scene which is being described.

Hats off to your writing.

OMG this is one of The Best Compliments that I've ever got.

I've been writing stories since last three years. In one of my fictions, I've got so many many many nice compliments. Where readers have told me that I'm a good writer, I should be writing scripts. And all...

But such a huge complement coming from a first time reader is like having won some Gold Medal or some Huge Award.

I'll cherish this complement for a very very very long time ❤️

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Gaby09

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Nice very nice . If u had named ur characters as Dev n Sonakshi , it would have been like perfect for me. Hope to read ur work in future .bravo girl .