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rasika_DS

@rasika_DS

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#301

Totally worth the wait..what a fabulous chapter dear..even my eyes got blurred while reading it just to realize had tears..
You penned down Dev's guilt..his helplessness so well..loved Dev-Neha's convo..It reminded me of the DevAkshi scene after Neha's bidaai..

Sona is such a strong girl..so proud of her..she is fulfilling their dream inspite of all the odds..Can imagine Dev's state after knowing this..more guilt..but pride too..so overwhelming..
Sona is so kind too..not letting him to throw away RR..but I want to see RR suffer..

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Erian

@Erian

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#302

Finally.. the wait is over & totally worth. What a beautiful chapter it is. Thankyou for the extra length. Update soon.

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.FlyingClouds.

@.FlyingClouds.

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#303

That was amazing!!!👏👏

Too good!!

Please cont soon😊😊

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AngelsFlyAlone

@AngelsFlyAlone

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#304

Mushfikaaa oh my god Di you've killed me with this chapter literally slayed my existence thank you thank you thank you omg this was ridiculously mesmerizing I LOVE YOU OMG X

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Ashwini

@star.21

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#305

Lovelly chapter!

Dev's regrets about how Sona had to go thru a hell of life in his happiness and later his joyy when despite that Sona fulfilled her promise of completing her education and being independent...soo well did you portray girl!!! Too good!!

Lovedd it!! As always!

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Gayatri

@Gayu_K

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#306

Beautifully written can I request for some more romance...thanks for d pm do continue soon

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simplesweety1

@simplesweety1

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#307

OMG! It Was Awesome!!!!! U R An Awsm Writer! That Was Just Wow! Loved It! Update Soon!

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Priyanka

@Prizi

Achiever

+ 30

Posted: 9 years ago

#308

this part is sooo awesummm
dev-neha convo was beautifully written

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sa1234B

@sa1234B

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#309

Wonderful👏loved it

i m speechless...very very beautifully written

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WeRockTheWorld

@WeRockTheWorld

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#310

Ah that was worth the wait 👏...loved it ...especially that pool side talk...wondering what GKBs reaction will be when she hears that Dev has understood she has lied to her.

I liked the sis - bro talk..now eagerly waiting for the next part ...

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