DevAkhsi FF- PEHELA PEHELA PYAR HAI ... PART 5 ON PAGE 13

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RamAayeHain

@RamAayeHain

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#71

Awesome update mona di

Sorry for commenting late

The update was really cute

Loved it

continue soon and thanks for the pm

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Monalisa(Hundi..my mom gave this name :)..

@Monaleojan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: vssdp
Awesome update mona di
Sorry for commenting late
The update was really cute
Loved it
continue soon and thanks for the pm

.. Awww.no problem dear..

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Monalisa(Hundi..my mom gave this name :)..

@Monaleojan

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#73

SO GUS HERE IS THE PART 4...

ON THE ROAD WHILE DRIVING...SHONA YOU REMEMBER NA WHAT IS TODAY??? WHAT??TODAY IS WHAT DEV.???SONA ASKED INNOCENTLY... DEV9(AMUSED) REALLY U DON'T REMEMBER???

SONA-NO DEV...

DEV-SACHII???!!!!!

SONA-MUCHII...

DEV AND SONA LAUGHED... SONA HUGGING DEV FROM BACK...MAIN KESE YE DIN VULSAKTI HUN???!!!

ITS10 AUGAST...

DEV( HOLDING HER HAND)-HMMM

SUDDENLY AN IDEA CAME TO HIS MIND..AND HE TOOK U TURN...

SONA-DEVVV???COLLEGE IS IN THIS SIDE...WHY ARE U GOING IN OPPOSITE DIRECTION????!!!

DEV- SURPRISE...(WINKING AT HER)

AFTER 10MINS...

SONA (SMILINGLY) TO YE HAI TERA SURPRISE...

DEV- HAAN...MERI KHARGHOSHHH...

SONA LAUGHED...AND HUGGED HIM...

DEV--SHONA...KYUN NA AJ HUM WOHI JAGGA JAYE ..JAHAN PE HUMNE SANDCASTLE BANAYETHE???!!!

SONA-AUR COLLEGE/??!!

DEV-COLLEGE TO HAR DIN JATEHAIN...YE NA THODI ROJ ROJ ATA HAI???!!

SONA- EXICTEDLY...TO PHIR CHALLL...

SONA- AUR YE PYARA SA PHULL ISKE TOP MAIN..-DEV-HOGAYA..

SONA- HOGAYA... THEY BOTH SMILED...

DEV-ACHA TUJHE TERI SURPRISE MILGAYI...MERA KAHAN HAI??!!

SONA AFTER THINKING FOR SOMETIME...SHE HUGGED DEV TIGHTLY. YEH RAHA TERAA GIFT...DEV SMILED...KANJUSH TU NEI SUDHRE GI??!!SAID DEV...

SON- NEIII...

IN THE COLLEGE...

YAR YE SONA AUR DEV AJ NEI AYENGE KYA...ASKED NEIL...

SORAV- WOHI TO ...PHONE V LAG NEI RAHA HAI UN DONO KA...

ELENA-WAIT GUYS... AJ DATE KYA HAI...

NATASA-10AUGAST...10 AUGASTTT!!!!

SOURAV- AJ 10 AUGAST HAIN...AREY AJ KE DIN HI TO HUMAREY DEVAKHSI MILETHE...

ELENA- AJ TO NEI ANE WALE DONO...

AFTER SOMETIME...

NEIL-GUYS...CAN I ASAK A QUESTION...TUMHE NEI LAGTA DEV AND SHONAKHSI KE BICH MAIN KUCH HAI??

SOURAV- KYA HAI??(CONFUSED)

NEIL- LOVEE...??!1

NATASHA/ELENA/ SOURAV- LOUGHED AT NEIL...

NEIL- ISME HASNE WALI BAT KYA HAI??

NATASHA- BABY..WE ASKED THEM A LOT TIMES BEFORE...BUT THEY REFUSED IT...

ELENA- THEY ARE BESSTESS FRIEND YAR NEIL.. TU ITNA DIMAG MAT LAGA...

NEIL- NO NO AM 100% SURE... THERE IS SOMETHIN BETWENN THE...ACHA MUJHE SONA KA TO MALUM NEI...PER FROM DEV THERE IS SOMETING...I SAW IN HIS EYES...

NATASHA- NA NA BABY... IF THERE S SOMETHING FROM DEV,... WO JARRUR BATATA HUMEY...

NEIL- ACHA MAIN BET LAGATA HUN KI DEV SONA SE PYAR KARTA HAI

N/E/S-BET...

NEL-OKEY GYS...BUT U HAVE TO HELP ME..

S/E/N- YESS

NATASHA- AB PLAN BHI TO BATAO!!?/

NEIL- (excitedly)- SO LISTEN GUYS..TOMORROW MY FRIEND FROM MY OLD SCHOOL IS COMMING..AND HE IS TAKING ADMSN HERE...AND WE WILL USE HIM TO KNOW IF DV LOVESSONA OR NOT!!! WHAT SAY GUYS

SOURAV- OKEYY...

ELENA- BUT WHAIT IS HIS NAME???

NEIL- VICKY...

NATASHA- AUR WO KYA HELP KAREGA HUMEY

NEIL- ARREY MERI NATU BABY...JESE MENE USE KIYA TINA KO TUMHARE FEELINGS JAN NE KE LIE... WESE...WINKED AT HER..

ALL 4 LAUGHED...

HERE DEV IS UNKNOWN TO HIS DEVIL FRIENDS PLAN ENJOING HIS TIME WITH HIS SHONA...

PRECAP-DEV RUDELY SAID MYSELF DEV AND HUGGED HIM..AND SILENTLY BUT DANGEROUSLY SAID IN HIS EAR- ONLYY I CAN CALL HAR SHONA...

so guys here it is my part 4..kindly ignore grammr mistake.. wating for ur feedbacks and do kit LIKES😳

LOTS OF LOVE FROM MONA DARLING😳😉⭐️...

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independent

@independent

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#74

Wow superb os 👏

How can I miss such a beautiful os..

I read all parts in one go.. Interesting os..

Well written 👏

Loved it ❤️

Please pm me nxt time...

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richa

@rcha_bhrt

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#75

Mona darling a big hug to you🤗

Awww this story is so cute. I read all parts together after getting your PM and loved it.

Clg frnds masti, sand castle, love for Sallu everything is so cute and specially dev and her mom bonding.

I am looking forward to next update.

Will love to see jealous dev.

Continue soon

Thanks for pm

Edited by rcha_bhrt - 9 years ago

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_RS_

@_RS_

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#76

Aww..nice one darling..

Keep up the good work.

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Monalisa(Hundi..my mom gave this name :)..

@Monaleojan

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: rcha_bhrt
Mona darling a big hug to you🤗
Awww this story is so cute. I read all parts together after getting your PM and loved it.
Clg frnds masti, sand castle, love for Sallu everything is so cute and specially dev and her mom bonding.

I am looking forward to next update.
Will love to see jealous dev.

Continue soon
Thanks for pm

.. Aww.. Thank u So much ... A big hug from me also...

Edited by Monaleojan - 9 years ago