FF:- ~HIGH SCHOOL FUN WITH DEVAKSHI~ IMP Note on Pg 76 - Page 53

Originally posted by: Soumya23

Gud one 😊

Originally posted by: kashishbano

Awesome update Aditi.👍🏼
I should say, that you are a brilliant writer.
Apart from story, you put so much efforts in each and small thing.
Round applause dear 👏.
The way you described the car riding and dev teaching her how to ride, is really bang on, if you want you can simply mentioned that he teaches her how to ride but you did a fabulous job by mentioning about the turns and well.
In the car also you maintained the romantic atmosphere. Simply good. And on that dev's talks to himself , naukar lagron ... and all are so so funny 🤣
And the start part of the library, dev teasing really loved it.
And curious to know kya cool baat kehni hai sona ko.
Once again you nailed it dear.
Love and hug to you as always.
❤️ 🤗

Originally posted by: rasika_DS

Awesome update Aditi..Like kashishbano said you manage to write the scenes in detail like the cycle scene or the car scene here..really commendable job👏 Keep writing such beautiful and lighthearted stories..makes me happy..😊

Originally posted by: Pilu05

Wow I love that dude language ..its too cool

Update was too good ...
Waiting for the next

Originally posted by: simplesweety1

Loved It! Was Awsm!

Originally posted by: independent

Wow superb update...

Loved it...

Thanks for pm me...

Originally posted by: Jade0001

Superb , Fantastic

I just can't get enough of both Dev and Sonakshi

Both are so free spirited