Devakshi FF : Jab koi baat bigad jaye . Tum dena sath mera

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shilpa_akki

@shilpa_akki

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Posted: 9 years ago

#81

Yes of course why not...
Do write whatever in ur mind...
Bz I know lyk ur ff that os also gonna be a rock

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CrazyGirlRashi

@CrazyGirlRashi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: rimjhim_rims
Guys in show it is shown that Dev is under pressure by both the important woman of his life. seeing this a small Os idea came in my mind should I write ??

Of course darling
Why not
Will love to read it
Waiting

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CrazyGirlRashi

@CrazyGirlRashi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#83

And do update this
Just love your stories

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rasika_DS

@rasika_DS

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Posted: 9 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: rimjhim_rims
Thank you. I will sure. guys its your appreciation which encourage me to write. I will shortly write the OS
I have another FF in my mind which I will write after finishing this if you guys like the concept.

The concept is where Ishwari is not at all a villein in Devakshi love story but will play cupid between them. She will make these dumbos realize about their feelings. It will be changes of Dev's life specially and how he will handle those. How it will be turn out when A perfect son and brother Dev has to play the role of a husband and a father? it will be about Dev's journey from a 27 year old CEO to finally become a proud father of successful children.

So whats say guys?
Please please share your views.

This sounds intriguing..bring it on😃

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Himruta_fan

@Himruta_fan

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#85

Nice concept. Different but its very interesting. I m looking forward for it. Pls do continue it after finishing this one. I m eagerly waiting for it.

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diehardbee

@diehardbee

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Posted: 9 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: rimjhim_rims
Guys you all encouraged me to write the Os in my mind. Please check that,
Devakshi OS: Two Women of his life

Read the os os was good but could have been better but still loved it

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rimjhim_rims

@rimjhim_rims

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#87

I will try to improve. Thanks for your view.

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diehardbee

@diehardbee

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Posted: 9 years ago

#88

The concept is where Ishwari is not at all a villein in Devakshi love story but will play cupid between them. She will make these dumbos realize about their feelings. It will be changes of Dev's life specially and how he will handle those. How it will be turn out when A perfect son and brother Dev has to play the role of a husband and a father? it will be about Dev's journey from a 27 year old CEO to finally become a proud father of successful children.
Liked the concept when will you start the work on it

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rimjhim_rims

@rimjhim_rims

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Posted: 9 years ago

#89

After I finish this FF which is near its end.

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CrazyGirlRashi

@CrazyGirlRashi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: rimjhim_rims
Thank you. I will sure. guys its your appreciation which encourage me to write. I will shortly write the OS
I have another FF in my mind which I will write after finishing this if you guys like the concept.

The concept is where Ishwari is not at all avillein in Devakshi love story but will play cupid between them. She will make these dumbos realize about their feelings. It will be changes of Dev's life specially and how he will handle those. How it will be turn out when A perfect son and brother Devhas to play the role of a husband and a father? it will be about Dev's journey from a 27 year old CEO to finally become a proud father ofsuccessful children.

So whats say guys?
Please please share your views.

Of course dear will love to read it
Looks interesting
Looking forward to read it
Of course take your time