Say it Again.. DEV!!!--- A lenghty OS

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Say it again...DEV!!!

Since this weekend is rainy, many have written some hot scenes and Os's regarding our beloved couple, their chemistry. Thank you all for such chocolaty write-ups... What I was thinking today is that the precap ... So I decided to write up my mind... Hope u all like it and enjoy upcoming week...

Dev sends a parcel for Sonakshi at Ishwari Niwas. She opens it and finds a beautiful dark pink sari and a pair of two beautiful earrings and neck-piece. She is overwhelmed and decides to try on earrings, but hears someone coming. She packs the sari and a start re-packing the earrings & neck-piece but Dev's mami comes and she suddenly drops down one of the earrings. Being such a prized possession mami notices it immediately but doesn't ask whether it is of Sonakshi's . She goes out and scolds Nikki and asks her whether the earring is of hers. When Nikki denies, they both ask Ria but she says it's not her as well. The three decide to ask whether it is Neha who has purchased such beautiful pair of earrings. All these things are noticed by Sonakshi and gets tensed. She calls Dev from kitchen.

Sonakshi: Dev ek bohot baadi problem hogayi hai. Aapne jo parcel bheja mere liye wo parcel, i mean earring mujhse niche gir gayi and aapki mami ne se utha liya aur ab wo sabko puch rahi hai ke wo earrings kiske hain.. Abhi tak neha, nikki aur ria tino ko puch chuki hai.. Mein kya karu ab??? Batao na?? Kichu bol be tumi???

Dev: Sonakshi.. Sona relax..

Sonakshi: Kaise karu relax???

Dev: Dont worry, mein kuch karta hun.. tum pareshaan mat ho..

Sonakshi: Mr. Dixit, tumi ekdum boka!!! Parcel bhejne ki jarurat hi kya thi? Khud bhi to de sakte the na? Tumi ekdum impossible.

Dev: Hogaya aapka tumi tumi karke. Ab 5 min do mujhe mein karta hun kuch.

Sonakshi: Par kya?

Dev: Miss Bose.. Please give me 5 mins. Bye.

Here Sonakshi gets tensed as mami is asking everyone in the house whose earring is it, except Sonakshi. She starts going towards Ishwari's room when suddenly phone rings. Nikki pics up.

Nikki: Hello Ms. Dixit speaking.

Dev: Bhai bol raha hun.. Nikki Maa ko phone do.

Nikki: O!!! Bhai.. ek min haan...

Nikki calls Ishwari... Ishwari takes phone and

Ishwari: haan, bolo Dev

Dev: Maa, wo ek parcel bheja hai meine Dr. Bose ke liye, unhe mila hai na wo.. Unhone le to liya na..

Ishwari: Konsa parcel? Mujhe to kuch nahi pata? Ek min mein kicchu se puchti hun... are haan, kicchu nahi hai naa.. ek min ruk beta.

Ishwari calls bhola and asks whether any parcel has arrived for Dr. Didi. He answers yes and says he has already given it to her.

Ishwari: Haan Dev, mila hai parcel and bhola ne use de bhi diya hai, par kya hai usme beta?

Dev: Maa,parcel mein ek sari hain aur ek set hain necklace aur earrings ka. Maa, ab ghar mein Neha ki engagement hai aur wo hamare yahan kafi mahino se kaam kar rahi hain. Aaj teri tabiyat mein sudhaar unhi ki wahaj se aaya hain, to hamara bhi farz banta hain na ki hum usse hamari khushiyon mein saath lele. Isiliye meine Tina se keh ke unke liye parcel bheja. Maa Dr. Bose ko phone dena jara..

Ishwari: Haan, ek min ruk, deti hun phone use.

Ishwari calls Sonakshi and tells her Dev wants to talk with her.

Sonakshi: Mr.Dixit.

Dev: Ab kuch react mat karna, sirf meri baat dhaan se sunna. Meine maa ko bataya hain ki meine hi tumhe gift bheja hain kyunki neha ki engagement ho rahi hain. So ab wo earring le lo mami se. Aur chitthi mili na tumhe usme? Ab bolo bhi Sonaskhi..

Sonakshi: Thank you ,Mr.Dixit par mein aapka ye gift nahi le sakti. I mean, mein jo kaam kar rahi hun wo mera profession hain, I know Neha ki engagement hai and I am too happy about it but sorry i can't accept your gift.

So says Sonakshi and gives phone to Ishwari and goes to bring the parcel..

Ishwari: Tu chinta mat kar Dev, mein usse samjha dungi aur mana lungi gift rakhne ke liye. Accha socha tune.. Woh roj ghar par aati hai, meri aur sabke sehat ka khayal rakhti hain.. Ab toh wo ghar ka ek hissa ban gayi hain.. Rakhti hun phone. Chal

Dev: Mujhe pata hain maa aap mana loge Ms. Bose ko. Bye maa.

Ishwari then comes to kitchen and sees Sonakshi with opened box. Sonakshi has already removed the letter and kept it in her bag. Ishwari comes near her and notices the sari and jewellery set. She likes it very much and both say together " Bohot khoobsurat hain" !!! and both smile together.

Ishwari: Nutrition...Sona rakh lo beta. Bohot khoobsurat lagega tum pe. Meri baat nahi manogi?

Sona: Aunty wo baat nahi hain.. Par yeh bohot costly hai.. mein nahi rakh sakti isse. I know Dev ne, i mean Mr. Dixit ne acche hi maan se diya hai par...

Ishwari: Beta, suno meri baat, Dev ne hesiyat dekh kar nahi diya hai. Tum ghar ka hissa isilye.. rakh lo beta..

The contented eyes of Ishwari depicted the pride of Dev and Sona's love for Dev.

Later, Sonakshi takes dinner for Ishwari in her room. She asks her about her leg and talks regarding physiotherapy treatment. Ishwari says there is no need for doctor treatment and she will follow Sonakshi's exercise without fail every day.

Sonakshi laugh and says

Sona: Mujhe pata hai Nikki, Ria, Neha aur Dev jiddi hain, par unke genes mein jiddi pan kahan se aaya ye ab samjh mein aa raha hai.. Aapse hi.. Aap sabse jyada jiddi hain.

Ishwari starts saying something but

Sona: haan... mujhe pata hai ke agar ye jidd naa hoti to gujara karna bohot mushkil hota... 4 baccho ko sambhalna, unhe sahi raah dikhana. Zindagi bohot mushkil hoti agar aap jidd naa karti Dev ko, I mean Mr. Dixit ko inspire karne ke wo aaj ke Ishwari Enterprises ke owner ban sake. Aapki yahi jidd Ria mein bhi najar aati hai.. jiska bhai itne badi institution ka owner hai ussi ki company mein job karna.. normal employees ki tarah public transport se travel karna jab ki Mr. Dixit afford kar sakte hain usse gaadi dena... Aur Nikki.. woh to sabse jiddi hai.. sabse choti hain na. Par don't worry auntyji woh bhi responsible hojaygi... Par aapko pata hai aap jaisa jiddi kon hai???

Ishwari: Dev.. wo bilkul mujhpe gaya hai.. hai na?

Sona: Nahi aunty, mein Dev I mean Mr. Dixit ki baat nahi kar rahi hun.. Mein to Neha ki baat kar rahi hun... Woh bilkul aap jaisi hain...Jiddi par samay aane par aapno ke liye saare dukh seh sakti hain.. Neha sabse strong child hain aapki.. Dev, I mean Mr. Dixit toh responsible hain par sabse strong Neha hain...

Ishwari: Hmmm... sabko ekdum acchese janne lag gayi ho tum Sona. Sachh mein, Neha jiddi hain par bohot honhar hain.. Aur yeh tum Dev ko Mr. Dixit, Mr. Dixit kyun kehti reheti ho.. Mere bte ka naam pasand nahi tumhe?

Sonakshi: Nahi , aisi koi baat nahi hai auntyji. Mr. Dixit hi sahi hai.

Ishwari: Toh phir Dev kehenemein harz hi kya hai. Bol ?

Sonakshi: Kya?

Ishwari: Sona.. Mr. Dixit nahi.. Naam lena uska.

Ishwari glares at Sonakshi... Sonakshi is working hard internally.

Sonakshi thinking...' keh de.. but no blushing. Samjhi Sona. Ready?'

Sonakshi: DEV...

The way she spells out the name... Dev... The love automatically makes its way out.

Ishwari: Hmmm.. bohot accha lagta hain jab uska naam koi leta hai.. Jaise tune kitne apnepan se kaha.. tujhe pata hai mere alava shayad tu hi ek hai jisne itne apnepan se uska naam liya.. Ab kitne din hogaye tujhe yahan par, phir bhi Mr. Dixit kehti ho.. Dev kahan karo..

Sona: Par auntyji, Mr. Dixit thik hain na. Means..

Ishwari: Par kya usme.. Bass ab se tum usse Dev hi kahan karo.. Phir ek bar kehdo?

Sona: Aap bhi na aunty.. Mein chalti hun..

She starts going out of room...

Ishwari: Sona, keh do na ek baar..

Dev is standing at the door..

Dev: Kya keh do maa..

Ishwari eyeing Sona: Ab kitne din tum dono ek dusre ko Mr. Dixit aur Ms. Bose bulaoge.. Mein Sona ko keh rahi thi.. tujhe Dev kehne, par yeh sunn hi nahi rahi..

Dev to Sona: Keh dijiye na. (in his husky voice and with direct eye-contact)

Sona: (Blushing) Dev!!! And goes out smiling...

Its long; but I hope u all enjoy it. Do comment

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.FlyingClouds. thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow!!
M blushing!!☺️
Ishwari's insistence to sona for calling dev by his name😆
Truly amazing!!
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OMG this is so beautiful Os lovely work yaar! thanks for pm
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Wow :)
Amazing OS :)
Superb :)
Loved it :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: .FlyingClouds.

Wow!!

M blushing!!☺️
Ishwari's insistence to sona for calling dev by his name😆
Truly amazing!!



Thank you soo much.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jyo.Kuku.Sanaya

OMG this is so beautiful Os lovely work yaar! thanks for pm



Many many thanks
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Shukriya😊
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Awww this is so cute. Even i was blushing with sona. Btw very good idea regarding the gift.
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It wasnt very long 😊
I loved it ❤️
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Its amazing

it was just like I am reading the written update of episode

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