Second Inning of Dev and Sona Love story FFUptd-Prt17-pg119 updated - Page 54

Originally posted by: WeRockTheWorld

Absolutely wonderful !! enjoyed reading ...please continue..

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Originally posted by: mygaby

This is not fair u made us wait almost a month for such a short update'" . Chalo is baar ISi se kaam Chala lenge. I want long update next time mayu. However I liked it very much . U have got that different touch that makes u apart from others .

Yes it took me almost one month to update this OS😭

Hard time for me..

Well anyway am happy that you liked it makes me very happy.

@ BOld : Compliment😳😳😳 thank you thank you

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Originally posted by: rcha_bhrt

Wow Di so good to see your update after a long time.

I know it must be difficult for you but still you gave this superb update thanku so much.

omg this was hilarious😆 my love for devki is increasing day by day. She is so naughty and adorable kid 😊

Lens kha gayi?? I was literally ROFLing 🤣 and that explanation of devki 'ha wo gol gol na wo mai kha gayi' 😆

Dev and sona's date was so good and refreshing. Loved it

Awww you reminded me of those beautiful places of chandni chauk and now I just want to go there and relish my fav food. I was at Kareem's hotel last month and now I want to go again.

Their awkwardness and those small kisses were just awww. I loved their bickering about Delhi traffic in car.

The way devki slept at dev was so real and cute. I also used to do it when I was a kid.

Already waiting for your next update.

Continue soon

HI richa

Ohh so you are from Delhi..

Next time I will contact you instead of using google search.

I have never been to Delhi. So i have to google - for the name of shops..
Food is my weakness - and weighing machine clearly showing this weakness 🤣😕

If you find anything wrong pls forgive ..

You are such sweetie 😳

Thanks and huggies

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Originally posted by: Ferdous_69

Amazing update Mayu Di...
Awww... Our super cute nd naughty devki.. 😳 😳
Just loved her a lot...
Waiting for next part ... Update soon..

Thanks Fero meri Jaan 😃

Originally posted by: rukiaa

What an amazing update.👏I just love devki.😆😆
Sona and Dev date. How cute
Loved it.😳

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Originally posted by: Jade0001

Lovely Part

Devki got everyone on their toes her mischievousness is so refreshing

but wow she actually ate Nikki's lenses , Iashwari and Mamaji were very worried that nothing should be wrong with Devki while poor Nikki just lost her lenses

Dev and Sonakshi going out for dinner eating and sharing their food was really beautiful slowly they are coming close too and Dev is happy that Sonakshi and his daughter are close to him by his side

looking forward to seeing what Devki has done in school

truly sorry for such late comment

Thank You Shaun..😃
Don't be say sorry.. You are not at all late.. In fact it is me who is latecomer always 😕

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Originally posted by: neelima_menon

Amazingly written:)

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Wow I didn't know about this OS...skimmed thru part 10..luv it..can't wait to read the first 9 parts 👏

Originally posted by: Vancity_Ca

Wow I didn't know about this OS...skimmed thru part 10..luv it..can't wait to read the first 9 parts 👏

🤣🤣 U don't know ABC of this OS , but read part 10 first 😆😆😆

anyway am hoping that you will also liked all 9 parts as well 🤔

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Originally posted by: cutie15

Awesome and a cute update
Devki is one difficult child
But she is adorable
Loved the update

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