My 1st OS ........ DevaKshi KISS

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sorry I m a very bad writer.
Forgive me plz

OK start with after Dev proposed to Sonakshi

As usual Sona come to her work at Ishwari mansion.

All members in hall , Sona say hi to all with a big smile.
Garib ki beti noticed Sona warm smile and asking her with tauntingly ... " yanha pe khade ho kar dannt kya dikha rahi hai bangalan ...lottery lagi hai kya?..."

Sona break her smile but Ishwari managed and say ... Hasti huyi kittni pyari lagti hai , Aise hi hasa karo beta

Dev watched all this scene at some distance.
Sad when mami taunting Sona and happy after on Ishwari word.

Then Sona find Dev with hiding her finding expression to all and see Dev saw at her with very Romantically.
She blushing...

Then Dev give a sign to saw her his mobile...

And Sona get tensed bcz at night DevaKshi phone convo start. Between this convo sudden Dev want a KISS and Sona say not right now ...

So Dev sweetly order him that I want my KISS tomorrow in y home.

Sona say I don't ... I mean how , app ke ghar main sab honge...

Dev say ... So what I want my KISS that's it.


So back to scene
Dev come to the hall and say Good morning Sona, ( all shocked , Sonakshi big her eyes and say no with a sign... ) then Dev conscious and said ... Opps Sorry , I mean Ms. Bose gd mrng.

Sona started think that how she Kiss him in front of all.

Suddenly Nikki and Riya come towards her with fight mode.

Mistakenly they push Sona, and Sona lose her control and fall in down with Dev.

DevaKshi eyes lock , Sona hair covered both face but suddenly Sona KISS on Dev cheeck, Dev shocked and he think like ..." Ye kya tha..."

They both back to reality when mami shouting on Nikki and Riya

Both stand up

Mami get shoked when she see Sona lip mark on Dev cheeck and all r also , Ishwari too.

But Dev managed and say it happened by accidentally.
Remembered pehele bhi aisha ho chuka hai bcz of this Riya n Nikki Ms. Bose lip mark in my shirt.

All relaxed and remembered that scene.

DevaKshi started blushing

Gives ur comments plz


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krystle123 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#2
wow... its tooo cute and lovely... 👏 keep writing and do more os of devakshi dear😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I am blashing dear 😳 😳
So so so cute...
Thanks for d OS...
Do write more 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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So cute
Great attempt dear
Keep writing
Will love to read
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Posted: 9 years ago
#5
Great attempt 👏
Do write more 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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very very cute one dear.. I wish such Devashi scene happens.. really lovely.. 👍🏼
I can imagine Dev smiling from his heart seeing sona and Sona blushing seeing him next day after proposal happens..😳
Pilu05 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks a lot for urs Lovely comments

Love u all. :)
ammu3 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely OS - hope we get to see something on the similar note 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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🤣 Nikki Ria ke jhagre = DevAkshi Romance... kya baat hai!! 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awww... So cute... Do keep writing dear... Its beautiful.. TFS.😊

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