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Posted: 9 years ago
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so I thought of writing an OS...its just my imagination of devakshi romance after they are together. Here for this story purposes ishwari is thrilled to have sona as her daughter in law. so here goes, also this is my first OS ever sooo,...yeah! enjoy!
'sona! sona!... dev yelled as he entered dixit mansion after a hard day's work. He was tired but nothing that his two favourite ladies couldn't take care of..his mother and his sona. god! he loved her, and he loved being in this feeling.
Not seeing sona around he proceeded to his ma's room. 'ma sonakshi kaha hai?...areh aap kahi jaa rahi ho kya?...dev asked seeing his mom all dressed up.
'ha who mrs. sharma ke yaha puja hai usme...aur sonak...areh yeh kya tera muh kyu utar gaya?...
'to aur kya hoga, apko pata hai na mai ghar pe laut u toh toh mujhe ap dono yaha chaihye...sirf mere sath...ab aap bhi ja rahi ho aur sonakshi bhi nahi dikh rahi hai!'...pouting he sat down on the bed.
Ishwari smiled and lovingly slided her hand over dev's head...he knew how hard her son worked. 'areh babah sun na, dev, mai toh abhi aa jaoungi, aur tabh tak sona hai na...who bas...loh a gayi'
dev turned to look at her...she was a vision. she wore a pale blue a sari with golden border. he couldn't help but look at her waist...he didn't get to see a lot of that.
Ishwari smiled seeing the two of them. both of them had worked hard all their life...taking the responsibility of their families...they deserved the happiness.
ok I will stop here, I have a few ideas in mind but wil only procees if i get good response...so until then!

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Plz update soon eagerly waiting for next one 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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arey.. why did u stop? its really interesting yaar. continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is unfair!!!!
😭 😭
U can't leave us like this 😲 😲
Plz plz update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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A good start plz continue
Edited by adi35 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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So interestng...pls pls pls continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
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That was such a teaser.. Continue ASAP! :-)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#8
This is beautiful... Please continue... Would love to read more.
And thanks for sharing.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ok...i will update by tonight...going out now...but will right in the evening and post it by night!...also thanks for all those replies...this is my first os so you can imagine what they mean to me.. 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Plz update soon eagerly waiting for next one 😉

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