Devakshi TS : The Game Of Realization Part 4 updated on page9(16 june)

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Hii everyone.
I am new to this forum. I have read many stories here but not commented on all.
Actually I have already tried my hand on asya, manan, twinj. And now I like krpkab, and thought of writing here too.
I hope you guys will like it. So Plz tell me how's it.

Devakshi TS : The Game Of Realization


Part 1

World ended for her, her expectations, her love was murdered.
It's been two days that sona came to know about Natasha's alliance for dev. She was dying from inside but had to plaster a smile on her face so that no one can see the state she was going through.
She came to ishwari aunty "aunty ji. Umm mujhe aapse bat karni hai"
Ishwari who has now started to consider sona as her own daughter asked lovingly. "Ha bol na kya hua?"
Sona hesitated and spoke "actually mera kam ab yaha khatam ho chuka hai toh ab main chahti hu ki aap apna dhyan khud rakhe. Or jab bhi meri zaruray ho toh mujhe bas ek call kar dena"
Ishwari asked caressing her face "kya hua sona? Kyu ja rahi ho? Or tumhe kya hua hai? Main dekh rahi hu bht time se tum bht udas ho, vo kya chiz hai Jo tumhe kha rahi hai"
Sona who was looking down shot her face up in shock, how does she know. But before she could say anything her phone ring.
"Ha Maa" she spoke.
Asha spoke "sona Maine tere ek ladka dhunda hai, or main kuch Sunna nahi chahti. Tu usse Milne jayegi. Or dhang se milegi, bete kab tak aise..."
Sona spoke "thik hai Maa. Mujhe ladka manzur hai. Aap bat chala lo"
Asha was shocked "shona Maine sirf Milne ko kaha, rishta paka karne ke liye nahi."
Sona spoke "ha Maa. Par it's high time mujhe bhi shadi kar leni chahiye. So aap un logo ko ha boldo" and she cut the call. A lone tear escaped her eye.
Ishwari asked wiping that tear "kya hua hai sona? Mujhe bata, kyu tune rishte ke liye ha ki? Vo bhi bina mile. Kuch toh bat hai sona. Tu mujhe Dara rahi hai"
Sona unknowingly spoke "aunty ji pehle main intezar kar rahi thi ki mujhe pyar ho toh main usse shadi karu par ab sari umeedein mar chuki hai. Ab Maa Baba jisse kahenge jaha kahenge main shadi kar lungi "
Ishwari spoke bringing sona out of her world "tu kisi se pyar karti hai?"
Sona spoke getting conscious "umm. Nahi. Main bas yeh batane ayi thi ki meri job ke 2-3 din rehte hai. Main jau na (she asked in a soft voice )
Ishwari asked " main khaungi toh ruk jayegi?"
Sona hugged ishwari and cried, after one minute she broke the hug and ran out of the room.
Ishwari called her out but she didn't stopped.
Sona when reached out of the room cried like hell. "Kash ruk pati auntyji. Par nahi ruk sakti" she spoke to herself.

Here asha told sona's decision to everyone. Knowing her child asha didn't confirmed the alliance for sona, she just wanted them to meet.
Elena was fuming with anger she need to confront sona.

At night sona came and skipped her dinner stating that she ate at Mr. Dixit's house. And she excused herself to room.
Sona called Dev and spoke. "Mr. Dixit now because aunty is perfectly fine so I ll be leaving in 2-3 days"
Dev spoke being shocked "what? Par kyu?"
Sona replied "because my work is over"
Dev spoke "so join my office na"
Sona spoke gulping the lump formed in her throat "actually I ll be getting married so don't know whether my in laws will allow or not"
Dev got another shock " what? Kab? I mean aapne bataya bhi nahi"
Sona spoke "because mujhe bhi aaj pata laga"
Dev spoke "so you must be just meeting him, right? I mean you are still not sure of him."
Sona spoke "actually I said yes. Maa Baba ne chose kia toh Acha hi hoga na"
Dev spoke "but this is not fair sonakshi"
Sona spoke not able to control her patience "why not? When you can say yes to Natasha just because of aunty ji than why not me"
Dev don't know why but he don't want sona go get married "but Natasha is a nice girl. And you don't even know him"
Sona spoke "I am sure, she must be a nice girl. And don't worry Mr. Dixit about me. I ll take care of myself. Now I am sleepy so gudnyt" and before he could say anything she cut the call.
If it was any other day dev's ego would have hurt but today he don't know what was happening to him. He don't feel good after listening about sona's marriage.

Elena heard sona's convo, and before she could break down Elena fired questions.
"Kyu ki shadi ke liye ha sona?" Elena asked in anger.
Sona spoke "kyuki it's high time I should get married."
Elena replied "ha toh kisi se bhi karegi shadi?"
Sona replied "so what elena? Doesn't matter. Mr. Dixit ab Natasha ke hone vale hai. And unke alava koi bhi ho, it really doesn't matter. Nikal lungi zindagi"
Elena shouted "stop destroying your life"
Sona too screamed "listen Elena, mujhe dev se pyar hua meri problem hai. Anyways I am not of his type. So tujhe meri kasam hai iske bad ek shabad bhi nahi bolegi. Maa ne jise choose kia hai I ll marry him."
Elena spoke "take your swear back dammit. You can't do this"
Sona spoke "shut up Elena. It's my life I can do this. So stop brainwashing me. (She calmed down and spoke ) Plz Elena mat kar. Main hurt houngi or zada. Dev bht ameer hai. He don't deserve a middle class girl like me. Plz Elena not anymore. Agar meri khushi chahti hai toh ab kuch mat karo" she spoke and turned her face and lied on her side trying to sleep.
Elena sighed in defeat. But they both don't know that someone else heard there convo.


So how was it?
Because of my exams going on don't know when I ll update it.
Do tell me how was it.
Bye gudnyt.
Love Vish❤️.
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MeDHellsAngel thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Index:-
Part 1 - Above
Edited by MeDHellsAngel - 9 years ago
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Amazing
Eager to know who heard that conversation
Continue soon
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Amazing dear... After ur exam update soon
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Cont cont cont... But after ur exam... We'll wait... Add me to your pm list
Luv
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first , welcome to the forum dear 🤗
and your story is amazing . continue soon.😛
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hello hello welcome to this forum
i hope you remember me from qh forum
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It was amazing , pls pm me when u update
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Love the concept.. waiting for the update.. you write well 😊👏
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Amazing story.. I wish you continue and update soon..
And yes Best of luck for your exams! :-)

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