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Flibbertigibbet

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: shaaranya
Such a beautiful OS
You should write more, you're a fabulous writer

Heyyy! Thankyou so much! I intend to, just waiting for the show's story to progress :)

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Flibbertigibbet

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: JyotiBThakur
I have no words to explain how beautiful your OS is...👏
I was actually imagining Dev and Sona while reading it... It is so damn realistic, exactly the way our show is... The creatives can definitely use this in the show... And i actually feel that after the texting and call conversation, one day Dev will arrive at Sona's place to discuss his restlessness and problems. Kudos to you... Very well written.🤗

Thankyou so much! Im glad you liked it! 🤗

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Flibbertigibbet

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: luvflicksgirl
Reading your os was like watching the scenes unfold in reality... U have a wonderful style of writing... Pm be the next time u write anything new😳
Luv Sri😳

Hello sri!!! Thankyou sooo much for the lovely words! :)

Sure! I'll pm you next time :)

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Flibbertigibbet

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: AngelsFlyAlone
This is so dreamy, breezy and so damn beautiful. It is just mesmerizing. <3 Thanks for such a beautiful piece of heaven!

Thankyou for the lovely wordss 😃

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Kurup

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

You are tremendously outstanding writer...Keep writing more dude for you have a talent to keep your readers hooked and glued to the story which is not everyone's cup of tea, so keep writing more and more...

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Sona

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

that was a beautiful shot!

-Sona

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RaSia

@RaSia

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Simply mind Blowing!! Tooo good. I really hope they show something like this in reality. This is so inline with the characters and their relationship. Amazing writing. Loved it

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hermosoanu123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Exceptionally beautifully conceptualised.sumtym u just need to unleash ur bottled up emotions nd pour it to sumone who listens to u ,don't judge u . Loved it

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Sowmiya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

tis was a really gud one!! luvd it!!

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Mohi99

@Mohi99

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Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Kudos to you... I write few OS myself but you are gifted... The scenes with such details and expressed emotions take you on another level... I really hope this happens on the show. M sure someone from their creative team mite be reading out on this forum... Hope he sees this and takes it on the show... V v nice... All the best... Please pm me next time you write... Would love to read...

Regards M

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