Fernweh - A devakshi OS - Page 2

Originally posted by: shaaranya

Such a beautiful OS
You should write more, you're a fabulous writer

Originally posted by: JyotiBThakur

I have no words to explain how beautiful your OS is...👏

I was actually imagining Dev and Sona while reading it... It is so damn realistic, exactly the way our show is... The creatives can definitely use this in the show... And i actually feel that after the texting and call conversation, one day Dev will arrive at Sona's place to discuss his restlessness and problems. Kudos to you... Very well written.🤗

Originally posted by: luvflicksgirl

Reading your os was like watching the scenes unfold in reality... U have a wonderful style of writing... Pm be the next time u write anything new😳

Luv Sri😳

Originally posted by: AngelsFlyAlone

This is so dreamy, breezy and so damn beautiful. It is just mesmerizing. <3 Thanks for such a beautiful piece of heaven!

You are tremendously outstanding writer...Keep writing more dude for you have a talent to keep your readers hooked and glued to the story which is not everyone's cup of tea, so keep writing more and more...

Simply mind Blowing!! Tooo good. I really hope they show something like this in reality. This is so inline with the characters and their relationship. Amazing writing. Loved it

Exceptionally beautifully conceptualised.sumtym u just need to unleash ur bottled up emotions nd pour it to sumone who listens to u ,don't judge u . Loved it

tis was a really gud one!! luvd it!!

Kudos to you... I write few OS myself but you are gifted... The scenes with such details and expressed emotions take you on another level... I really hope this happens on the show. M sure someone from their creative team mite be reading out on this forum... Hope he sees this and takes it on the show... V v nice... All the best... Please pm me next time you write... Would love to read...