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cherrynicolem

@cherrynicolem

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Awww😳

So cute ending

Lovely

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Divi.C

@Divi.C

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Haahahhaa it was hilarious. ..jealous dev is sooo good.. .hoping for next part

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Pilu05

@Pilu05

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Wow , awesome yaar

Dev ektha Boka seriously

Well written

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onie

@TurnThePage

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

I can imagine this happen on the show actually. Loved how you portrayed both their emotions so on point.
I am really looking forward to the upcoming track. Sona's suitors and Natasha can spice up the story equally.
And thanks for writing this amazing story!!

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mai kyun batau ;)

@raksbasu

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Forget about Devakshi, i'm head over heels with ur writing skills😳
The write-up was so beautiful and excellently written👏
Glad to be its reader😎
Loved it...
Keep writing loads and loads😃

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octobersky24

@octobersky24

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Omg! I am so sure sona's heart breaking track and Dev's jealousy track gonna start exactly like this in the show! This is awesome 👏

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Lasya

@Dexterity

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

This was something stunning !

Loved it ❤️

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Jyoti Thakur

@JyotiBThakur

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Awww... Beautifully written... Thanks for sharing dear... I would love to read more of your OS... Please keep writing.😊

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Priya

@priyanvs

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

awesome os dear

loved it

pls continue writing

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@Coffee_Chips

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Amazingly written. What a way of expressing Dev's inner mind & Sona's feelings. Enjoyed a lot & when he said Abhoy 'She's the best' i totally realized Dev has changed for better from the firm, strong businessman to a gentle guy at heart with feelings...

Do write stories abt DevAkshi...

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