DevAkshi OS : Without You| Part 2 Posted.

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LilyPotter

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Loved it.😃

Update soon.

Love,

Lily

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Priya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

nice os dear

loved it

pls continue soon

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Naina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

This is beyond cute! Can't wait for the next part :)

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Asif

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Awesome part dear
He was restless after his mother fixed his roka. Talk with sona was nice. She confessed. Waiting for his reply
Update soon plz
Thanks

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TheAphrodite

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Thank You So Much You All <3

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Asif

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Part 2 was nice
He told her what he feels for her.
Like Dev confession
She supposed to be angry but she wasn't
It was nice story
Thanks

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

I loved the concluding part beautiful it was.. Keep writing more. You're a great writer, extremely good with keeping emotions subtle.. Keep it up..

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kashishbano

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Very nicely concluded.
Like the Os

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jasw

@jasw

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Awww ...so nice and so very like the characters Dev and Sona! I loved the way Dev confessed "I just feel this natural right over you ... Ma maybe able to do without you but I can't. I need you." Knowing Dev I'm sure this will be the way he'll confess without the word 'love'! 😃

When one watches the serial there are so many times one feels as if he actually thinks Sona as his own but refuses to acknowledge.

Waiting for the day when he will graduate from Ms. Bose/Dr. Bose to Sona!😳