OS: The Pani Puri Date

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Antara123

@Antara123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Autumn_Hue
Woah this was something awesome.. I love how you write.. Just the perfect blend of emotions, sarcasm and humor.. How do I tell you that how much I love how you write down the parts that require humor and comic sense.. I love to read Dev and Sonakshi's constant banter it's rather cute.. Keep it going and write more and pm me when you do the next time..
P.S. - On another note I have written an OS myself named Attractions de Souvenirs so do give it a read if you'd want to. I'd love it if you would read it..

Just don't stop babe you're an awesome writer..

Love,
Kashmi

Thanks a lot dear! I really like the banter too. So, I am staying away from the heavy emotional stuff, and sticking to these small, OSes, that'll help convey what I want to say better. I'll PM you, I have written two more. The links are there in the post itself. And, yes, I will read your story. 😳

I wont stop now. I hope. 😆

Loads of love

Naj

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Antara123

@Antara123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: lasyap3
Hey Naj !
Gald to see you again with another OS ...

Just loved every part of it ...

Now let me tell you some facts !

__ Indeed Delhi's chat is quite different from Kolkata chat ... and for me Kolkata wins here and hands down in this matter ...

__ In Bengali , for the phrase you mentioned there ... it would be something like this ...

"Dada, dui plate puchka daao .."
😉
Pani puri is called Puchka in Kolkata ... My mouth is watering God! they are damn crispy ...

Take care ...

HI MAN!

I am so glad, you are here. For me, chat in Mumbai beats everything else. Ya, I thought it was Puchka too. Anyways, THANKS A LOT FOR THE TRANSLATION. 😉 I edited it.

My mouth is watering too.

Chalo Bye! Love you.

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Lasya

@Dexterity

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: najma123

HI MAN!

I am so glad, you are here. For me, chat in Mumbai beats everything else. Ya, I thought it was Puchka too. Anyways, THANKS A LOT FOR THE TRANSLATION. 😉 I edited it.

My mouth is watering too.

Chalo Bye! Love you.

Wow ! You have edited it? That's so sweet of you 😃

By the way , it could have been better if it was WOMAN ! 😆

Love you too !

P.S : I can't stop thinking about food and our DevAkshi 😉

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Lasya

@Dexterity

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

OMG ! I have done a small blunder ... It is actually one plate na, but I said DUI which is TWO

So for you the sentence would be

Dada, ek plate Puchka daao - "Bhaiya give one plate of Puchka "

Sorry for troubling you , Naj !

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cherrynicolem

@cherrynicolem

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Excellent os

Thank you for the pm

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mai kyun batau ;)

@raksbasu

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

I've not tasted Delhi's but i can do anything for panipuris of kolkata
Dev and his sweet taunts🤣
4 times payment just to make her smile You've written it really well👍🏼
Loved it😳

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Antara123

@Antara123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: raksbasu
I've not tasted Delhi's but i can do anything for panipuris of kolkata
Dev and his sweet taunts🤣
4 times payment just to make her smile You've written it really well👍🏼
Loved it😳

Dev did not know why he paid four times the amount. 😳

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Antara123

@Antara123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: ...Dexterity...
OMG ! I have done a small blunder ... It is actually one plate na, but I said DUI which is TWO
So for you the sentence would be

Dada, ek plate Puchka daao - "Bhaiya give one plate of Puchka "

Sorry for troubling you , Naj !

I think I edited it. 😆