Krishnadasi:aara ff

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey everyone I am starting my new ff on Krishnadasi main plot of the story will be Aradhya marriage with Krishna .i know some one wrote with the same concept but I planned it before only that's the reason I am starting now it self but I am gonna post daily episodes after my board examination ok and I will continue if u like the ff (The story starts with Aradhya confession). Because of aryan special treatment Aradhya started loving him .aradhya wanted to confess him she called aryan to some mandir far away from Krishna vati Aryan entry Aradhya all blushing and smiling all the time but wait wait aryan is looking quite angry lets what happens Aradhya:Aryan woh Aryan:(hold her very harshly and pin her to the wall and Aradhya shocked )kamyabi mil gayi very good very good itni Aachi planning Karoge toh kyun nahi mileage. Aradhya:(almost in tears)yeh yeh Tum Kya Bol rahe Ho Aryan Aryan:jo Bol raha Hun Sahi Bol raha Hun Tum jooti Ho tumhara aaji ne waha mere Behan ka Tamasha banaya sirf aur sirf apna Badla pura Karne aur Tum Yaha. Aradhya:nahi Aryan aaji aise kabhi nahi Kar sakti Aryan :aaji nahi Kar sakti right Aradhya hai naa par Tum me Kya Kiya Aradhya Mujhe is baat ka Zyaad Bura laga jo Tum ne Kiya tumne apne bimari ka natak Kiya (Aryan will have misunderstood about Aradhya health she had a cold and he thought that she had cancer and treat her gently and in some misunderstanding Aryan will think Aradhya said him about cancer thing but she was speaking about aaji )Aryan :Tum jaiso ki aukaad hi Kya hai Mujhe yeh phele Sochi naa tha Tum log hai hi gire Huein paiso keliye kuch bhi Kar sakti.(Aryan starts leaving from there in anger slightly heart broken). Aradhya:ruko Aryan !cancer hai Mujhe nahi aaji ko hum nahi anna chate hai krishnavati lekin aaji apni aakri saas yeha lena chati thi isleyi yaha Wapis aaye aur ek baat mein tumse pyaar karne lagi thi (aryan stunned And happy)but abb aur nahi thank u mr.aryan vidhyadarrao Mujhe apne aukadd dhikane keliye (Aradhya leaves heart broken same with Aryan ). Precap:Aradhya says haan for becoming a Krishnadasi everyone shocked

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Did anyone like the ff please tell me "I will discontinue if anyone didn't like it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Plot seems interesting..
Waiting for the next part.
Update soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi... i liked the plot... just that i am little confuse here and there.. there are quite a few technical mistakes... but a thing.. aryan is a fool but i can't accept him doing manhandling.. pushing into wall scene was major turn off for me.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome ff 👏
Pls post next part fast.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: shravanfan

hi... i liked the plot... just that i am little confuse here and there.. there are quite a few technical mistakes... but a thing.. aryan is a fool but i can't accept him doing manhandling.. pushing into wall scene was major turn off for me.

sorry for my mistakes u can't put everything in written form naa as the story will progress u will not find any mistakes

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