Teri Meri Khamoshiyan - KrishVeer FF (my version) Ch 3 pg13 UPDATED - Page 6

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Posted: 6 years ago
#51
"idoit" word suntey he aisa lagta hai veer kaan me bol raha hai🤣
So good...nihaa...jaldi jaldi update plz

I am in love with Krishna and veer here❤️
Amazingly written 🤗
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Posted: 6 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: Aaliya_Fizz

"idoit" word suntey he aisa lagta hai veer kaan me bol raha hai 🤣

So good...nihaa...jaldi jaldi update plz

I am in love with Krishna and veer here❤️
Amazingly written 🤗

@bold 🤣 and still you wants us to faint 😆 wah re
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Posted: 6 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: Nihaaa

@bold 🤣 and still you wants us to faint 😆 wah re

Haan please 🤣


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Posted: 6 years ago
#54
🤣 haaawww
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Posted: 6 years ago
#55
Okay Krishna getting beautiful nightmares of her with veer make sense that she likes him...
So got separated from her in Romania..
How come team members dint even notice that 😲 and came back ?
Veer was missing her in his own way ? Curious what explanation he demanding from her 😉😆

Good one niha...
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Posted: 6 years ago
#56
👏Amazing story! I need another update - fast!
Edited by annx - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#57
Loving it Nihaa , keep writing, waiting for your next update. Thanks for this. 😊😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
#58
Well written nihhuu ... love this story Nd more than story I love your cute nokjhok posts 😆
Waiting for the next part...😛
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Posted: 6 years ago
#59
its been ages since i had written or updated something
Renee, shamz, thabs, aalu ...looking at me 😳 continuously for hours
Me : arrey yaar likhti hu 🤔 thand rakho
itne me BS comes up with goons
ka bhayee bahut shauk chada hai tumko love story likhne ka
Me: m not in a mood to break ur neck BS ji ... jahan se aaye the wapis chale jao...😡
BS: dekh lene tumhe aur krishna aur Veer ko
Aalu: ayeee... khabardar jo inki taraf dekha to..😡
Renee: picks her hockey stick 😆
BS points out his finger at me but soon he face palms and gets lost



actually he sees Dr. Veer coming and he's in an angry mode 🤔

Renee and aaliya : haayeee doctor veer kitne achche lagte hai gusse me
Dr. Veer stares back at them and both faints 😆😆

DrVeer : wheres DVPM 😳 🤔
Me : hain ab mai DVPM Hoon 🤣 hides my smile and a cup of black coffee 😆 and starts typing furiously

Dr Veer again sits behind Nihaa and takes her coffee mug😆
ye b koi chupane wali baat hai ...idiot 🤔
hain ye Idiot kaun bola mereko 🤔😭
Nihaa jumps ... oh hi Dr. Veer 😳😆 what a pleasant surprise


wheres the next update ... i want an explanation 🤔
me : ummm 🤔...🤔... soon

dr veer stays there and watches nervously as nihaa continues to write nervously ...
all izz well aal izz well Nihaa 😳
Edited by Nihaaa - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#60
Chapter 2 part 3 : Love or Desire ya... Tashan

Krishna has safely returned back from Romania but she's not her self... the reason was that she got separated from her team mates and her team mates thought ki she has returned back to hotel ...
Noor got worried and with the help of her dad she manages to find Krishna 😳
On the other hand Dr.Veer is furious as he has not bullied or mocked krishna and when Krishna comes to the college he grabs her arm and starts scolding her badly ... in return she slaps him hard...😡😆
all Veer wants is an explanation from Krishna 😡

Krishna : an Explanation 😕😕 regarding what
Veer : where you have been 🤔
Krishna: Romania 😛
Veer : your trip was for five days and you are coming after 10 days 😡 koi mil gaya tha kya..
Krishna: haan Count Dracula 🤣 aur kuch sunna hai😆
Veer : kuch bhi mat bolo... i want an answer God Damnit 😡
Krishna: Why are you asking... ohh now i understand
Veer : what🤔
Krishna : itne dino se kisi ko statne ko nahi mila na aapko... esp main
Veer :😡 You don't know what are you saying
Krishna: hum achchi tarah se jaante hai aapka motive... agar aapko indians se itni nafrat hai .. then why are you talking to me... maine to nahi bola tha
Veer : Get Lost KRISHNA SHUKLA
Krishna : fine m going Dr. Khadoos 😡
Both of them turns away their faces... and suddenly krishna falls down...😭 as she feels a total black out

after 3 hrs she wakes up in Hospital ward... and Dr. Wilson is checking her stats as well as some tests
Krishna ... did you know u fainted
Krishna : yes doctor😭 what happened to me 🤔
Dr. Wilson : your tests show that you are anemic 🤔 and Ur hb is 6 mg
Krishna gets shocked 😲
Dr. Wilson advises her to get some rest... and not to stress her 😭

Krishna returns back home and she can't sleep the whole night ... Romania was a terrible experience for her...
Noor: ab hum tumhe kahin nahi jaane daenge 🤗 waise low blood... kahin ...🤔
Krishna : kahin... 🤔 ..theek se bol yaar
Noor : kahin tujhe dracula ne to nahi na kaat liya
KRishna : haan... ek minute ...kya bola 🤣 🤔😡 aap na vampire wale shows dekhna band karengi 😡 ek ne to already humara khoon choosa hai... aur unka naam Dr. Veer hai😡😕
Noor : kisne 🤣 🤣
Krishna stares at her 😡
both have some dinner and get back to their bed.😆

Dr Veer Calls her that night
after 4 rings she picks up the call 🤔
Hello! whose this
Dr. Veer : Krishna ... Meet me in 10 minutes😈
Krishna: Dr. Veer... 😲 how did ya get my number 😕
Veer : maine jo kaha hai wo karo
Krishna Rushes out... looks like the blood is draining from her face
Outside Dr. Veer is waiting for her in the car
As soon as she reaches near his car.. Dr. Veer Says
Krishna Get in the Car😲
Krishna ...folds her arm ... and snaps back...NO 😈

Dr. Veer comes out and makes her sit in the car..
Krishna shouts... Dr. Veer leave me ...
Veer ignores her shouts and starts driving... both are silent
Krishna is like ... ye ho kya raha hai mere saath
Dr. Veer stops the car in between and looks at krishna with desire
MAine kaha tha na Don't defy me
Krishna : When 😕
Letme make this clear to you Krishna Shukla that you are only MINE 😡.. how many times i have to remind you that ..
krishna: are you insane🤔
Veer : yes ... because i love you 😳
krishna: but...i love Count Dracula 🤣 look at me he has sucked my blood
Veer : oh you just stop with this nonsense
and after this he again passionately kisses her on lips... this time his kiss is full of desire, passion and hunger and her lips co ordinates now... both are kissing ... and suddenly there's a flash of light
and Bammm.
Krishna wakes up with a jolt and she's badly sweating 🤓 ...another Dream of Dr. Veer ...
m gonna die 🤔 if this didn't stop
She and her team goes together to medical college... where the team is divided into groups she has been paired with Noel and kathy 😳. She without any interruption does her work and she's pretends like no one is around her and she continuously works untill kathy brings her coffee😳
Krishna, you will be exhausted ... rest for a while says kathy 😳

krishna walks out and sits on the bench... she witnesses Dr. Veer saying to a student ki m not an Indian and i don't belong to India so get out of my way...
Krishna: khadoos kaahin ka humesha akadoo bankar ghoomta hai😆😡 she sips her coffee
krishna is lost in her thoughts and Veer interrupts her...
aaj kya hua...phir se nikal diya Noel ne 😆
Krishna: will you shut up Count Dracula
Veer: 😆 Romania ka bhoot nahi utara iss idiot ke dimag se...😈
Krishna: haan nahi utra hai aur nahi utrega... hum next week phir se wahan jaa rahe hain 🤣
Veer : iss that you are telling me ..just to play prank😡
Krishna: kaisa akadoo hai... jee haan hum next week romania jaa rahen hai
Veer grabs her arm and makes her stand straight... and suddenly his anger turns into passion😈
tum kahin nahi jaogi KRISHNA SHUKLA 😡 kyun apni life risk me daal rah ho 😭
KRishna : 🤔 why do you even care
Veer : as f i care 🤔... tumhe jahan jaana hai jao... bhaad me jaana hai to jao... he shouts at her
Krishna is shivering and stunned... she cries and cries... and runs away... before she runs she asks if he hates indian community... why he cares for her ... he is british... and he should be proud of what he is and his life style 😡
this makes Veer really furious and he follows her after her work is done ... Krishna realises that Veer is not gonna leave her alone

Finally Veer Catches her and drags her to the side alley and pins her against the wall ... 😳
why do i care Miss architect 😡 he looks straight into her eyes and before she could say a word... He Kisses her ...passionately and it becomes a long kiss 😳.. krishna is dumbfolded and she pushes him away ... Both catches their breath ...
Veer : KRISHNA SHUKLA ... YOU ARE MINE ... ONLY MINE ... and you are so damn beautiful... no one has ever stood up infront of me like that 😈.. only you did that
and the kiss is a sign of our belongingness ... you belongs to me Krishna and infuture you will b making our dream house
Krishna : she's stunned... and this was not a dream or any nightmare😳😭

Dr Veer leaves her shocked and stunned . No one has ever kissed krishna like that and Veer winks at her and gives her a flying kiss ...
Krishna is staring at him 😲
Krishna returns back home and she's not eating properly 😕
Noor: Look if you will ot eaat properly then i will call Dr. Veer who has advised me ton take care of you
Krshna : ok ok i will eat
Waise krishna gave your number to him and krishna slaps noor..
noor... aapne humara number kyu diya us khadoos ko 🤔

itne me there's a text on krishna's number
* Sweetheart , i loved our first kiss at the alley, hope you are eating well* 😳 btw the apple pie was delicious just like your lips😳 and you are MINE
love Veer
krishna reads and throws away her phone and starts crying .. ye kyun ho raha hai humare saath ... humne kya kiya hai aisa...
later krishna Picks her phone and replies back
Aapko humari chinta karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai 😆
hum jaa rahein hai Romania ...COUNT DRACULA ke pass ...😆 make sure he will suck all of my blood 😆😆😆 ok bye
krishna 😈

and Veer Gets irritated 😆 at this 😡


To be continued *******************
Edited by Nihaaa - 6 years ago

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