REET SS AADHA ISHQ part 4 on page 9 9/4/2017 - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
#21
Awesome update
RV is super hot and angry young man
Ishu and RV bond was amazing
Why geetu was shocked to see RV
Cont soonnn
Pls pm me...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: ck1234

nice...[BR]Update nxt part soon...[BR]



thanks will update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

Nice start...good akdu boss [LOL] [BR]Continue soon [:)]



thanks
yeah akdu.boss
will continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: ariyabestfan

Awsome update..[BR][BR]Love it dear..[BR][BR]Geetu get shocked seeing rv..[BR][BR]Kya woh rv ko pehale se janti he?[BR][BR]Plz update soon[BR][BR]Thanks for pm



thanks dear
hmm geet shocked to see rv
wo jante hai ya nahi ye apko kuch time bad pata chalega
will continue soon
you're welcome for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: neelpari

amazing update[DIV]loved it[/DIV][DIV]what happened between reet[/DIV][DIV]why they hate each other[/DIV][DIV]that girl ishu is so cute[/DIV][DIV]update soon[/DIV]


thanks dear
u have to wait to know abt them
yeah ishu so cute
will continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: princessdivya

Awesome update[DIV]RV is super hot and angry young man[/DIV][DIV]Ishu and RV bond was amazing[/DIV][DIV]Why geetu was shocked to see RV[/DIV][DIV]Cont soonnn[/DIV][DIV]Pls pm me...[/DIV]



thanks dear
ur all questions will be answered soon
will continue soon
yeah I'll pm u
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Posted: 8 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: Soniya284

Gud show!!! Story line is very different and unique. The child artist is doing great job!!![DIV][:)][BR][/DIV][DIV][:x][BR][/DIV][DIV][LOL][BR][/DIV]



yeah very nice show
i am getting hitched to it.different storyline
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Posted: 8 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: ck1234

u[BR]p[BR]d[BR]a[BR]t[BR]e[BR]



will give it soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#29
part 2

geet come out of rv cabin numbly n sit on her chair like she saw some ghost,,kavya notice her n come toher..

kav- geet ...geet

but geet don't respond.,kavya shake her shoulder which make her conscious

kav - geet kya hua

ge - wo rajveer

ka - ohh tum rv ki bat kar rahi ho ..wo aisa hi hai khadus sa,,tumhe kuch jyada bol diya use

she asked concernedly

ge - amm..nahi kuch nahi ..tum sari details le aao we have to start our work

geet control herself n told kavya..

ka - u fine

ge - yeah kavs I'm fine,,or mai us rajveer se nahi darti..

she smile n kavya go to bring some files..

scene shift

evening
location :- geet's haweli

rishab come to geet who is watching stars in the sky

ri - aaj bhi tumhara chand ko yun dekhna band nahi hua..tum nahi badli..

ge - hmm bhai ...

ri - kya hua. koi baat ho gayi

ge - bhai humari hi company mai koi aakar hum par jor chala raha hai its not fair

she said angerily n rishabh sigh

ri - geetu.ab hum us company ke malik nahi balki bas share holders reh gaye hai..wo bhi sirf 20%.

ge - par bhai wo humari company hai

ri - hai nahi geetu thi..or ye bat tum jitni jaldi accept kar lo utna accha hai tumhare liye..ab us company ka malik rajveer hai..

ge - wo rajveer akdu khadus use baat karne ki tamij bhi nahi pata nahi kisi ne manners sikhaye ya nahi.

ri - calm down geetu..galti tumhari bhi hai tum first day hi late gayi

ge - whatever mai

her phone ring .which anger ris

ri - geetu tum q is abhi k chakkar mai padi ho..i don't like him

ge - but i love him bhai.mai apse thodi der mai bat karti hu,.

she left a helpless rishabh behind ..

scene shift

rv come back home n ishu is waiting for him

rv - so miss ishani malhotra how was your day.

is - accha tha..ishu ne aaj new dance step sikhe hai..dekhiye

she show him dance steps

rv - bahut pyari steps hai. my ishu is bestest..

he pick her up.

is - dadda aaj ishu apni dost ke yaha gayi thi .waha uski mumma or papa dono the,,ishu ki har dost k pas dono hai..bas ishu k pas hi nahi..

she said tearily..rv also has tears in his eyes but he control ..

rv - wo kya hai na dadda ki ishu bahut special hai..to uske pas special dadda hai jo mumma bhi bha or dadda bhi.,

is - sacchi mucchi

rv - hmm scchi mucchi..

she kiss his cheek n he hug her protectively..tears brimmed down from his eyes..


rv - life bahut complicated hai baccha..or tum iski complications samjhne ke liye bahut choti ho..i know sach jankar tumhara masum dil tut jayega..or mai sach ko kab tak tumse dur rakh paunga mai nahi janta par jab tak bhi rakh sakta hu mai jarur rakhunga.

he kiss her forehead n put her down

rv - ishu go n change first dekho kitne gande kar liye apne kapde..

is - ok dadda aap bhi change kar lo..

he nod n she run from there..
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next day

geet is driving her car n thinking about her life n abhi..she stop near a florist shop..

ge - bhaiya ji mujhe purple orchids chahiye.,

a lil girl of 6-7 years say also want same flower

shopkeeper - sorry madamji apne thodi si der kar di

ge - der hum sath hi to aye hai


sk - ishani bitiya humari regular customer hai.

geet look toward the girl .she is six year old girl .geet go toward her.

ge - hay lil girl..

gi - i am big girl not lil

geet smile

ge - okie big girl ..kya aap ye flowers mujhe de sakti ho ye mere favorite hai..

ish - to kya hua mere bhi favorite hai

ge - chote bacche bado ki bat mante hai na

ish - or bade log chote ko tang nahi karte.

ge - tum kitni battamij ho..

is - dadda kehte hai ishu world ki best baby hai ,wo battamij nahi hai..

ge - tumhare dadda ne tumhe bat karna nahi sikhaya..

is - sikhaya hai par apke dadda ne nahi sikhaya..

she turn toward shopkeeper

is - thanku uncle bye

she ignore geet n bid bye to shopkeeper n run holding flowers n sit in car..geet look toward her in shock..

she glare shopkeeper n sit in her car m left for office..


at evening

geet is throwing things in her room..rishabh come there

ris - geeti geetu stop ..kya ho raha hai .ye chijon par gussa q nikal rahi ho..aaj office mai bhi gusse mai thi.

ge - ek piddi se 6 sal ki ladki ne mujhe geetanjali se kaha ki mere babasa ne mujhe tamij nahi sikhayi..

ris - geetu calm down hua kya ye batao..

she tell him whole incident n rishabh start laughing n geet glare him

ge - bhaisa ..ap has q rahe hai..

ris while controlling his laugh - hasu nahi to or kya karu..tum ek choti bacchi se bhid gayi..par manna padega wo bilkul tumhari takkar ki hai. aisa laga badi geetanjali choti geetanjali se mil kar aa rahi hai..

geetu hear him n think something n smile

ge - haa bhai ..sahi kaha apne..pata nahi hume kya ho gaya tha..ye sab na us ceo k karan hua ,.hume gussa dila raha hai..us choti si bacchi se lad baithi mai..

rishabh smile..n she hug him

ri - to ab..

ge - shopkeeper ne kaha tha wo uski regular customer hai so kal wahi milegi..

ri - good ..that's like my geetu..

scene shift

rv 's house

ishu is strolling in big hall of house in anger n rv is looking at her

rv - dadda ki ishu dadda se gussa hai

is - no dadda ishu to un gandi wali aunty par gussa hai.unhone kaha ishu k dadda acche nahi..

rv - ohh.or aisa unhone q kaha..wo to ishu k dadda ko janti bhi nahi

ishu narrate him whole incident..

rv - its bad ishu..mana aunty ne galti ki..par kya dadda ne apko aise sikhaya hai..

ishu denied innocently ..

rv - ab be a good girl or agar kabhi wo mile to sorry bolana..promise

is - ishu's promise..

he take her in arms n make her sleep near him..

rv pov tum bilkul uski tarah ho..

he kiss ishu's forehead n sleep near her..

next day..

geet come to that shop again..as she come out she found ishu holding same flower infront of her..she is looking so cute..

is - ishu is sholly aunty

geet smile

ge - I'm sorry too..hum apse hi milne aye hai

is - apko kaise pata tha ki ishu apko yaha milegi

geet smile n touch her cheek

ge - bas pata tha.,

ishu give her flowers n geet give her a basket full of chocolate ..

ish - wow chocolates ..ishu ki favorite hai ye wali

ge - really .ye to mer bhi favorite hai..

is - wow ishu n aunty same same

ge - to aap humse dosti karengi

ishu falls thinking

is - ok ..

both.shake hand n exchange number..n bid bye to each other

tbc...

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