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Posted: 20 years ago
#31

gr8 story jasmine👏👏👏keep it up😃

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Posted: 20 years ago
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PART-9...Anjali goes 2 kkavya:kkavya,we'll go soon. kkavya:where? she:2 our house.b4 that i wud like 2 thank u 4 ur beutiful frienship. she turns back & starts walking. kkavya cud'nt bare:anjali,plz don't go. he cries.he kneels down:i beg u anjali,plz don't go..anjali's eyes rose up.she goes.kkavya cries as if he lost everything.yug & slok see it & scols anjali: saw his pain?he was begging u.but u did'nt mind at all.u r not ashamed of ur cruel activity? anjali did'nt speak anything.she remembers bindhya talking like this 2 sujal 4 her. when kkavya knows that they scolded anjali,he gets irritated:how dare u scold her?r'nt u all ashamed of what u 2 did? yug:u've gone crazy due 2 luv. slok:yes.he is crazy. kkavya :u ca call me a mad person.but don't talk ill of anjali.she did'nt do anything wrong.we can't luv any1.luv shud come from our heart.its not very easy.we can't giv luv 2 anyone if they ask.a person can giv luv only if they feel so.we can't compel any1 2 giv luv.otherwise we prove ourself 2 be foolish. anjali who was standing at the door was hearing everything hearing everything.instead of getting inside she goes.she remembers others' advise 2 marry kkavya. the day when they were planning 2 go back come. anjali goes 2 see kkavya to bid gud-bye.but he was not there. slok:he went out. anjali goes searching 4 kkavya.she gets tired.finally she sees kkavya standing at the border of a hill.she gets shocked:that means kkavya is going to suicide,bcoz of me?oh god! she runs to him& plls him back:kkavya,bcoz of me u were going 2 suicide? kkavya:what r u talking anjali?how cud u think that i'll do such a stupid thing?anjali,do u think i'll suicide leaving u alone?never,i'll be always with u.i can't leev u alone. anjali was surprised. she hold his arms & weeps...:u luv me that much? he:u can't even imagine my luv 4 u. she smiles: i luv u kkavya. kkavya was surprised.he cud'nt beleev it:really?r u telling the truth? anjali:how can i lie 2 u about luv?really i luv u kkavya.u proved that u can alo make me happy with luv. they hug each other. every1 was watching it from behind.they laugh.kkavya & anjali get embarassed. The Engagement party of kkavya-anjali & yug-pammi take place.anjali come in a glittering pink choli.kkavya was carried away by her beauty. seeing kkavya looking at her deeply,anjali becomes shy. they all dance 2 music in the grand party:mahive...{KHNH}
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Posted: 20 years ago
#33
awesome story ..... 😃 i was gr8....
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Posted: 20 years ago
#34
sweet_violet....now du u think that my fanfic is the exact copy of summer in bethlehem or leysa leysa?
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Posted: 20 years ago
#35
I wud like 2 no more comments about my fanfic,bcoz i'm stopping it here.plz mention ur fav scenes....sweet_violet...i'm waiting 4 ur reply.... 😉 plzzz
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Posted: 20 years ago
#36

hey it was a kewl story jasmine👏keep it up👏👏i lyked it a lot.😃

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Posted: 20 years ago
#37
sorry jasmine.. i just read the whole story ..its good 👏 👏 👏 no u didnt copy all.. and it was great.. thank god sujal was maddy..hehe 😆
but i have a que who is sholk from laysa laysa? was he the maid? 😆 😆
i luved it.. and i recommend u guys to watch laysa laysa
hehe
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Posted: 20 years ago
#38
Dear sweet_violet...Slok is not the maid of laysa laysa.its a new character created by me.so u felt difference. 😊 how du u feel sujal in maddy's role ?what did u make feel that its different from laysa....any element?waiting 4 ur reply.... 😭 😊
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Posted: 20 years ago
#39
oh ok.. i thought it was the maid..hehe 😆 😆
sujal in maddy's role is great?hot 😉
erm its different is certain parts.. like nitya and shlok and sujal
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Posted: 20 years ago
#40
awsum story!! jasmine!! as i said u r a natural!! 😃 brill 👏

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