Mere Adhoori mohabhat *26th oct* PAGE 32 - Page 9

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: eijazwife

well done noori. pls continue sooon, i will catch up later, busy with soham 😉

😆😆yeah continue soon......

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Posted: 18 years ago
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A NOTE: Sandeep Boswana Aka Shlok is Being replaced By Akbar Hussain he will be playing Akky I hope this doesn't confuse u guys in the near future have fun reading muah luvz ya.

Its Noori and Lakshaya wedding day and everybody is getting excited while Noori is thinking about Akky

Noori thinking: shayed Yehi mere kismet hai Mein aur Akky saath saath nahi

Leena: she looks so beautiful hai Na

Rida: of course

Aishu: can u go and get her jewellery set

Shezz: yeh sure

Sheen: here is the dupatta

Uzi: come on girls let's go we will just come Noori

Noori: teek hai

The girls leave and Noori walks to the balcony and sees the preparation made for the wedding just then someone covers Noori's eyes

Noori: tuts kaun

Then the guy takes his hand off Noori's eyes and Noori turns around sees its Akky

Noori: tum aur yaha

Then Akky disappears

Noori shakes her head then just as she was about to walk away when akky appears


And the song Mein yahaa Hoon from veer zaara begins

Akky walks up...

Jaanam, dekh lo, mit gayi dooriyaan

Main yahaan hoon,

*He wipes noori's tears and smiles*

yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan..

Akky dissappears...

Jaanam, dekh lo, mit gayi dooriyaan

Main yahaan hoon, *

Noori Looks into the mirror and closes her eyes Akky puts his hands round her waist

yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan

Jaanam, dekh lo, mit gayi dooriyaan

*Noori opens her Eyes and pushes Akky off Main yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon,

yahaan hoon, yahaan

Kaisi, sarhadein, kaisi majbooriyaan

Main yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan

*Akky Turns her around and kisses her neck*

Tum chhupa na sakogi main woh raaz hoon

Tum bhoola na sakogi woh andaaz hoon

Goonjta hoon jo dil mein toh hairaan ho kyun

*Akky picks noori up and puts her on the bed*

Main tumhaare hi dil ki toh awaaz hoon

Sun sako, toh suno, dhadkanon ki zabaan

*They look into each others eyes*

Main yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan

Kaisi, sarhadein, kaisi majbooriyaan

Main yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan

*Noori and Akky Kiss*

*Noori Gets up and walks over to the balcony....

She remembers Akky*

Main hi main ab tumhaare khayaalon mein hoon

Main jawaabon mein hoon, main sawaalon mein hoon

Main tumhaare har ek khwaab mein hoon basa

Main tumhaari nazar ke ujaalon mein hoon

Dekhti, ho mujhe, dekhti ho jahaan

*He pushes Noori to the wall...Noori walks away...*

Main yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan

*It starts to rain....Noori looks at Akky.....*

Jaanam, dekh lo, mit gayi dooriyaan

*Akky comes up from behind and pulls her forward and twirls her around..*

Main yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan

*Noori closes her eyes......*

Kaisi sarhadein, kaisi majbooriyaan

Main yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan

*Noori opens her eyes....Akky disappears.....*

Main yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan

Noori: I love you Akky I love you

Noori looks around and begins to cry just then prerna comes in

Prerna: Noori bharat is here chalo

Noori quickly wipes her tears

Prerna: Noori plz tum yeh shaadi karo ok

Noori: mama chalo plz mein karne wali hoo na

Meanwhile Akky and Mohini are on their way to the airport

Akky: so little sis are you happy you're getting me back permantaly

Mohini: bhaiya plz stop the wedding

Akky: I can't wait to see mamas and Papas face when they see me

Mohini thinking: how can I make bhaiya go to the wedding haila idea

Akky: kya howa?

Mohini: um bhaiya I forgot my bag at Noori's house

Akky: kya


Mohini: haan bhaiya I have very important things in there plz can we go and get it

Akky: Leekan waha tou Noori ki shaadi hai mohini hum nahin jayege

Mohini: please bhaiya

Akky: Acha teek hai


Akky and Mohini make their way to Noori's house and just as Noori was about to make her way downstairs Jayne and Soham stop her

Soham: aunty can we speak to Noori privately please

Prerna: teek hai beta

Soham: thanks aunty

Soham, Jayne and Noori go back to the bedroom

Noori: if you're trying to convince me not to go ahead with the wedding you're wasting your time

Jayne: Noori is this u really want spending the rest of your life with a guy you won't love the way you love Akky

Soham: and you will keep asking yourself over and over did I make the right decision what would happen if I married Akky instead

Noori: if I marry Akky then mama and papa and family will break relations with me and their reputation barbaath hoga and I don't want that to happen


Soham: wah Noori wah tum itna pyar karte hoo Akky si leekan

Noori: baas enough I have to go

Jayne: wow Noori your amazing at avoiding this someone should get tips from you

Then the girls enter

Sapna: arre Noori chalo tumhara dulha raja intazaar kara hai

Rida: haan he is getting impatient

Shailee: he is saying mere pyaari dulhan kaha hoo tum

Aishu: and he is saying juilet your romeo awaits

Noori: very funny

Leena: abh chale

Noori and the girls make their way downstairs then Akky enters with Mohini and looks up and sees Noori

Akky: wow she looks so pretty

Mohini: yeh shaadi rooko bhaiya

Then Noori stops halfway and has tears streaming down her eyes while lookin at Akky Lakshya sees this

Priest: plz bring the bride otherwise the fire will burn out

Prerna: Noori chalo

Noori continues to looking at Akky and crying

Priest: plz hurry

Lakshya then gets up and walks over to Noori and grabs Noori's hand and Akky makes his way out then Noori takes off Lakshya's hand off her wrist and her chooriyan break and then Noori runs after Akky

Noori: Akky rooko

Akky is confused and turns around and sees Noori running towards him and hugs him

Noori: I love you Akky I love you (she cries)

Akky smiles and wipes her tears

Akky: I love you too

Rishabh: Noori come here now and get married to Lakshya

Noori: nahi papa no way mein Akky si pyar karte hoon Lakshya si nahi

Rishabh: humare reputation kay bare mein socho

Prerna: haan Noori zaara socho

Noori: soch liya mein Akky si pyar karte hoon aur hamesha karoge

Soham and Jayne smile just then Anjali and Vayu enter

Anjali: whats going on

Ganga: I don't believe this humare izaat barbaath hogya chalo Sahil

Lakshya: rooko mama

Lakshya walks over to Noori and Akky

Lakshya: tum khush hoo nah abh

Lakshya grabs Akky and Noori's hands and put them together

Noori smiles


Lakshya: be happy

Noori: thank you

Prerna: teek hai tum jao leekan Noori yaad karna your parents are dead we have no daughter

Noori: leekan mama papa

Prerna and Rishabh leave

To be continued

One more part guys then I will concentrate on Anjali and Soham and Vayu and jayne love story

Luvs Ya

Luv Noori

Edited by Naughty Noori - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#83
FABULOUS part jaanu...continue soon...aww poor akky 😭....

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Posted: 18 years ago
#84

noori hun great job i just luvd it 👏 update soon hun i wanna read more

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Posted: 18 years ago
#85
brilliant idea of bringing in akky instead of shlok!!
nd the ff is awesome!!!continue soon!!plzzzz
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Posted: 18 years ago
#86

Part 14

Just one more part bout Noori and akky after dis den I promise u wid ma heart I will concentrate on jayne, soham, Anjali and Vayu

Noori runs after prerna and rishabh outside

Noori: mama, Papa rooko plz

Prerna turns around in anger

Prerna: we are not your mama or papa tumne faisla kar liya hai u chose ur pyar over us and now your parents are officially dead to you samjhe so don't bother running back to us

Noori: papa

Rishabh: get in the car prerna chalo yaha se

Noori sees them drive off and tears go roll down her cheek and drops to the floor and it begins to rain akky comes running out and sees Noori getting soaked in the rain

Akky: Noori

Noori looks up and akky sees the sadness in her eyes and grabs her up and tugs her along

Noori: akky tum yeh kya kaar reh hoo

Akky: mujhse shaadi karoge

The words echo in noori's ears jayne and soham smile at each other

Noori: kya

Akky: mujhse shaadi karoge

Noori: haan (she says tearfully)

Jayne runs up to Noori and grabs and sits her down in the mandir while soham does the same with akky and the guests gasp as they see this

Guest 1: kya baath hai Noori ko koi fiqaar nahin hai bas premi se shaadi karliye hai

Guest 2: I know its so disrespectful chalo yaha se

Jayne: is their a problem ladies
The ladies jump

Guest 1: no no problem

Guest 2: we just have to go we have meeting tommrow

Jayne: bye then

Priest starts the rituals

Priest: now put the mangal sutar on her

Anjali hands over the mangal sutar to Akky and Noori smiles and akky puts the mangal sutar on Noori and whispers I luv u in noori's ear and her eyes widen and a photo is taken

Priest: abh isko sindoor lehgao

Akky puts sindoor on Noori and smiles

Priest: abh saat (7) phere ka waqt hai

Anjali and jayne help Noori up and Akky gets and the priest begins to chant and Noori and akky begin the saat (7) phere and jayne and soham and Anjali and Vayu begin to throw rose petals on Noori and akky as they do the rounds

Soham: now it's the time to put the garlands on

Jayne: this should be fun

Jayne pinches soham's ass and acts innocent and soham clears his throat

Jayne: what did I do that ur looking at me like dat

Soham raises an eyebrow and mouths "I will get you later" and then winks

Then Akky puts the garland on Noori and whispers "I can't wait till the bedroom" and Noori gulps and almost coughs but keeps it in

Then Noori tries to put the garland on akky but he keeps walking back and Noori shakes her head and soham and Vayu lifts her up and she finally puts it on akky and whispers " neither can I" and akky gives devilish smile

Noori and akky think they have no one to take blessings from and feel sad

Man: arre tum doono ko kya howa mein hoon na tumhara bauji

Then we see the man is bauji and akky smiles

Akky: app aur yaha

Bauji: questions later pehle ashiwar karo

Akky and Noori take blessing from bauji

Bauji: long live bachao arre akky beta tumhare kuri bhaari soni hai yaar

Akky: haan bohot khoobsurat

Noori blushes

Bauji: arre dj Music bajao doono premi kay liye

Then Jeene kay ishaare comes on

Akky and Noori stare into eachothers eyes and Noori holds onto akky tightly and tears once again drop from her eyes ( uff I no emotional person here) and he slowly wipes them off

Noori: plz promise you will never leave me I love you so much kasam se

Akky: hey listen were together forever

Noori and akky slow dance and then after awhile soham and jayne join in and so does Vayu and Anjali then later everyone does

Soham: Damn your sizzling hot my babez

Jayne: I know jaan that's why they call me jayne the sizzler (don ask am hyper at the mo)

Soham: oh really

Jayne: haan koi shaq? Dr Sen

Soham: ummmmm well why don't you prove to me (he winks)

Jayne: ok after this ceremony we will go to the beach

Soham: oi hoi cool

Jayne: don't get to excited though sweetie

Soham: acha I won't

Soham thinking: yaaaaaaaaaaaaahooooooooooooo were goin to the beach hahahaha luckly I got a blanket in the car yeeeeeeeeeeeees

Jayne: kya howa

Soham: kuch nahin kyon

Jayne: why have you got that devilish smirk for??

Soham: have I oh I didn't realise sorry

Jayne playfully slaps him and soham pretends to be hurt

Jayne: sorry

Soham: kiss it better na

Jayne then kisses his cheek

Soham: it hurts here aswell (pointing to his lips)

Jayne: paagal ho kya everyone is looking

Soham: and so what your with me remember

Then soham grabs jayne closer and kisses her on the lips jayne struggles to get away but finally gives in ;-) meanwhile Vayu and anjali are eating

Vayu: mmmmmm Ladoo

Anjali: put that back

Vayu: kya leekan kyon

Anjali: do you want to get fat

Vayu: let me have one na

Vayu grabs one and Anjali hits his hand and Vayu drops it

Vayu: Anjali plz na just one my jaanu

Anjali: I said no na I don't want my husband to be getting fat

Vayu: wait kya kaha tumne

Anjali bites her tounge

Anjali: kuch nahin

Vayu: husband to be huh chalo chor diya no more ladoo's for me

Anjali: how sweet

Vayu: mere Jaaneman ding dong khel na mere saath

Anjali: haila chup badmaash

Vayu: kya kuch galat kaha kya maine sirf poocha ding dong khel na

Anjali: uff ur too obsessed with that song na

Vayu: kya kare I mean tushar is looking hot Na (in a girly voice)

Anjali: omg you're gay

Vayu kisses her to shut her up

Anjali: haila ur not gay then

Luvz ya

Luv Noori Hussain😳

Edited by Naughty Noori - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#87

ahem ahem dnt get too naughty noori n akky u too😉

good job noori haila anjali w/vayu not bad actually than kavya can b mine

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Posted: 18 years ago
#88
😆 loved this part!!anjali nd vayu hmmmm not tht bad!!!nd congratz noori ji!shaadi mubarakho 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#89
Kya Yehi Pyar Hai - part 15

Everybody has left and Noori and Akky are in the bedroom the bed is full of red, White and pink rose petals and noori is on the bed with her dupatta covering her face and Akky is sitting beside

Akky: Tum ajj bohot khobsurat laag reh thi

Noori giggles a little

Akky: sharam arre hai jaan arre mein tho tumhara pati hoon abh chalo remove da dupatta

Just as he was about to remove the dupatta He puts its bk down

Akky: mein bas bolna chaata hoon kay if you did marry lakshya then I would of killed myself kasam se jaan I love you so much

Then he finally lifts up the dupatta up

Akky: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

He sees its Soham

Soham Girly voice: kya howa mein khobsurat Nahin hoon kya

Noori and Jayne come out laughing from the bathroom and Jayne takes photo from her camera fone (Moto moment)

Jayne: this should be fun (she laughs)

Noori: haila I never knew you were interested in guys

Akky: ok that's it Jayne and Soham out I want to spend time with my wife

Noori gulps and bites her lip, Akky shuts the door and locks it and looks at noori with a cheeky smirk

Noori: Akky mein tou

Akky continues to come closer

Noori: Akky no plz

Then noori bangs against the wall and looks down and then Akky holds her chin then the wind blows and it begins to thunder and lightening begins and the lights go off and noori tightly hugs Akky
Akky: kya howa dhaar gaye

Noori: Nahin tho mein kaha dhaar gaye

Akky: acha

Then noori lights up the candles and Akky slowly removes noori's dupatta and then puts her leg on his knee and removes her payal then he lifts her up and they are both staring into each others eyes then he slowly puts her on the bed and begins to kiss her and noori blows the candles out

Meanwhile Soham and Jayne are abit sad as its raining and can't go to the beach

Jayne: STOP

Soham pulls the brake

Soham: kya howa u ok na

Jayne giggles

Jayne: lets dance in the rain

Then Jayne gets out of the car and Soham pulls down the window

Soham: Jayne come bk in hun plz I don't wana dance in the rain

Then he looks at Jayne everything turns to slow motion (lol)

Soham: wow simply stunning

Jayne: jannu come on na

Then soham gets out of the car and makes his way to Jayne she keeps twirling around and her hair is wet then her hair gets in the way of her face and she was just bout to remove it when soham grabs her hand and removes it himself and strokes Jayne's face her eyes close he kisses her neck but she bks away

Soham: kya howa

Jayne smiles and walks away

Then soham runs behind and grabs her wrist and pulls her toward him and strokes her hair and looking into each others eyes

Soham: I love you

Jayne: I love you too

Tujhe deekha tou yeh jaana sanam instrumental plays and they both dance in the rain


To be continued

Luvz ya

Luv Noori Hussain
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Posted: 18 years ago
#90
dat was amazin!!!!! 👏 plz contd soon.....im waiting!

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