Mere Adhoori mohabhat *26th oct* PAGE 32 - Page 17

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Posted: 17 years ago
Kya Yehi Pyar hai - Cont

Everybody reach shimla and kekta greets them

Kekta: glad you could make it guys (She smiles)

Soham: thanx for havin us

Kekta: its ok comon in

Everybody goes in but prem and noori looks bk

Noori: kya howa

Prem: huh o jaan kuch nahi jus need to make a fone call tum jao I wil jus come

Noori smiles: teek hai

Noori walks off and prem begins to dial a number and we see d convo one sided

Prem: haan am in shimla arre I sed I will c u na and aditya tou baath kya hai, uff ho don start ok I will c you soon BYE

Prem hangz up and makes his way in and noori smiles

Noori: that was quick

Prem: um ya uh sono

Noori: haan bolo

Prem: mujhe kahe jaana hai

Noori: kaha

Prem: kaam kay bhare mein ek site dekhna hai

Noori: leekan prem tumne tou

Prem: paata hai jaan and I will be back soon I promise

Noori: fine jus go

Prem: noori

Noori: I said jus go

Prem leaves and every1 else is in der respective roomz

Soham is in the shower and jay is talking to kekta on the balcony

Jay: don't worry hez in the shower

Kekta: ok listen tonight we need to dis so listen carefully

Kekta is tellin jay the plan and she smirks

Jay: perfect anjali wont even no wat hit her and she wil forget that she was ever mrs soham sen hahahahahaha

Kekta: exactly and soham's hatred for anjali increase so much that she wil give up trying to regain his memory

Jay: exactly and I have you to thank for bringing soham back in my life once again

Kekta: stop being formal

Just then soham hugs Jay from behind and she drops her phone

Jay: uh soham u scared me

Soham: sorry babe who were u talking to

Jay: um kekta shes organised dinner for later for us all

Soham: ah rite cool babe

Soham begins to rub his nose againest jays neck

Jay: eeeks soham stop it that tickles

Soham then lifts jay up and throws jay on the bed n smirks meanwhile scene changes to imz and anjali, Anjali is lying down in bed crying and has a flashbk

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=memN1vRacbo

Imz comez in and notices anjali in tearz he sits on the bed and wipes her tears she hugs in to anjali

Imz: mein tumhe nahi poochon gha tumhare ankhon mein ansoo kyun hai

Anjali thinking: plz forgive me imz but the plan will now begin to regain soham's memory

Imz holds on to anjali tighter and then holds her from cheeks and kisses her forehead

Imz: whatever's worrying you will be over I promise

Anjali: why do u love me so much

Imz smiles and looks down then back at anjali

Imz: kyunki tum mere jeevan saathi ho

Anjali looks elsewhere

Imz: kya howa galat kaha

Anjali forces on a smile: nahi tou

Imz: tou phir itna gham kyun hai chere pey hmmm

Anjali: am sorry

Imz: don say that jaan

Anjali cuddles in 2 Imz

Imz: I love you

Anjali closes her eyes: I love you 2

To be continued

Whats going to happen at the party????

Stay tuned to find out

Edited by akkyzwife - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Aww mere huni bunni that was amazin but where the scenes i txt u between immz and anjali😳. Even in ff u the same, JUS GO. u say that when we argue[:'(]
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey gr8 part! soham din hear anything na?? cnt wait for d next..its really xciting n awesum..!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
omg wawoooooooo noori amazing part👏 👏,waiting for the i don't know party or just dinner ..😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
mere babe, get up out ur bed and continue
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Posted: 17 years ago

Kya yehi pyar hai ' continued

Everybody is getting ready for dinner first we see Soham & Jay. Soham is busy putting his cufflinks on whilest jay is getting ready in bathroom

Soham: Jay hurry up na babe cant afford to be late dis evening

Jay: ok ok am just about finish chill

Soham: erm take ur time babe

Soham then goes to drawer n takes out a small box and puts inside his suit jacket

Jay: How do I look

Then we see Jay wearing this Blue sari

Soham turns round and jus looks at jay

Jay: soham hello any1 der

Soham just looks at jay and smiles then jay walks up to em and clicks her fingers

Soham: huh o sorry ur looking so sexyy in a sari esp in blue babe

Jay: uh huh really

Soham: yh really *he smirks*

Then soham hugs jay from behind

Soham: you should wear sari more often babe u look hot

Jay: soham lets go plz were gona be late

Soham: no plz lets jus stay like this

Jay: soham now let go and lets go

Soham lets go

Soham: fine lets go

Jay: finally

Scene changes to Imz & Anjali

Anjali is busy putting her chooriyan on and imz is looking at her thru in da mirror but pretends to be learnin his lines and is wearing this sari

Anjali: imz are you gona practice ur lines or not

Imz: well no how can I when I have such a beautiful stunning girlfriend infront of me

Anjali: nice line

Imz: arre that wasn't a line that from ma dil ma heart

Anjali tries not to laugh

Imz: ur ma Soulmate babe

Anjali: acha that's amazin

Imz: why arent u ever serious

Anjali: cuz I don love u

Imz: kya you don love me *in shock*

Anjali: nahi I love some1 else

Imz: hahahaha very funny abh chalo

Anjali smiles akwardly: hahahaha dhar gaye

Imz: me scared uh erm em never

Anjali: uh huh admit it u got scared

Imz: I cant imagine my life wid out u anjali *holdin her face*

Anjali: chalo we better go

Scene Changes to Noori outside the balcony waiting for prem and she is wearing this sari

Noori: why hasn't he come yet its been 3 hrs aur he hasn't even come

Just then prem wraps his hands round noori's waist

Prem: miss me

Noori walks away

Prem: arre kya howa

Noori: oh I wont be long jaan I promise u always do that ever since we gotten married ur always busy

Prem looks down n den at noori

Prem: noori am sorry

Noori: lets just go ok

Noori and prem walk out and go downstairs to n make their way to the restraunt/Dancin club

They all arrive at mainland china and sit down

Kekta: am so glad to have u all here enjoy ur food guys and then we got some entertainment lined up after

Jay: great cant wait

Noori: sounds exciting *She smiles*

Kekta: oh it is trust me *She smirks*

An hr later everybody is dancing then suddenly tere liye comes on from veer zaara n anjali becomes sad and looks over at soham n suddenly soham looks bk and frowns

Soham thinking: why does it feel I am connected to dis song and why did I just look at anjali as soon as it came on

Soham than has a flash of a scene of him and anjali dancin buh isnt clear for him to see its anjali

Anjali thinkin: kaash tumko yaad hota yeh humara ghana hai soham

Then anjali sees soham looking pale and rushes over

Anjali: soham kya howa u ok na

Soham: huh oh haan am fine am fine

Soham than looks at anjali and kekta n jay notice this and jay is boiling with anger

Anjali: kya howa

Soham: kuch nahi I told u na am fine

Then we notice the chandilar is about to fall and jay is under it unaware as she looks on at soham and anjali

Kekta: Jay chill yaar I wil get u a drink

Then we see the chandilar falling and lands on jay who is lying uncouncious bleeding soham and everyone rush to her side soham prem and imz remove the chandilar

Soham: jay jay open ur eyes babe comon open ur eyes babe

Then soham carries jay to the car to take her hospital and anjali is just in shock

Everybody get in the car and make their way to the hospital while soham tries to get jay to wake up

Soham: comon babe open ur eyes plz

10 minz later dey arrive at the hospital and everybody waiting for the doc to com out and anjali tries to reasure soham

Anjali: sab teek hoga soham don't worry

Soham: did u see how much she was bleeding

Anjali is about to put her hand on soham's shoulder just then the doctor comes out and she pulls bk

Soham: dr howz jay?

Dr: she is fine we ave stitched her up you may go and see her

Soham: thanx doc

Everybody breath a sigh of relief Soham goes in and jay smiles looking at soham at door way

Jay: whats wrong

Soham: I want to ask you something

Jay: what

Soham goes closer and sits on her and takes out the little box from his suit jacket and opens the box and we see a sparkling diamond ring

Soham: Mujhse shaadi karoge

Jay: what are you serious

Soham: yh am serious

Jay hugs Soham: yes soham offcourse I will marry you I love u *she smirks*

Anjali hears this and has tears in her eyes and jay notices this and smirks at her n begins to think

Jay: Now I have finally got you soham and anjali wouldn't dare now to touch u or go near u eva cuz now ur goin to be my husband just mine

Then soham lets go and smiles

Soham: ok babe now u rest I wil come and get u tommrow ok

Jay: ok I love u soham

Soham: I love u 2 and *then kisses her forehead*

Soham notices anjali in tears as he is walking out of the door and frowns and has another flash of himself and anjali in mandir of him puttin sindoor on her forehead buh stil cant see it properly and then shakes his head and realises anjali gone

To be continued

Stay tuned to kya yehi pyar hai

Luvz ya

Luv Noori

Edited by akkyzwife - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey its nice, please continue soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
luvly part!! awesum!!! bt does soham really luve jay?????????
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: ~*shaili*~

luvly part!! awesum!!! bt does soham really luve jay?????????

offcourse he does,
Great part babe, and am in shock, Soham only kissed Jay's forehead😆 what matter babe, u behavin😆
aww me and Anjali, we so cute but am blinded in love, Soham her true love as usual😭😭😭
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Posted: 16 years ago
PLEASE READ DIS B4 READIN FANFIC
WE have a guest writter for dis part ma di has written dis part as u all know her
and from now on dis fanfic is called mere adhoori mohabhat - my distant love

IN THE HOSPITAL,

Jay is lyin awake and lookin at her ring, she gives an evil laugh, she is thinking off how well the chandlier plan had worked, Then her phone goes off, the conversation was

Jay: yh he away, am alone, come now

Meanwhile at the apartment Soham is lost in his thoughts,

Soham I love Jay, I know I do, why is this other woman comin in my mind though suddenly the lights go out, it is thunderin and lightinin, Soham see's the image off a woman standin at the door,

Soham: kaun hai waha then the lights come on, Anjali is standin cryin.

Soham: Anjali kya howa

Anjali runs and hugs Soham

Anjali: Soham I really need to talk to u, I don think Jay really loves u,

soham is in shock,

Soham: Anjali, pls don say that, u know how much I love her and she loves me also, we goin to get married

Anjali: nahi soham, yeh shaadi nahi ho sakta.

Soham grabs Anjali

Soham: Bas Anjali, bas, am marryin Jay, she is my life, my love, I cant live without her and she cant live without me

Anjali screams: SHE IS A CON, she is up to something and she has an accomplish, when u left hospital I forgot my keys and when I went bk I heard her on phone, she said am alone u can come now

Soham jus stares at Anjali

Meanwhile bk at the hospital Kekta and Jay are givin each other a hi5,

kekta - Jay u were so lucky, when I saw it fall, I feared worst,

Jay - I wasn't scared and at least one half off our mission is done, finally Soham is engaged to me, he will marry me within days .

Kekta - I like ur confidence,

Jay winks at her,

Jay: tell me when is Rohan arriving,

Kekta - hmm tomorrow, am a bit scared.

Jay: don be scared, I jus cant wait to see what happens and starts laughin evily, kekta joins in.

Meanwhile Prem is busy doin paperwork and Noori is tryin to distract him,

Prem - Nonny common yaar I have do to this paper,

Noori - u never have anytime for me anymore,

Prem - that isn't true, I love u so much, am workin hard for our future.

Noori gets up and sits on his knee

Noori - well jaanu I was thinking, how bout we try for a child,

Prem spits his coffee out,

prem - kya kya,

Noori - kya howa and she kisses his forehead,

Prem - em kuch nahi, hahaha, kuch nahi, jus a bit quick don u think,

Noori- I don think so, am so broody at the moment and think a kid would makes us complete, she kisses him again,

Prem picks Noori up and says, well we can think bout it, in the meantime and gives her a smirk,

Noori- ooo Prem, tauba tauba.

Immy in the meantime is tryin to call Anjali on her mobile,

Immy - where is she, it rainin bad and am worried,

then he starts to think off what

Anjali had said to him, Nahi I love someone else,

immy starts to cry,

Immy: I told her I wasn't scared but I am, what if she does love someone else, I better go lookin for her

Immy goes out in the car and suddenly he sees a figure walkin in the rain, he stops the car, it is Anjali,

Immy - Anjali, where were u, I was worried,

Anjali - oohhh nowhere

then she hugs him tight,, am scared for sohams life Immy,

Immy looks on in shock

Immy: kyun kya howa,

anjali - I overheard Jay on the phone at the hospital, am sure she up to no gd, Immy - Anjali, Jay and Soham love each other, she cant harm him, jus like he cant harm her,

Anjali - why is no one believing me,

she pushes Immy away and runs off, Immy follows her but stops in shock,

Immy: AAAAANNNNNNJJJJJJAAAAAALLLLLLIIIIIIIIII,

he runs and picks Anjali up off the ground,

suddenly Kekta gets out the car, she smirks and thinks

Kekta: hahaha well I never, for 1st time that was a pure accident.

At the hospital again,

Immy is bitin his nails nervously, dr comes out

Doc: the operation a success but she will be in a coma, we cant say how many hrs or days,

Immy falls to the ground. Soham arrives and is anxious to know what happened, he explained to Immy that him and Anjali had an argument over Jay, meanwhile Kekta goes to Jay and tells her what has happened

Jay - 1 down, 1 to go and laughs evilly

Stay tuned to mere adhoori mohabhat - My distant love

Dis part created By Jay

Edited by akkyzwife - 16 years ago

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