Pyaar Ishq aur Nafraat Part 30UPDATED!!!! - Page 19

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Posted: 19 years ago
wicked hun

luv ya thanks for adding me 😛

Luv YA

lUV NOORI
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Posted: 19 years ago
wow shezz i have noticed that ur style has changed alot.
i like the name of the restar. blue ice n green hotel. 😛
i first thought shez n shlok, then came dish, then noori. but shlok likes disha only rite.
um.. r u n noori sis in the story or friends.
oops i think i wud be really confused with the stories from now onwards, becoz there is noori 😕 in 3 fan-fics which im reading.
after so long u have written this one. i kinda forgot what happened b4.
i like the new track. of manyank. 😳
great work, well done. 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
awesomee!! 😛 😛 plz continue

~sabz~
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Posted: 19 years ago
aww wow i got a few replies this time thanx guys u made me smile
Noori plays my friend
well remember about john and neha etc..... this is the fanfic with john abraham and etc.......u rememba lol
luv yaz
xxx
will post da next part soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago

Here ya go guys i hpe u enjoy it!! noori di i hpe ur happi now lol luv yaz

xxxx reply quik

kavya - teek hain
shlok - thanx bhaiya
noori - thanx mr nanda
kavya - its ok come in
noori walked in
noori - wow nice place
anjali - thanx
deda - namaste..anjali ye koun?
anjali - yeh mere saheli
deda - oh namaste kaise ho bhetta
noori - maine teek hoon
abhi and bhuman ran in
abhi - mama yeh koun
noori - omg!! r theses urs anjali?
anjali smiled
noori - awwww
noori hugged both of them
abhi - namste aunti
bhumamn - namste
noori - hey sweethearts
anjali - chalo noori let me show you your room
noori - kya liken
anjali - liken kuch nahi yuo gotta stay with us
noori - not for long
anjali - teek hain
anjali shows noori her room
anjali - ok aab maine jahte hoon jaldi se freshen up ho jou
noori - ok
anjali leaves
noori freshens up
NEXT DAY
noori hangin round shlok and shez
shlok - so noori tum kahaan thi...its been yrs....
noori - oh i had to leave college and go to america to study muma nd dads buisness u know.....
shlok - yeh
shez - so di have ya find yourself a partner yet?
shlok - hmmm have you?
noori - ummm no not yet
shez and shlok smiled
nihaal came up
nihaal - hey sxy!
noori - huh?
nihaal - wanna come disco with me tonite?
noori - shez is he speakin to me?
shlok - i guess so
noori - um hun i aint intrested
nihaal - fine *nihaal walked off*
shez - ur soo harsh nihaal aint dat bad!
shlok - yeh*lafin*
noori - yeh it aint funni you know
shez - di aap naraaz hogaiye?
shlok - come on noori cheer up we were only havin a laugh
noori - fine
shlok - sis i was thinkin if i cud of a word with ya later
shez - ye sure
noori - ok shez im going to my room
johns mansion
doorbell rang
john - aarai Malcom tum yahaan wht a pleasant surprise!!
malcom - hey john
john hugged malcom
malcom - where neha?
john - shes in her room shes a bit upset its her real mums death anniversary
malcom - oh ok?
malcom went to nehas room
malcom = neha?
neha opened he door
neha - malcom bhaiya!!! aap!!
malcom hugged neha
malcom - kaise hain mere bhen?
neha - maine teek hoon
neha wiped her tears
malcom - dont lie to me!
neha quikly moved her mums photos
malcom - johns told me everything
neha - umm
malcom - its ok.......
kajol and sneha come in
neha - whts up?
kajol - mom dads calling you?
neha went to john
john - neha my brother called hes comin america tomorrow
neha - wow really
john - oh thank god hes coming we didnt used to get along as much ab tho sub teek hojaiga
neha - haan
*NANDA HOUSE*
noori in her room
noori got her and shloks college phtos out
noori - i love you shlok!!
noori - i love you!!!
noori got a t-shirt out
she got flshbaks
*FLASHBAK*
noori and shlok in the car
noori - omg its starting to rain
shlok - wow i love rain
noori - kya!!
car stops
noori - kya hua
shlok - um let me go and chek
shlok goes out to chek da car
after 5 mins
noori comes out with a umbrealla
noori - shlok kya hua?
shlok - um i dont know we will ahve to call a mechanic
noori - uff im goin bak in da car
shlok - noori come on, lets dance
noori - shlok!!! its rainin!!
shlok pulls noori forward
shlok - tho kya?
noori blushes
shlok - cant friends dance?
noori - ya sure they can
shlok took the umbrealla and let it go
noori and shlok danced
noori - shlok GOD lok at you atleast i ahd a coat on tum tho bheegiyeh
shlok - oh
noori - come on lets get a taxi we will get da car fixed tomorrow
shlok - um noori
noori - kya?
shlok - the cars fixed!
noroi - kya!!
shlok - um
noori hit shlok
noori 0 uff tum be na
noori and shlok go to nooris flat
noori gives shlok a shirt
noori - here i will give ya shirt back tomorrow where dis for now
shlok - thanx
noori came back to her senses
noori - im in love""
noori held shloks shirt tightly and danced aorund the room
shez in her room
shlok - sis can i have a word
shez - yeh come in
shlok - um i dont know what to do?
shez - kya matlaab
shlok - maine disha sai pyaar karta hoon
shez - liken disha tho shaadi shooda hain
shlok - mujhe paath hain liken i dont know wht to do
shez - well find out if disha loves you first
shlok - liken kaise
shez - i will speak to her
shlok - ok thanx
Next day!


doorbell rings
anjali - shweta! tum!
shweta - ya hi
anjali - come in
shweta - iwanted to talk to kavya about business is he in?
anjali - ye ocme in
anjali - kavya" shwetas here!
kavya came down
kavya - hi shweta..kya hua...
shweta - well ... everythings fine but i have found out that John Abraham has opened a business and now we are competing agaisnt it
shweta - ye and is brother is also helping him and his brother is seriuosly the best!
kavya - kya!!! john!!?

Edited by Shezzy12 - 19 years ago
CrazyNoori thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
wicked hun nice one luved post next part soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz 😃

Luv Ya

Luv Noori
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Posted: 19 years ago

shezzy 12 keep it up

Edited by aadorboseroy - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
wow shez great job!!
im all caught up now!!
keep it up!!
👏 👏 👏
Shezzy12 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
pyaar ishq aur nafraat! updated :)

shez - disha!
disha - haan kya hua?
shez - um maine woh.....woh shlok........aur....jai
disha - shez baathou na please
shez - um kuch nahi tum teek to ho na
disha - haan im fine thanx
shez - acha abh maine jahti hoon
shez thinkin to herslef*shit kya karoon shlok to disha ko pasand kartha hain*
shez walked off
kavya - oh thanx shweta for informing me
shweta - its ok kavya abh maine jahte hoon
kavya - ya ok bye
shweta - bye
anjali - kavya kya hua? chai piyugai?
kavya - nahi abhi nahi
anjali - kya hua tum paarishan lagre hoo?
kavya - um kuch nahi
anjali - bathou na?
kavya - *tells her everything*
anjali - kya oh come on kavya woh tho film shootin kartha hain tho ye business ?
kavya - haan liken abhi abhi shweta nai mujhe baathaiya tha kai john has opened a new business
anjali - fiqaar maat karo kuch nahi hoga
anjali hugged kavya
anjali - i miss spendin time with you kavya
kavya - kya matlaab
anjali - matlaab kai ...im always sorting out bhuman aur abhi aur tum kaam maine bizy hume kabhi time nahi milta
kavya - ok tho on sunday get ready about 6 and we will go for dinner to a nice restaurant ok haapy now
anjali - yeh
kavya kissed anjali
Next Day!
Johns mansion
doorbell rung!
john - neha please get it for me
neha opened the door
neha - hello tum kyun?
sharya - bhabi!!
neha - shaurya!
john came runnin
shaurya - bro!!!!
john - hey!
sneha and kajol came runnin
sneha and kajol - uncle!!!
shaurya piked da girls up and swirled them around
shaurya - hey girlies
john - come in
shaurya came in
john - koomal*servant*
koomal - yes sir
john - show shaurya his room
koomal - yes sir
john - go with koomal he will show u our house
shaurya - teek hain bro
*nanda house*
shloks room
shlok looking at disha and his college photos
shlok - disha i love you! liken maine kya karoon?
noori came into the room
noori - hey shlok
*shlok hid the photos*
noori - kya hua wht were they shlok come on show ur friend!
shlok - umm no its private
noori teased shlok and tried to pull the photo
photo riped
*disha face riped*
noori - oh im soo sorri
noori looked at the photo * it was shlok onli holdin a trophy*
noori - oh cool college years right
shlok - ya
noori - so did ya win da sports day race few days after i left college
shlok -ye
noori - wow!
shlok *smiled*
noori - shlok i was thinking why dont us two friends go for dinner tonite
shlok - umm im not sure yaar
noori - please!!!
shlok - uff teek hain
noori - ok get ready at 7
shlok - ok
*at 7*
noori in her room
noori - today i will tell shlok how much i love him!
noori wearing a nice red saree
noori went to shlok room
shlok wearing a black suit!
noori - shlok jaaldi karo na tum be na
shlok -coming
shlok came out and saw noori!
shlok - wow! noori u look stunning! i expected u too wear ur mini skirts and stuff not a saree
noori - thanx umm i felt like wearin a saree
shlok - so how do i look?
noori - fab! abhi hum chale!
whats gonna happen at the restaurant?
is noori gonna tell shlok dat she loves him?

keep readin wil update soon luv ya xxxxx
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Posted: 19 years ago
wow cool part hun really wicked

Hope u post next part soon

Luvs YA

Luv Noori

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