FF:KMH 2..updated..1st sept...pg 22 - Page 16

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Posted: 15 years ago

shibz: no tragedy pakka..its a good news pakka..and abt first person pov its just future track will create more suspense if its him i could have chosen aarohi also but then no suspense will be left..hehe..

and reminding..i did remember i was not able to get the story straight did it last night..it took a moment only..so here u go..next update on sat pakaa a looooooooooooooooooong one..u will love it..
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Posted: 15 years ago
awe...thanx shreya...waitin for the nxt update..😃😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey shreya Happy Friendship day🤗 and yay! u updated...was waiting 4 ur FF cuz parm had already updated so i knew u were the next one😛
it was a nyc part..a bit sad and i am okay wid idea of arjun narrating...it's gud😃
hope arohi gets better now😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
shreya..its Mon!!😲 i was xpecting an update on Sat..😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
shibz sorry tom night pakka..sorry got busy..but just finishing will post tom..and it will be pakka a loooooooooooooooooooooong one..
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Posted: 14 years ago

Aarohi did not wake up that day..she was still under the effects of medication..

That evening the doctor called me into his room and told me something, something that I still remembered clearly distinctly..

It was around 6 in the evening. I was still sitting beside aarohi when a nurse called me and told me that the doctor needed to see me..

I nodded my head and followed her out of the room.

The doctor, Mr.Sahai was at the table and he looked grave. My heart skipped a beat.

Aarohi ko kuch nahi ho sakta hai..aaj humari shaadi ko ek maheena hua hai..aur humein ton saath janmon tak saath rahne ka waada kiya hai na..

I walked into the room and the doctor offered me a seat.

I knew I could not stand for a minute longer and I took the seat immediately.

I had so many questions to ask but I checked myself and waited..waited for the doctor to speak waited for him to tell me..Tell me what..

That arrohi is fine my heart answered but my brain had different theories, theories I don't even want to voice out.

Doctor(D) broke my reverie

D:Mr. Punj..Mrs Punj..

AP: Who theek toh hai na..

The D smiled..

I couldn't believe.he smiled that means she was alright..

That meant ki aarohi …I didn't know how to respond. My smile broke into a smile

The doctor patted my back. I didn't realise when he had stood up and came right behind me.

D; Mr punj aapke liye ek buri khabar aur ek acchi kahabar hai..

My head was spinning now..

Ek buri..ek acchi..

Acchi aarohi theek hai..

Buri..agar use kuch ho gaya…

D: aarohi theek hai..

I was on cloud nine..Woh theek hai..issse acchi koi khabar ho nahi sakti aur who theek hai toh job hi bura hoga main dekh loonga..

I did not say anything..

D: aapki shaadi ko kitna waqt ho gaya hai..

AP: kya.. I was not prepared for this..

D:Maine poocha aapki shaadi ko kitna waqt ho gaya hai..

AP: Jii ek maheena..

The D nodded his head slowly and came and sat down back at his place..

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Posted: 14 years ago
aaahh shreya😆....wanna kno wats the bad news....u better update soon😈...bt hope it's nt that bad...poor punjii😭😭...he was so happy that arohi is okay...😳😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nothing that bad..rraed the previous parts u will know whts the bad news..sacchi..
will upadte on 7th and that time it will very long will tell the whole flashabak and a bit of whts happening and future too..so just wait..
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Posted: 14 years ago
dis was not a long update😭😭
u said a long one it'l b..😳
thanx dea😳..nyc part..update soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
D: kya aap responsibility ke liye tayaar hai...
AP: ji..
D: maine pucha ki aap kitne responsible hai..
AP: main aarohi ka khyaal har halaat mein rakhoonga..chahe mujhe kuch bhi kyun na karna pade..
The doctor closed his eyes and put his hand on his forehead..
It was making me tensed now..
he smiled, he asked me some wierd qs and now he has his hand on his foreheead..
I couldnt connect the dots..I was missing something..BUT what..
I tried to think of everything but it looked like my brain had frozen it didnt give me any answer..
ARJJUN..i heard aarohi calling me..
i came out of the past and ran up to her in her room..'
she was still on the bed where i left her but staring at the floor..
I followed her gaze and saw a cockroach there..
But aarohi wasnt scared of cockroaches
( that library scene flashed in front of him)..
aarohi was smiling..she wanted something i could make that out..but what..
She didnt want to eat it..
Sanna told me she will be wanting wierd things but to eat this..
Was she out of her mind..
This was unhygeinc..
Her defintion of hygeine though never matched mine..
She still loved to go to the stalls in fairs and eat golgappes from there..
BUT now it was not possible..
IN LONDON..
i knew if she came to know that there existed a place like that here she will make me take her threre..
she knew me well.. She knew i would never say no to her..
I lookeed at her she had a smile plasterd across her face..
Aarohi kya hua..
Aarohi: mujhe woh chahiye..
she said poiniting to the cockroach..
What my worst imagination was coming to reality she wanted the cockroach..
what do i do now..
I cant touch it..
OK no i can now..
I walk forward and the cockroach runs in opp direction..
Aaarohi; nahi arjun yeh kya kar rahe ho..
arjun: Tumne toh kaha tumhe chahiye toh use pakad raha hoon..
aarohi makes a face..
I dont get it..
I was doing what she wanted me to and she still made a face..
I was facing the biggest danger of my life and she made a face..
Was she really out of her mind now..
Sanna should have warned me..
I was not ready for this..
Aarohi kya hua..abhi toh..
MUjhe pakadna tha..Aarohi squealed..
What she wanted to run behind the cockroach and catch it..
She ..at this time..
She couldnt do it..she didnt have the strength..
i looked at her dumbstruck..
BUt she smiled and i smiled at her
Will she ever stop surprising me..
Its been two yaers since i had met her at that station but still she was a bag of surprise for me..

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