Ria Ka Adda: Pyar laut araha hai!!!

BeMyHero4ever

@BeMyHero4ever

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Posted: 16 years ago

#81

@k: awww realli, thats disappointing specially since the trailer looked so promising ..forget that , i want to see New York :) lol..you seen that?

and i think only cute nerds are romantic like Mickey😍😆..he was sadoo too yet he knows all about love ,and punji didnt know that much at begining 😆 .

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sheetal6

@sheetal6

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Posted: 16 years ago

#82

@Anu: Analysis was great as usual.

@Karishma: very gud thot on Monday's epi.

Yesterday's epi had many sides to it:

1)Purvi-Arohi conversation….I didn't understand, what was Purvi doing in KS' office?????????

2)Abhay-Sur meeting………Aakhir Bandar ko apni bandariya mil hi gayi……

3)KS' real inentions that he wanted to make Arjun jealous.

4)Arjun stopping Arohi from accepting the marriage proposal.

5)Arohi rejecting KS' proposal.

6)Arjun coming to meet Arohi.

The only part which I liked the most was 4^th & 6^th. Remaining parts were ok for me. I guess KS ki ab nazar Arohi pe hai. I hated Arohi & KS throughout. But liked HT for his acting & especially the line which he said in RKS-nazar hati, durghatna ghati………HT shouldn't follow the same here toooo. I hope he doesn't……….

According to me, this is what should happen on Monday:

Arohi with her Umbrella sees Arjun outside the Restaurant waiting for her. She walks past him but he stops her by catching her hand.

Arohi: Mera haath chodo.

Arjun catches her hand more tightly.

Arohi: Maine kaha, mera haath chodo. You are hurting me.

Arjun takes the umbrella.

Arohi: In anger & is confused. Yeh tum kya kar rahe ho????????

Arjun closes the Umbrella & keeps it in her bag. He then takes her to a distant place where there is nobody. Arohi tries to take her hand out from Arjun's but he has held her sooo tightly as if by holding her hand, he was taking her from the wrong path(of agreeing to marry KS) which she was about to take to the path of her life which she left a long time ago by leaving Arjun. Initially, Arohi tried to free herself but later she herself did not want Arjun to leave her hand. That feel was as if he won't let her go anywhere in life & would show her the right path inspite of not being with her.

Arjun: Tum jaanti ho, main tumhe yahaan kyun layaa hoon????????

Arohi: Nahi, aur main jaanna bhi nahi chahti & she tries to goes away.

Arjun catches her hand, turns her around towards him. He holds her with both his hands around her arms. Arjun pe apne pyaar ke junoon sawaar tha………..

Arjun: Tumhe jaanna hoga……….Tumhe jaanna hoga ke kyun main har jagah tumhara peecha kar raha hoon……..Tumhe jaanna hoga ke kyun tumse naata todkar bhi, tumhe khud aapne zindagi se nikaalne ke baad bhi main tumhara peecha kar raha hoon……..Tumhe jaanna hoga ke kyun main tumhare peech-peeche Shimla se Mumbai aaya…………..Tumhe jaanne hoga ke kyun main har us jagah pe aaya jahaan tum hoti ho……………Tumhe jaanna hoga ke kyun maine Karan Singh ke saath Partnership ki……….Tumhe jaanna hoga ke kyun maine tumhe Karan Singh ke saath Shaadi se inkaar karne ke liye kaha…………..Kyunki(his voice lowers down) main………main……………Main tumse be-inteehan mohabbat karta hoon Arohi…………….I………I……………I love you Arohi……………

Arohi: All shocked…………..She goes in a different world

altogether which Arjun created………

Arjun: Haan Arohi………I love you……..

Arohi: Comes to the reality & says, Achcha, to tum mujhse pyaar karte hoon………Aur kitni baar yeh kahoge Mr. Arjun Punj………Aur kitni baar dhoke doge tum mujhe............Tum kehte ho ke tum mujhse pyaar karte ho, mujhse pyaar karne ka daava karto ho naa………lekin aaj tak………….aaj tak tumne mujhe dukh, takleef, dard ke siva aur kuch nahi diya hai……..tumne hamesha mujhe dukhi dekhna hi chaha……..mere chehre pe dard ho, maayusiii ho, iske liye tumne har mumkin koshish ki……..

Arjun: Main maanta hoon ke maine tumhe zindagi mein bahut dard diya hai, tumhe meri wajah se bahut takleef pahunchi hai……........Lekin Arohi, please mera yakeen karo…………main tumse bahut pyaar karta hoon………….Tum par, tumhari baaton par vishwaas naa karna, tum par bharosa naa karna, tumhare pyaar ko jhoot samajhna meri zindagi ki sabse badi galti thi………….ek aisi galti jiska praayashchit main chahkar bhi nahi kar sakta, tumhare pyaar ko dhoka samajhna meri zindagi ki sabse badi galti nahi gunaah tha…….Mera vishwaas karo Arohi, jaise hi mujhe sachchai ka pata chala main fouran tumhare paas chala aaya par shayad tab tak bahut der ho chuki thi………..Us din tum meri wajah se zindagi aur maut ke beech jhool rahi thi………Us din maine apne aap se vaada kiya tha ke chahe ab jo bhi ho, main tumhare saath naa rehkar bhi tumhare saath rahunga…………Arohi, tum wo ho jisne mujhe badal diya…………Nakchade aur Moody Arjun ko pyaar karna sikhaya……Tumne mujhe meri zindagi ke sabse bade sach se waakiif karaya hai aur wo sach hai meri mom ka…………..Tumne mujhe zindagi jeena sikhaya hai………Tumhare meri zindagi mein aane se pehle, main sirf zinda tha par tumne mujhe zindagi ke asli maayne sikhaye hai……….Jo insaan pyaar par yakeen nahi karta tha aaj uski zindagi mein uske pyaar ke siva aur kuch bhi nahi hai………

Arohi: All shocked once again………….she gets the shock of her life………

Arjun: Haan, Arohi…………jab mujhe sachchai ka pata chala…………….tab hi maine apna ghar, business, dad ko chod diya…………

Arohi: All in tears. Doesn't know what to say………She has lost all her senses……Tumne………..Tumne…………Tumne mere liye apna ghar, business………….Tumne mere liye apni duniya kyun chod di???????????

Arjun: Kyunki tum hi meri duniya ho………Arohi, tum paas hoti ho to aisa lagta hai jaise maine apni poori duniya jeet li. Arohi………….Tumne ek din mujhse kaha tha ke tumhe chot pahuchane ka haq sirf mujhe hai. Lekin, jo kuch bhi maine kiya, wo anjaane mein kiya……………Tumhe chot pahuchakar maine khud us chot ka dard tumse zyada mehsoos kiya hai…………….Tumhe aansoon dekar……………..tumhari aankhon mein aansoon dekhkar…………..main har us aansoon ke saath maraa hoon………….Pal-Pal har pal main maine maut ko mehsoos kiya hai…………Arohi…………..

Arohi stops him by keeping her hand on his mouth, the same way Arjun did when they met on the cliff.

Arohi: Shhhhhhh…………..Aur kuch mat kaho…………

They look into each others' eyes for some time……………..

Arohi: I………..I…………I am Sorry……………………

Arjun: Shhhhhhhhhh………………Nahi……………..Maafi to mujhe maangni chahiye…………...

Arohi: Nahi……………Arjun…………….I………………I love you………………..

They both hug each other……..Both of them had tears in their eyes but both of them let each other weep in the rain because the droplets of the rain did not show their happiness of getting each other back………………

This is my first experience, so I hope everyone likes it. Please give your opinions be it good or bad.......I would love to hear even criticisms which would help me to correct.

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arshiyaa

@arshiyaa

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Posted: 16 years ago

#83

hey adda buddies, d last scene gave us hope again😳 but i m keeping my fingers crossed,(plz don't spoil this scence CREATIVES😡). i love that ff on coming monday episode written by our sweet adda buddies😳. romance is all i want for arjuhi. may god (ekta) give us that.😍 keep it rolling adda buddies, isi k sahare ye weekend kaat lenge.😳 😊

@anu di - u were as awesome as always.👏 and abhay's name was clearly visible on d screen, we all noticed it (exept sur and her sister antra😆) @ sanjukta- u r dooboing in d hope of their romance, just like me.😳 @ an1234 - u r a lovely devil 😊 @sweetassugar- where are ur great photoshop? missing them 😳 @sercretkeepar- phoolon ki barish on u. it is d rainy season here and in kmh too 😳 .how can u stay away? 🤗 to all adda buddies. c ya.😊 me 😳 a lot in this pyara season.

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adda-keepers

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Posted: 16 years ago

#84

@Anu: *nudge* meinay abhi tuk kal ka adda nahi parhaa 😳 K corner is almost done 😉

Hamesha ki tarha zabardust post 🤣 *phoolo ki baarish* :)

"KS replies "Aaj kisine mujhe akela kaha....khana bhi akela kaounga"

Qoute: "There are strings in the human heart which better not be vibrated"

thats it from me :)

@All: *nudge nudge* 😆 *phoolo ki baarish* :)

*flies*

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adda-keepers

@adda-keepers

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Posted: 16 years ago

#85

*takes u turn* 😳

@Arshiyaa: 🤗

*Mehr airlines takes off* ;)

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tibs09

@tibs09

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Posted: 16 years ago

#86

@ Sheetal brilliant girl...very well written....

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arshiyaa

@arshiyaa

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Posted: 16 years ago

#87

Arjun catches her hand, turns her around towards him. He holds her with both his hands around her arms. Arjun pe apne pyaar ke junoon sawaar tha………..

Arjun: Tumhe jaanna hoga……….Tumhe jaanna hoga ke kyun main har jagah tumhara peecha kar raha hoon……..Tumhe jaanna hoga ke kyun tumse naata todkar bhi, tumhe khud aapne zindagi se nikaalne ke baad bhi main tumhara peecha kar raha hoon……..Tumhe jaanna hoga ke kyun main tumhare peech-peeche Shimla se Mumbai aaya…………..Tumhe jaanne hoga ke kyun main har us jagah pe aaya jahaan tum hoti ho……………Tumhe jaanna hoga ke kyun maine Karan Singh ke saath Partnership ki……….Tumhe jaanna hoga ke kyun maine tumhe Karan Singh ke saath Shaadi se inkaar karne ke liye kaha…………..Kyunki(his voice lowers down) main………main……………Main tumse be-inteehan mohabbat karta hoon Arohi…………….I………I……………I love you Arohi…………… 🥳

Arjun: Kyunki tum hi meri duniya ho………Arohi, tum paas hoti ho to aisa lagta hai jaise maine apni poori duniya jeet li. Arohi………….Tumne ek din mujhse kaha tha ke tumhe chot pahuchane ka haq sirf mujhe hai. Lekin, jo kuch bhi maine kiya, wo anjaane mein kiya……………Tumhe chot pahuchakar maine khud us chot ka dard tumse zyada mehsoos kiya 😭

hai…………….Tumhe aansoon 😭dekar……………..tumhari aankhon mein aansoon dekhkar…………..main har us aansoon ke saath maraa hoon………….Pal-Pal har pal main maine maut ko mehsoos kiya hai…………Arohi…………..😭

omg ! is that ur 1st attempt? it was great. i loved it.keep it up.

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Lavi

@arjuhi_love_lav

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Posted: 16 years ago

#88

@ tulli - LUVD LUVD LUVD READING UR POST!!! sply the first few para's!! 🤗 im so happy the creatives are showing a new side of arohi....mayb a side we never saw or mayb a side which is tryin to HOPE for the love that waz Long lost.... ( 5months 😆) i think there is still that hope for punji lingerin in her......😊

@Anut - thnkz 4r the song buddy!! n luvd ur take oon the story!! i luvd reading it soo how i want it to cme out in the shoW!!! 😍 VG plz read the stroy! ( but read it a bit late 😳will try 2 add it 2 da stroy)

@ Aditi- Grt song buddy!! luvd it.....but if your hearts are close physical distances do not matter....I hope during this phase there is no MU...just some majboori - LUVD reading this part of the post....made me realise that THERE is still a little hope for arohi's love for arjun....but then again i dnt wanna gt my hoopes HIGH UP and then see them shaatter AGAIN!!!

@Manisha - awww....luvd the pic's u've left me IMAGINEING!! 😍😍😍 NOW IM REALLY wanting this monday's epi to be A SUPER SOMVAR ONE!!!😍 a good somvaar one!! 😆 n sanchi in FB i neva new!! 😲😲😆 COOL!! thnks buddy!! hope it makes her give us a SUPER EPI on monday....😃

@ K - ahhh i like that song it reminds me of Harshadd!! jus caz i saw him sing that song wen it waz raning!!😆😆 daz all!! 😳 n the height!! SAME THOUGHT HERE!! luv the diff!! sply wen they hug!! her ears r right on his heart....listening to IT!!

@Sheetal - vry well written - i was like!! 😳 wen i read this.....This is my first experience, so I hope everyone likes it. 👏 LUV IT 2 bits!! perfect dialouges perfect responses just!!! PERFECT!! 👏👏🤗

@ Mehr!! - new name??? New account huh?😉😉 i like it!! 😃

Lavi..x

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sheetal6

@sheetal6

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Posted: 16 years ago

#89

@tibs: Thanks a lot for liking it.

@arshiyaa: yes, it is my 1^st attempt. I have written it for the first time. Thanks for the compliment.

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