ff ~*~kitani mohabbat hai ~*~last part on pg no 5 - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
#11
Amazing start Mariyam....can't wait to read wats next..
Do continue soon..
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Posted: 16 years ago
#12
m so happy that u guys liked this,thanku so much
so here is next part.................


arjun cant believe his eyes ,arohi......................
arohi with tears in her eyes come near to arjun.............
& they looks eachother
ganga : i'm sorry arjun ,mein ne sab kuch arohi ko bataya ,mein nahi chaahti ki arohi us galat fahmi ki saath jeeye aur zindagi bar tume nafrat karte rahe.............isiliye
arjun was speechless ,he can't believe dat arohi is standing infront of him
arohi : so mr arjun punj,kaisa raha aapka jail ka safar,aap apne aapko kya samajh ke raka hai,kya aap yehdikhana chahthi thi ki aap apne pyaar ke khatir jail tak gayi,ya aap yeh saabith karna chahthi thi ki aapko mujhse kitni muhabbat hai ,haan...........
she paused for a while..........
meri khatir yahaan jail mein 3 saal ,kabhi mere barein mein socha hai
arjun : arohi mein..........
arohi : ''plz ,aaj aap kuch nahi bolenge , mein kahoongi aur aap sunenge................
meri galthi hai ,mein kabhi aapki dil ko samajh nahi paaya ,mein hamesha aapko hi galat samjha,mein.....
her ters burst into sob,she grope 4 d words
yeh zindagi toh aapki amaanath tha ,warna mein kab ka mar gaye hote ,aapne mujhe doosra janam diya,mujhe phirse apni paav mein khadi hone ki himmat diya , aurmeri sapne bhi poora kiya,aaj mein jo bhi ho woh aap ki mehnat hai ..............badle mein meri wajah se aapki zindagi ka 3 saal jail mein beeth gaya..........aapne yeh saabith kardiya ki aapko kitni mohabbat hai ,par mein................''
she stops for a while
''mein nahi jaanthi ki meri gunah maafi ki laayak hai ya nahi ,nahi jaanthi ki kis mooh se mein aapse maafi mangoo,ho sake toh maaf kijiye,plz forgive me............aap bahut achi insaan ho,aur mein aapko khona nahi chahthi.....................''
she fall down to his leg & cried...........
arjun : arohi yeh tum kya kar rahi ho ,isme tumaari koi galti nahi ,meine tume galath samjha tha , m sorry ,mein tume bahut pyaar karti hoon,aur hamesha karte rahoongi......mein tumse apna jaan se bhi zyaada pyaar karthi hoon ,aur tumaare liye apna jaan bhi denge ,bas itni mohabbat hain
they hugged,he kissed her forehead...............
ganga rai wipes her tears and said : excuse me , yahaan koi aur bhi hai...................
arjun and arohi smiled
arohi : thank you ,mujhe meri arjun ko milane keliye
ganga : its my duty
gaurav :waise bahut baat hogayi , hamaari shaadi ka theyariyaan bhi karna hai,ganga i think we should leave now
ganga , : haan gaurav ,acha ab hum chalte hain,all d best aur haan shaadi mein zaroor aana ,tumare liye mein apni shaadi postponed kiya hai
arjun smiled ,ya sure,zaroor
ganga & gaurav gone & they looked dem for a second............
then arohi said................
toh punji saab,ab kya plann hai
arjun : oh excuseme ,kya kaha tumne,phirse kaho
arohi : punji
arjun : (in a deceitful angry) how dare u to call me so,haan mein tumaari bose hoon ,mind it
arohi : oh really
they laughed
arohi : acha ab ghar chalo u have another surprise
arjun : another surprise ,lagtha hai aaj toh surprise ki baarish hai
arohi : bas,bas ,ghar chale,wahaan sab hamaari intzaar kar rahe hogi
arjun ,ok lets go

to be continued......................

so guyss how is it ,plz post ur commends😛
take care

mariyam😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#13
yaara........i luvd it!!!..... i hope in d show too.......sumthing lik dis happen....😍...very well written!!!.......⭐️
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Posted: 16 years ago
#14
awww that was really sweet i loved it thank you for the update
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Posted: 16 years ago
#15
do continue soooooooon loving it
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Posted: 16 years ago
#16
awe, how cute was that? really liked it.
i hope this is what happens in the show, sort of.
ganga reuniting them...
but great part, continue soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#17
loving it. hope we can this soon in the show.

can't see them apart.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#18
Hey Mariyam..Great part...
i think they shud show sth like this in the show too..tht Ganga reunite Arjuhi..
Continue soon...
Kim
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Posted: 16 years ago
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sory guys ,m little late 😭
i feel very happy that u guys liked d second part too ,thank u so much
so here is d third part ,do commends😛

p&m mansion
arjun and arohi get down frm d car ,arjun looks his home for a moment , he remembered his childhood,his youth & d time he spent with his dad their, arohi put her hand on his shoulder........
arohi : kya soch rahe ho,andhar chale.....
arjun : haan
p&m house were decorated ,arjun was very confused,there were arjun & arohi's whole family member,arjun feel very happy to see his family after a long time
when arjun enterd d house , savitha said,: ek minute (den to dhondu) aarthi ki taali leke aao ,3 saal ki baad mere beta ghar waapas aarahi ho............after that
savitha: tume pata hai arjun,tumaari bina meine kise jiya,bahut miss kiya tume ,kaise ho beta
arjun: m fine mom ,then he bowed & touch her feet
dk : how r u arjun
arjun : fine dad
dk : mein maanthi hoon mein tumaari saath bahut bade anyay kiye hai ,meine tum dono ko alag kiya tha,i feel very guilty son, kya tum mujhse maaf nahi karenge
arjun : no dad,mujhe kisise koi shikayath nahi hai dad,i love u dad
they hugged ,then he met paddy,mohan
nikhil & aman : bhai,he hugged dem too
arjun:kaise ho
aman: fine,humne aapko bahut miss kiya
antara : sorry.........mein aur sur aapse bahut rudely baath kiye the,really sorry
sur : haan ,aapne di ki kitni madad ki,par hum toh aapko hamesha galath samjha,very sory
arjun :nahi,isme tum logo ki koi galti nahi hai , haalaath hi kuch aisa tha ki..leave it
hp: kaise ho beta
arjun:m fine uncle,aapki tabiyath kaise hai
hp : teek hoon,tumne hamare liye jo bhi kiya uskeliye thank u kehna bahut choti baath hai,phir bhi shukriya beta (he folded his hands)
arjun: nahi uncle: meine jo kuch bhi kiya hai.apni khushi keliye kiye hai
then he noticed dat salil was standing in a corner , he seemed very disputed
arjun : hey salil ,tum wahaan kyun khade ho,apne dost se nahi milenge
salil : are tu jaa arjun ,naa hi mujhe tumse milna hai aur nahi koi baath karna hai
arjun :are isse kya hua ,listen salil.......
salil : tum jaane se pehle mujhse milna zaroori nahi samjha na ?jaa , mujhe tumaari koi baath nahi sunna hai
arjun : oh yeh baath hai,sorry yaar, us waqt meri samne sirf ek hi maksad tha , apna galthi sudaarne ko, haan yeh meri galti hai,mujhe tumse milna chaahiye tha,sorry
salil keep mum
arjun : ok,toh mujhe bhi tumse koi baath nahi karna hai
salil : arjun,sorry yaar
arjun smiled & hugged salil
waise where is purvi
salil : lo . tere peeche hai
arjun turn back, purvi with a baby in her hand was smiling
arjun : yeh baby kiska hai
salil : yahaan toh abhi mere shaadi hua naa ,toh yeh meri bache hoga na ?
arjun : what a surprise
purvi gives her baby to arjun
arjun : how sweet,bilkul tumaari jaisa hai,salil ,waise naam kya hai baby ka
purvi : arjun
arjun looks @ purvi with surprise
arjun : what
salil : haan , bas ek hi darr hai kahi yeh bhi nladkiyon se nafrat kare
everyone laughed
arjun : natasha nahi hai yahaan pe
mohan : woh uski shaadi hui hai karan singh ki saath , abhi woh dono apni honeymoon keliye gaye hai
arjun : waise dad , yahaan kyu sajaaya hai ,aaj baby arjun ka b'day hai kya
dk : nahi , aaj bade arjun ki shaadi hai
arjun looks his dad
dk : meine tum dono ko alag karvaya tha,abhi mein hi tumaari shaadhi karvaoongi,waise time baahut kam hai ,chalo dono taiyaar ho jaaoo ,be quick
arjun looks at arohi,she blushed

to be continued

so guys, how is dis part,hope u liked
well the last part of dis ff 'll post very soon ,plz post ur views
thank u

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Posted: 16 years ago
#20
awww how cute waiting for d next part...

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